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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon really nice loved it
thank you 4 the pm really sorry
4 the late comment really sorry
i really loved ur fff update soon
me eagerly waiting 4 ur next update
u r the great writter hat's of you
lovely update love you
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update anii...
Manveer scene to sweet jab uday manyata ko vishvas dilata hai...
Bt uday play politics...
Anyways gr8 update love it
thanks 4 pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Annesha di, how u?
Wow, awesome update
Thanks for the pm
Sorry for the late reply
So glad Manyata is not planning on betraying Uday
Wonder what Uday is up to
Is he playing politic or is he just trying to win his love
Loved how Uday understood what she meant and made her believe that he won't do anything to her out of her will
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next update
Edited by humairaa1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

writer note: hey all i am back with my bleeding heart , i have a plan twist it into recarniation and start with the manveer of this era sorry lips sealed about the further plans so do say me if you all agree to it or else i shall will be ending it on a simple note in a few chapters like i always do . so enjoy the 8th chapter of bleeding heart and the next update is a suprise the date will not be revealed


chapter 8

The winds softly blew over the kingdom , the birds crippled in the sky , the palace smelled of fresh flowers , as the smell from the royal kitchen tempted all , the servants were in a hustle fustle as today was the reception of their new King and Queen , everything had to be prepare before the sun raises up in the sky , the pundits did their part and all the preparation for the yagya was done as well as the servants all the food item for the feast were prepared as the dawn broke out in the kingdom , the sun rose high in the sky lightening the entire kingdom , manyata was the first to wake up she turned aside to look at the sleeping uday , he looked so cute his mouth was half open as a smile crept in her face as she collected her clothes and along with the maids made her way to the pond in the palace garden while the maids hide her she took a holy bath offering prayers to the sun god this was the custom of a married Queen , after that she was taken to parlor and dressed beautifully in an blue and white gagra choli with heavy jewels on each part of her body but the things that advanced her beauty was her sindoor and the magalsutra dancing on her neck finally she was taken down to the temple , uday was already there with a white dhoti and bare chest , he looked like a greek god , his perfect body made each girl drool on him along with the maids , manyata herself could not hide the little blush in her face , and she seated herself beside him , the fire of the yagya reflected there face as there mouth parted away together to chant the prayers

Asato maa sad-gamaya

Tamaso maa jyotir-gamayaa

M?ityor-maa-m?itam gamaya

Om shaanti? shaanti? shaanti?

Lead us from Untruth to Truth, from Darkness to Light, from Death to Immortality. Om peace, peace, peace

And the very next moment the priest took uday hands and placed it above manyata 's as they offered milk to the holy fire and ended the yagya after it as over manyata was taken by maids to the kitchen while uday stayed back to donate clothes among the poor and needy ones of his society , as manyata headed to the kitchen today was the first day she would prove herself as a capable wife as she had to prepare the lunch entire , she was given the gift of nature she excelled in cooking and each person in the court , appreciated her , but her entire attention was towards her husband , who was too indulge in her beauty and rarely paid any attention to her , but his appreciation bloomed her heart , she proved in all aspect of wife as days passed by , her feeling for uday grew stronger and stronger , she could feel her life shaping up by the presence of this loving husband but she was blind to the typhoon coming on her way and finally the day arrived when she would face the first shock of her life , she was passing through the court when she saw a unidentified body lying while other ministers and uday too was discussing over it , she could not control her urge and asked sujamal who was passing by it was then that she knew the body was of her lover avendra , but the fact that alarmed her was that in the darkness of the night he came with the rival kingdom 's army to attack uday but fortunately his strengthen army at the frontier was capable of defeating them and but of the soldier managed to escape and those were caught were killed , she was totally broken not by thought that avendra was killed but she wondered what would have happened if her uday was to die … she went back to her room as she sat on her bed and tears rolled down her eyes , she was completely scattered and broken by the thought , as uday returned in the night just to watch his princess crying , her eyes were swollen up and he could feel her broken , his heart cried watching her so , he was succeeded in his plan the game of power was won he himself paid the rival kingdom to trap avendra and kill him but never did he think that it would end up breaking his beloved heart as he headed towards her and cupped her face asking

UDAY:what happened princess why are you crying my beloved

MANYATA:I was wondering what if today I lost you that thought is haunting me

She said as all her inner feeling emerged through her hug , she did not let even an inch of space through them , she was scared of losing him as she said in soft sobs

MANYATA:I love you uday and I cannot afford to loose you

He felt his ears ringing. He hugged her back with equal passion she loved him , it was like finding heaven in earth , finally his love was accepted by his beloved there was nothing more he wanted from life except for staying this way forever but the moment was short lived as she looked up at him and asked

MANYATA:why are you not answering me uday? What happened don't you love me?

He looked at her face and her cute innocent expression an evil inside him arose as he could not help but play prank on her as he left her soft shivering body and started to walk back and front as he said trying hard to suppress him laugh

UDAY:I am sorry princess I do not feel the same for you anymore the distance between us have lessen our love ……or maybe I do not love you anymore

He looked back at her she had that sweet smile on her face as she said

MANYATA:if my husband do not love me than it is a shame on me and I have no rights to live

Saying this she held took out the sword from the wall and flung it towards her stomach , uday was fast as he snatched the sword and threw it away and took her into his embrace he could feel her shivering as he caressed her hair to ease her but it was useless as she continued to sobs he looked at her , his eyes piercing into hers as he said

UDAY:I am sorry to hurt you I was just playing a prank I love you and never in my life will there be anyone else it was you and always will be you my beloved princess since the time I open my eyes till I close it all I want is to see you , all I want to feel is only you my love has no limits princess I love you so never think of ever giving up your life as it a part of your life your heart belong to me so I too have rights on your love and you have no rights to toy with it

She kept quite for a long time as finally she said

MANYATA:I am sorry uday

UDAY;sorry for what my princess

MANYATA:for hiding about avendra he was the person I loved

UDAY:I am aware of that princess

MANYATA:but how….

UDAY:I am a king for me none secrets are hidden and specially when it comes to my wife

MANYATA:but I swear now it is only you whom I love and no one else will ever be in my heart

UDAY:but I need a prove

MANYATA:what kind of prove?

UDAY:you need to pass my test of love

Saying this he carried her into his arms to the king size bed to complete there married life


done with this chappy
please do forgive me for my mistakes
do hit the tiny like button
it won't burn your fingure
no res box

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice written
really sorry 4 the res box
i broke my lappy that's why
but maybe u dont like
but trust me i give res only 4 1st comment
otherwise i m sorry really really
nice update good written work
thinking all really awsome
thank you 4 the pm
pls pm me next update 4 sure
really nice story intresting
update soon i m waiting 4 next update
sorry again 4 res box..
bye
Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

unres it or no more up[dates of this story 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Annesha
well written
I would like to read more of this story
whether you write it as a reincarnation or any other way
i dont mind
the decision is yours
any way is fine with
thank you for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update Anni. Loved it loads. I don't really care about the truth about how Avendra died , I'm just happy he's gone😈. Awww, Manyata has admitted her love for Uday😳😳. Enjoyed how he teased her that he's not in love with her anymorešŸ˜‰. So , next is the consummation huh?ā˜ŗļø ... I can't wait . Do continue SOON😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii baby sister
hw r u baby
awsssmmm update as usuall
manyata nw love uday yippeee i m damn happy
avendra is killed i m happyyy ( I KNW I M EVIL )
yippeee we r going to have a hot updateee soonnn
no thanks for pm its ur duty
love u babyyy muuuaaahhh

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