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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice update ani...
Manyata behaviour towrd uday nt gud...
So sad fr uday he ws nt knw about manyata nightmark
manveer sce nice...

N sory fr late comment anii becoz im bussy to my exm prepration i hope u undstand...
Anii wy r u end this ss realy it ws so gud n interasting story
pls dont end this story do cntinue to ur reader...

Thanks fr pm n update soon


thank you jiji
yes but it had a reason too
but you will not feel sympthy for uday after a few chappy
thank you so much
i know and it is completely ok
i will see if my next update also gets similar response maybe i will not end it then
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome anni loved the update ... Omg anni please don't end this ss it's really good please... And i am really sorry for the late reply uni has started to getting busy in that and even everyone else loves this story please think once again please
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

Awesome anni loved the update ... Omg anni please don't end this ss it's really good please... And i am really sorry for the late reply uni has started to getting busy in that and even everyone else loves this story please think once again please


thank you so much jiji
but the response are so low
yes i am going to rethink about my decision

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...loved it...manyata remember her past...is uday too...?i am doubted...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

superb update...loved it...manyata remember her past...is uday too...?i am doubted...and thanks for pm...


thank you so much
a little but not so much
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 7

It was summer outside but within the room I was quivering, shuddering with pain. I noticed the tear drop on his eyes as he turned his face away from mine. I was hurt at myself that I could stoop so low to blame him behind of all everything this was not just right. Instead he was the person to help me out whensoever's problem hovered me. I wanted to smooth his heart and pacify him but before I could even say something he spoke something that torn my heart into pieces

UDAY: I know it is nothing new for me since the day my family left me in this world all alone forever I was cursed with bad luck. You know each year on my birthday there was candles blown, cake was cut but not a single person came to me and gave me the bear hug or smirched the cake on my face... I had always been a loner so it will be no new thing for me if you too leave me manyata. By now I have adapted myself to it.

He stood up to leave but before he could even take a step I stopped him. I back hugged him with all my might. I feared that if I left him, he would go away from me. I could feel his pain in my heart. As I wiped softly on his back and said

MANYATA: I am sorry uday it is not your fault I am just so stressed since the time I have come here nothing seems right with me I am sorry Uday I am really sorry please do not blame yourself ... I love you

Time seemed to pause for us, I felt my cheek turning crimson red, my legs were rooted into the ground I could neither move nor speak, and my ears were all red. Oh no I blundered the entire situation now I would even loose a friend like him; he will not think me so cheap and mad. I cursed myself for blurting those words. I drifted apart and tried to make my way out of the door ASAP. My eyes were fixed on the ground and as I turned my hands on the knob it was stopped with a swift moment I found myself being sandwiched in between the door and Uday. He had blocked my way with both his arms on either of the side. He lifts my face with his fingers. My hormones had already taken a toll, ready to burst out anytime. But why? His looked curious as he said with a heavy voice

UDAY: you need to learn that you just cannot walk past me like that... if you have completed your words than you must wait for me too dear and as it is so convenience that from now we will be addressed as a couple it is really going to be rude if you walk past me like that

I looked up I had no idea what was he talking about all my head heard was "COUPLE" I felt the world round me spun, my knees began to shake as my heart began to beat a lot more faster than usual. I fell he understood that I was losing my balance as with a swift moment he took me into his embrace. I felt so warm and protected as he pushed a strand of my hair at the back of my ear and said to me

UDAY: I love you too. I love you since the first day I saw your blood and glass covered body, I loved you even when you got a piece of mind from Prof. Suraj, I liked you even when this nose of your was flaming with anger against Zain, I loved you even when you pretended to be asleep. I love each form of your and no matter how many births you take I will always love you

I was moved by his words as my eyes met his, I felt a sudden feeling in my stomach as his cupped my face and leaned closer. I could feel his breath on my face as my hand encircled around his neck. He placed soft kiss on my eyes causing them to shut and then on my both cheek, finally he made it to my lips. He licked my top lip then slide to the bottom lip, and then sucked it gently. I opened my lips as he bites my bottom lips softly, but a soft moan escaped from my mouth as he licked the area smoothing my pain. Then he put his tongue in my mouth. We meets half way, he curved his tongue to the right and massage my tongue gently, soon out kiss started to be more passionate our tongues fought each other like enemies I was going all breathless as he went chewing and nibbling on my lower lips. We parted away with a soft peck. My eyes were fixed to the ground; I was not in a state to speak any more while he continued to gaze at me. His gaze was burning me up as I managed to say

MANYATA: I need to go it is getting late I will meet you in the evening'

Before I could turn the knob he back hugged me and placed a soft kiss on my cheek as he said

UDAY: meet you in the evening love

As I felt him loosening his grip I rushed out of the room and did not stop till I reached my own. I locked the door and crumbled down on the floor as I touched my lips, it was swollen and was indeed in a little pain but that got very little interest to me as I was more carried about the thought that I just had my first kiss. It was really magical in seconds my boring puzzled life turned into a fairy tale. My cell kept buzzing and I finally took notice of it, a call from Rits, I was so eager to tell her everything that happened with me as I picked but before I could speak anything she spoke something that shook me Samuel had just cheated her over Racheal poor rits she was scattered and broken she could not believe that he could stoop so low , she loved him but all he did was to break her heart , she gave her heart to him and he toyed with her just to fulfill his manly needs, I felt so sorry for her she was completely broken and at this time I could not break my news to her, I knew for now I needed to be by her side. I knew the trip mattered a lot to me and it was only now that I was finding happiness but nothing more important than my best friend as I said to her

MANYATA: do not worry rits I am coming back to you by tomorrow

There was a long silence as I asked over and over again but no response but finally she spoke in a clam tone which actually surprised me

RITS: it is ok mannie you enjoy your trip I will be fine here ok you do not need to come

MANYATA: are you sure rits but I think I need to be by your side

RITS: no mannie now if you come I will blame myself for spoiling your trip I hope you do not want that

MANYATA: but rits

RITS: No buts now don't over think and enjoy your trip with uday

MANYATA: OK bye tell Puja and Rajesh that I miss them and I love them

RITS: sure mannie

I kept the phone just when her words clicked my mind why did she specifically mention Uday's name. I snapped my forehead of course she knew it after all since the very beginning I had been telling about my crush on uday maybe that is the way she was teasing me. I went to the bed and placed myself on it to get some sleep.


done with this chappy
please do forgive me for my mistakes
do hit the tiny like button
it won't burn your figure
no res box
30+ likes for the next update😈

Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally!! Today I'm the first one to like and comment xD It was beautifully written dear. Do continue!!
Lots of love :D
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Finally!! Today I'm the first one to like and comment xD It was beautifully written dear. Do continue!!
Lots of love :D


woa congo dearie
thank you so much
i am glad you liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written... I just loved d update
Bt i m still confused wid uday, i think he was pretending that emotional act to get manyata's sympathy...
I knw uday's love is true bt cannot believe those lines (dat i m lonely ones) coming frm uday's side...
Update nxt one soon...
Thanks for d pm

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