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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

hey sry for late update

the update was nice
i wounder y did bridraj bow down in front of uday
somthing is fishy
i want to see nw what manyata does
and avendra god knows what he is going to do


noo it is ok no probs
thank you so much
as it was a way to show respect to the superior most
thank you so much

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome really loved it... so brig annoucened that manyata is going to get married to uday... will anwar try and stop the wedding from happening as he really doesnt want his sister to get married to uday please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome really loved it... so brig annoucened that manyata is going to get married to uday... will anwar try and stop the wedding from happening as he really doesnt want his sister to get married to uday please update soon and thanks for the pm


i am glad you liked it
lips sealed about your question
no need it was duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
witter note: hey all firstly i wish you all a very happy week ahead i am back with the fourth chapter of bleeding heart firstly i am sorry as this chappy will have NO manveer secondly as my rule follows next update on 12th july and only if my second condition there are 20likes and while you all read this chappy here is the background music please listen to it while reading a more clear concept of this chappy will be visible
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=64iU8HbOpBQ

chapter 4

it was the wood yonder , behind the palace , dawn would soon be breaking , everything was long since asleep , only Maharaja Uday Veer Pratabh Singh was still awake , he was walking up and down crushing the tiny grass beneath his legs , a smile was plastered to his face and his eyes sparkled with joy , the memories of the night whizzed through his thoughts , how beautiful his princess looked today , her skin glowing in that bright color and her beautiful face , she looked even more beautiful when she gets scared , his minds were captured by her thoughts , and as unknown to himself his cheek turned red and his could not sweep off the smile from his face , no matter what he said but the smile was always there and after decades he was smiling from heart as he strolled to the abandoned room of the palace , the long corridor ended in that room , it once belonged to his parents but after their death , it was locked by him , never did he want to open it up as with the door many pains would also release but tonight he feared none the only thing he said before unlocking the door was

"even my princess have the right to see her in laws"

The door opened to a dark , dirty room filled with spider webs and dust as he lighted the room with his candle light , the lights splashed on the big oil portrait of his mother and father , they looked so majestic and his mother so beautiful and so heavenly as he moved closer he observed something that shook him off guards , he rarely recalled his parents face but today he got a pleasant surprise his mother had the same eyes as that of his princess he caressed her face as flashes of all the childhood days came to his mind , his mother love and his father 's care , he felt like being in the warm embrace of his mother but the very next moment a horrifying scene of his parents battered to dead and a pool of blood came to his mind as he came out of the illusion , tears swelled in his eyes as he looked at the portraid he never let his eyes get wet but today he knew he needed to lighten his heart he needed to forget his past to have good memories of his present as he took the portrait and hugged it with all his force and wepped like a small kid , in middle of his sobs he said

UDAY:you know mom today I got the girl I love she is very good , so innocent yet so brave she is manyata the youngest princess of devgarh but that is not what attracted me , the first night I met her was on the forest and will you believe she nearly took risk of her life for a man eating tiger , every time we encounter her anger sparks the love I have for her in my heart I hope you was here to see her , I would never get a better partner than her and you know she has the same eyes that you have mom her eyes speaks the words her lips try to hide and soon after this month I will wed her and bring her to my palace as my WIFE

In the palace as Maharaja Bridgraaj was seated in his throne as anwar strolled in the room , his anger boiling in him as he asked

ANWAR:I do not understand why father ? why are you letting that creep jerk marry my sister ? don't you know what kind of person he is? Father did you even think once about manyata before taking this decision

BRIDGRAAJ:I did and it was only because if I rejected his option than he would kill all of us and get my daughter and that would make the matter even worse all I did was to save you all

ANWAR:father you are saving us by murdering my sister what kind of deal is that?

BRIDRAAG:try to understand Maharaj Uday Veer Pratabh Singh loves her a lot and that is what we need to save manyata

ANWAR:what do you mean?

BRIDGRAAG:she will marry him but work for us , he is blinded with her love and she has nothing but hatred she will be our spy and inform us and when the right time comes she will stroke him and kill him after that the whole Jaigarh estate will be our we will be the most powerful kingdom in the nation

ANWAR:I cannot imagine father you are dragging my sister into this political game just for your benefit have you any idea what he I will do if he found the truth

BRIDGRAAJ:I know but I am left with no other option the very first time he announced his interest for manyata he made it clear if I dare to reject he will kill us use her and make her life leaving hell his love will be better than his hatred

ANWAR:that means we are helpless

Manyata sat on the window looking up at the dull , mist filled sky , she felt shifled , bored and frustrated '..she was so frustrated she even wanted to cry , as the only reason was that monster udayveer at the very thought of her marriages scared her to death , it meant now the rest of her life she was left with no option but to spend her entire life , her each day and night , her each hour and minute with that ruthless king , she had to give him all prevailages of a husband and that meant she had to give her soul and her body to let him play with it , then destroy it , hot tears flooded her eyes , her sisters were helpless as dabyanti pulled her for a stronf embrace as she cried and avantika said

AVANITKA:please stop crying manyata we all are helpless in front of the laws of nature

MANYATA:how can you tell that avantika jijisa it is me here whose dreams and love is getting crushed

DABYANTI:we can understand manyata that you loved avendra but now you are claimed by Maharaj Uday Veer Pratabh Singh

MANYATA:claimed'.. for heaven sake I am a human not any property dabyanti jijisa

MADHUXI:manyata stop crying it is not the time to cry instead a time to act you love avendra confess about your feeling and condition and I am sure he has feeling for you let him murder that king and then you will be only his and things will get back right

DABYANTI AND AVANTIKA:that is an awesome plan actually

A smile crept in all face as manyata mood was lighted up their was a hope for her happiness they all dispersed as manyata sat down on her bed to express her feeling in the paper , that avendra would receive and she was sure that she would get rescuced but what it the same plan nature had for her? A piece of paper could destroy a word are not like sparrows if it flies one cannot catch it ever again..


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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
...awesome...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

OMG OMG bridgraaj thinking Politics..🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢
Oh god how could he think of getting her daughter married and then through her hands he is planning to make her a widow😡😡😡😡😡..
How could he...He by now knows Uday loves Manyata and he is just trying to take advantage..

oh god in this state Manyata will surely do his father's order as she too see a devil in him..😕😕😕😕

I just hope she realises his love and forgives him turning him to a nice king rather than a devil..🥱

If manyata tries to act smart Uday is surely gonna be a deathly devil...🤢🤢🤢
As of letter and avendra sorry but iam not interested as i know Avi will loss her 😳and he will be the next throne in Uday's path..

Love weakens a person and i hope Uday turns out to be good not weak😕😕😕😕

continue soon thanks for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

...awesome...👏
am glad you liked it twino


OMG OMG bridgraaj thinking Politics..🤢
after all he is a KING too
Oh god how could he think of getting her daughter married and then through her hands he is planning to make her a widow😡..
yes but uday treathened him , he fear to loose his daughter so this is the better way he do not want his daughter killed and as he said uv love is better than his hatred
How could he...He by now knows Uday loves Manyata and he is just trying to take advantage..
yes just the way uday takes advantage of his power and position

oh god in this state Manyata will surely do his father's order as she too see a devil in him..😕
she is innocent and will remain so the plan will revolve around her but she will be aware of it herself

I just hope she realises his love and forgives him turning him to a nice king rather than a devil..🥱
aha that he is a long way hahahahaha

If manyata tries to act smart Uday is surely gonna be a deathly devil...🤢🤢🤢
uday is over possesive and any of her trick will poke his anger which will not be good for her
As of letter and avendra sorry but iam not interested as i know Avi will loss her 😳and he will be the next throne in Uday's path..
yes he is a thorn but will grow up soon a cactus hahhaha

Love weakens a person and i hope Uday turns out to be good not weak😕
his love strenghten him

continue soon thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii baby sister


hws u


love it to the core


brijraj is evil as usualyy


he wanna make manyata widow by her own hands


feel bad for uday about his parents


no thanks 4 pm


love u baby muuuaaahhh


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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome anii!!!
awe Uday cried felt bad!!!
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it anni

hope manyata turn uday to a nice person.

i hate bridg for his politics.

continue soon.

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