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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautiful concept anni. Uday is so cruel and heartless.
I loved the way the contrast between the leads were shown.
One is a distroyer and the other a saviour.
The cs was also nice. Cant wait to read more

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: andy.a
Beautiful concept anni. Uday is so cruel and heartless.
I loved the way the contrast between the leads were shown.
One is a distroyer and the other a saviour.
The cs was also nice. Cant wait to read more

thank you so much
yes he is very evil
ahh thank youu
yea will try to begin asap

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Prerna

@Lovelydrops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice cs nd prologue...pls continue soon...nd thnx for pm...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa
nice cs nd prologue...pls continue soon...nd thnx for pm...

thank you so mucch

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snowdream

@snowdream

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

reserved board lagane aayi thi ...vaise abhi iski zaroorat nahi...😆

it was nice 😊

Uday is really a devil in this😲

and waiting forward to see how this women hunter gets his prey Manyata😕

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey... This is just the type of concept I wanted to read or write...

Uday is a ruthless emperor...

Manyata is a sweet princess...

OMG... annabh itne sare characters ek hi story mein...

It was very interesting...

Please update soon...

And thanx for the pm..

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey... This is just the type of concept I wanted to read or write...
Uday is a ruthless emperor...
Manyata is a sweet princess...
OMG... annabh itne sare characters ek hi story mein...
It was very interesting...
Please update soon...
And thanx for the pm..

awn thank you
yes a very ruthless
yea a cuttie pie
my name annesha but you can me cal that also
thank you
i will try

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Nice prologue !

Very interesting ...

The character

Why is Uday always so ruthless and rude ? 😆

I liked Avendra's character !

Continue soon ...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: catty2000
Nice prologue !
Very interesting ...
The character
Why is Uday always so ruthless and rude ? 😆
I liked Avendra's character !
Continue soon ...

thank you
coz ruthless guy loves indensely and madly
thank you