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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Superb update Anni , felt bad for Simba😭. Hope Manyata can save herself. Dying to read more , update soon, ... thanx 4 the PM😊.


thank you barfi jiji
so do i
she won't be able to save herself
thank you so much
don't thank its my duty
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: huma12.

hiii sis

hey hunney bunney

itsss awsssmmm as usualll

thank you

uday killed simbaaa (u remind me of my childhood LION KING )

same here but jiji simba dad was killed by his uncle na

uday is sooo evill


yes he is very evil

hw can uday take manyata after knwing that she is a princess he had no fear

he is more powerful than her dad and he is fearless

is he going to rape manyata

lips sealed about it

ove the updateee


thank you

no thanks for PM as i said before its ur duty


yes i know

updateee as soonn as possible cant wait for it

aha no date is given hhahahah



love u my puff pastry



love you too my hunney bunney

u was right the LIKE button didn't burn my fingure trust me


thank you for such a colour ful comment i can't help laughing hahahah it really dnt burn your hands r u sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
oh no,uday killed the tiger,😭😭 i jst hope manyata can escape or uday has sme conscience and dsnt claim her body in a frceful way,bcoz dat is nt at all accptable!!!! will be waitng for ur nxt part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hey... thank god u updated...
It was awesome...
Uday is so danm arrogant...
I loved the way he held Manyata...
It was clear ki he is doing that " U R MINE" look again...
Haww... Manyata slapped Uday...
But it was natural...
Iske baad toh I am desperately waiting for the next one...
Thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: pia.raha

oh no,uday killed the tiger,😭😭 i jst hope manyata can escape or uday has sme conscience and dsnt claim her body in a frceful way,bcoz dat is nt at all accptable!!!! will be waitng for ur nxt part😊


yes he did kill simba she won't be able to escape , no uday won't change too thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... thank god u updated...

It was awesome...
Uday is so danm arrogant...
I loved the way he held Manyata...
It was clear ki he is doing that " U R MINE" look again...
Haww... Manyata slapped Uday...
But it was natural...
Iske baad toh I am desperately waiting for the next one...
Thanx for the pm...


haha my previous one got deleted
thank you
yes he is evil
haha like a dead wild animal after hunts over
yes
she had to
ok thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
omg that was so awesome!!!!!
huh this evil Uday
I hate this side of him!!!!
poor Simba!!!
wat was his mistake???
I just hope manyata changes this cold hearted evil with her love!!!
update soon!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ..FARIHA..

superb updates
thnxxx for the link yar
nice wrtten waiting for next chapter
lovely written uday manyata awsome
1st chapter was great
fast fast post next chapter kk
lovely written liked it...🤗

hugxx🤗

by...take care😃



thank you
no it was my duty
ok will post only after 20 likes and on the date given
thankl you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Hey di 🤗
How are you ?
Thank you for updating this SS !
I have been waiting for it for long ...

Nice update !
Perfectly written 👏
Great start ...

Manyata and Simba sequence was cute 😳
He seems cute and FEROCIOUS !
And she seems to be quite a brave one ...
I mean petting a LION ... 😆

Manveer meeting was SPARKY as usual ... 😆
Uday is the same FULL - OF - HIMSELF - MAN ... 😉

He killed Simba ... 😲
That's sad ... 😭
He is very cruel and ruthless ...

The last part left me shocked !
Hope she can save herself !

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !


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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: snowdream

OMG that was awesome anni...👏

The main thing that caught me was the way you described the nature...haha nature took over the hunter Prince Uday😆😆😆...
yes nature was very much needed for this ss i am glad you liked it

And then Manyata hayyy she has a pet lion😃..OMG such a brave yet innocent yet lovely princess she is👍🏼👍🏼.👍🏼.and Simba is a lovely cute name...😳...
yes coz she could understand that he attack in defence and yea got from lion king

Now whats this again evil took over Uday..He killed a harless animal...Infact simba would have attacked him if Manyata haven't stopped him but still he mercilessly killed Simba not even waiting for Manyata to react..😲😲😲
yes he would have stopped but he is so evil uday hates naybody more powerfull than him, he is heart less

But this evil prince is perhaps gonna face the greatest challenge further in the form of Manyata. She would kill herself thn falling in front of him😕😕😕...Hope she manages to run away safeguarding her, but even then he is gonna hunt his newly found favourite prey
yes he is or maybe she will kill him hahaha no she won't be able to escape

update soon

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