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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow gr8 update anii
manveer scene ws so cute n nice
love it
thanks fr pm n update soon


thank you so much
awn it was my duty
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...loved manveer scene...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...loved manveer scene...and thanks for pm...


i am glad that you liked it
awn there is no need for thank it is my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!
i'm sorry for the replying late
but i really loved it
it was just awesome, superb
manveer scenes were cute
please do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

hey!
i'm sorry for the replying late
but i really loved it
it was just awesome, superb
manveer scenes were cute
please do update soon


thank you so much
it is ok
glad you liekd it
awn it was my duty
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Aneesha...
I am really sorry...
For this very very very very late comment...
I have to give lots of apoligies to you...
I just love all your stories...
And I am not able to read it...
Every time I get an email notify for your pm...
I feel so happy...
And then when I am not able to read it...
I feel so disheartened...
Anyways..
The chappy was superb...
Manyata is fine...
What a old age college...
The description was really funny...
Uday was sitting beside Manyata...
He gave a really good advice...
Becahri ritz...
Hope she is fine...
Tha last line was the best...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 3

I stood by my window watching the several stars blinking at me. It was a clear night with cold winds hitting my body every now and then. As my thoughts ran back to the class room to him, I watched him smile at me, today was the most strangest day of my life, firstly meeting him in the classroom and then all of a sudden rits falling of the stair and of course the voice. My mind is completely tangled as the deeper I think of the voice the more I feel myself getting confused it was indeed not a very good day for rits she fractured her leg and will not be attending the school for the next few weeks mean I will be completely isolated, Puja s voice broke into my thoughts it was dinner time, as keeping all thoughts at the back of head I went down for dinner. My favorite food was on the menu thought I did not have any mood to eat but still for their happiness I faked an excitement and looked happy munching the food. After diner I thought of revising some of my lesson but as soon I opened my history book I was studying about the most strongest kingdom of that time "Pratabh Dynasty" it last ruler gave up his kingdom and committed suicide, this chapter indeed caught my interest I wondered why would a strong king ever give up his kingdom so many question filled my mind as I failed to realize when sleep had over taken me I do not know when but my eyes fell heavy and I slept.

My eyes had an urge to open as I opened but found myself in middle of a jungle, my feet touched the wet grass and a chill winter wind blew across the land like a sleepwalker I walked towards the ravine, and what I saw was very unusual there were people ...many people all dressed richly in gold and in olden types dress, most of the crowd was men. A chill shiver ran down my spine watching the men glazes I was hell scared, my knees had already started to shake and I became all sweaty. There was a huge idol of Lord Shiva and some women washed the idol with milk while the pundit performed his Puja. Suddenly I watched a man giving me dead glares as all the other heads turned towards me to I knew there was no point standing there I need to run away the faster the better I ran as fast as my leg could take me sharp thorn hurt my legs but I really cared less I stopped but only when I got dashed with a figure, his face was not clearly visible but all he said was very clear to me

"Do not let the past repeat itself"

With a start my eyes were open, it was a dream I kept assuring myself I went to washroom and washed away my face, nightmares were usual but this dream I had never seen, something was definitely wrong what did all that mean? A thought played in my mind maybe it was too unrealistic but it did make a little sense to me since the very first day I meet with this UDAY my life seemed to take an unusual round I mean firstly the accident and even today rits falling off and that too I had just mentioned to him earlier that I did not want to hang around with him so could that mean... I snapped my forehead for letting my thoughts go so wild it was indeed none of uday business maybe it was all just a coincidence and nothing more. As for the dream I think I should visit a doctor as I was definitely going mad that night I did not dare to sleep alone I sneaked softly to Puja and Rajesh room. I knocked as Puja opened it I said meekly

MANYATA: can I sleep with you mom?

PUJA: sure bacha come...

She led me inside as I tugged myself right in middle of Puja and Rakesh, Puja caressed my cheek and made me fall asleep

The next morning I got into my puma tee and Levis jeans as I had got the permission from the principal to dress like this. I had already made up my mind that I would visit the doctor right after my college I parked my car in the place as I walked in the corridor today I reached earlier as I did not want to get a piece of mind from Prof. Suraj again. I walked looking down failing to realize the person coming from the other side, and it resulted me with a BANG. I lost my balance and crumbled down on the floor, I settled my hair from my face as I looked at the person passing by me without even saying a sorry my blood began to boil as I stood up and said scornfully yet loudly

MANYATA: can't you say sorry

He turned back; he was into kurta and a faded jean as he said with an evil grin

ZAIN: Why shall I say sorry it was you who dashed with me seems like you have buttons instead of those eyes...

I could not control my anger as I pointed my figure towards him and said

MANYATA: how dare you say that to me?

He took my figure and twisted it while I cried in pain and he said with a victorious smile

ZAIN: no one talks to Zain that way you GOT THAT

He left my hands and walked away I looked at him horrified I mean how can someone be so tacky and rude, but not giving it much thought I marched to my class I sat with as I looked beside , he was already there. But my eyes was filled with anger to notice anyone as he snapped my thoughts and asked

UDAY: what happen you do not look in a good mood?

MANYATA: no one will be in a good mood if there day have started this way

He smiled at me as he rested his head back and asked me coolly

UDAY: so what is the matter?

I looked at him and without even giving it a second thought narrated the entire incident I accepted him to be angry or even say a word against that boy but he remained calm and replied

UDAY: Do not think about it just forget it this thing happens and moreover it is not a good thing to mess with seniors

My anger reached its highest point and I mean how can he support that person, aftermath the entire day I resembled silent I did not want to speak to a person who did not care much. He tried to talk but I entirely ignored it as at the end of the classes I collected my things to leave and was about to walk off when he got hold of my hand and said to me

UDAY: do not worry what comes around goes around... he will pay for his behavior now please don't be angry come let me drop you home

MANYATA: No thanks I do not need your help I can go all alone

I was still mad at him as I walked away from him, I went to the gate of the campus the parking lot was on the other side, but as I was going to cross the road a car from nowhere hit a guy I looked closer and watched the guy was Zain, his hands was badly wounded as Uday s words rang in my minds


done with this chappy
please do forgive me for my mistakes
do hit the tiny like button
it won't burn your figure
no res box
30+ likes for the next update😈


Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yupiee! First to comment

Wow, Wow, Wow


Uday took the revenge for Manyata's condition. AWWW!


Loved the chappy Annie, that nightmare surely was a reminder to Manyata but the poor girl failed to notice it!


Do update asap as this one is getting more and more interesting!
Edited by nishaya... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey anni the update was fab
i wonder what happen in the past that uday sucide
thank god uday took the revenge from that zain
thankxx for pm
update soon

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