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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

wow, awesome update Annesha di
hey humaira
Totally fab 👏
i am glad you think so 😳
Shame, I really feel bad for Uday, wonder what happened to his parents
yea i too his father was killed in the battle filled and his mother died in sati
Hope Avendra doesn't recieve the letter
he will and that is where all wrong will happen
Wonder what Manyata is planning
to get away from this marriage
Thanks for the pm n plz continue soon 😊
awn it was my duty next update on 12 th july😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chappy annie
But i wonder a father being so ridiculous to take advantage of a man who is so hell bent in love with his daughter and the girl being so blind that she can not understand the difference betweem love and obession
I wish Uday comes to regarding this whole stuff before hand
Continue soon Annesha,waiting to read ahead IMPATIENTLY!
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Posted: 12 years ago

WRITTER NOTE: I would like to inform you all that anni is absent from if because of some health issues and so I will update the chapter on her behalf so firstly I would like to wish you all a very HAPPY RAMZAAN and now here I present the fifth chapter of Bleeding Heart my rule follows next update on 18th july and only if my second condition there are 20likes


Chapter 5

A bright orange sun shone took its final good bye from the kingdom of Jaigarh , it was a new a dusk to a new era , a golden era all trouble was locked up in an ice box , and now only happiness prevailed over the people this was possible only because of manyata she had changed the king and the public worshipped her like a deity , for saving their life , even their view towards the king was changing and as for the king he failed to notice anything as his mind was captured only with the thoughts of his beloved princess , finally the marriages days were drawing closer and most of the rituals were already completed and just a week more and they would tie up the knot and marry , today was the tilak ceremony , as Rajkumar Sujamal left no stone unturned to make the arrangements the best he wanted this marriage to be remembered for ages , his happiness knew no bounds the dream he had seen was coming true finally his nephew was turning the person he should be , a good kind hearted king love had indeed changed him a lot . the Jaigarh palace looked like a new bride with candles and flower hunging from the walls and all arrangement was perfectly done and the palace glittered and sparkled , the party was in full swing all the royalties of devgarh had arrived but every body eyes was fixed on Rajkumari Manyata , she looked amazing like an angle desented from heaven she had a heavy silver veil and an orange gaggra choli and gold not living the sight of her body , she had rings on her figure ,bracelets on her wrists and armlets on its arms , necklace on its neck and a golden tiara on its head- in Fact its whole body glittered and sparkled with gold and diamond . but none could see her eyes filled up it had been days and yet she got no answer of her letter , now she was fighting a lost battle but being a royal she never learned to loose and fight the war till the very last breath of her life , she was not going to get connected with uday , so she placed several millions cut on her engagement figure immense pain had over taken her but a relief that now she could delay the engagement made her heart at ease as she could sence his eyes burning into her , it was true since the very first time she entered the palace his eyes were hooked on her , she looked so beautiful her milky skin even glowed in the lights and her curves were finely revealed to her , how badly he wanted to touch her , feel her , taste her lips , but as for now he maintained his modesty and continued the ceremony as all the family member one by one applied tilak on his forehead ,

after that the raj purohit called for manyata as they stood facing each other and rings were brought , uday forwarded his hands as she slipped the ring on his figure making her best attempt not to touch his hands , now it was uday turn , manyata heart almost skipped beats as he took her hands and noticed the cuts , it was small enough to be seen only by him yet deep to hurt her she accepted him to slip it into some other figure as she felt a shrill pain he had just done that no one would ever imagine , he slipped the ring as it was like a spreading of salt into the wounds as he gritted his teeth and said in a slow mumble yet his voice powerful

UDAY:don't you dare play this tricks with me princess do not taste my love

As then they were followed by the relatives , uday got indulge in some political talks while manyata sulked at a corner of the huge hall her mother and sisters had already left due to bad whether but she was stayed back due to the rituals as tears flow down her cheek her inner pain was much more than the pain she had in her hands , as she was sitting she finally viewed him , he came to her and sat beside her she cursed herself for choosing an isolated corner to sit and feared his anger but when he spoke magic prevailed in the air

UDAY:I am sorry to hurt you princess but you must know that I love you so please do not deny my feelings , I am a hurtful king in reality but finally I found love so please do not toss my love aside

MANYATA:hurtful and a ruthless king like you ?

UDAY:yes princess I too have a heart which was broken and crushed but you helped me to see dream again you was the bright sunshine in my life

MANYATA:Maharaja sa you can stop as this I am not soft hearted and this kind of fake sentiments are not going to melt my heart down I hate you and will continue to hate you

Uday did not try to persue her , those words pierced his hearts the anger revolved him again , she proved him again but this time in a very hurtful manner as he held her arms piercing his nails into her as the grip was stronger with her struggle he gritted his teeth and said

UDAY:what will you know the difference between FAKE pain after all you was always surrounded by love and care , you had people to love you always but I since childhood was totally isolated I saw my own mother burning in front of my eyes , the flames were eating her do you have any idea how dreadful that scene must appeal to me ? just at a small age when you would be busy playing with dolls it was me fighting in a real war , fighting for my life for my people I am cruel and ruthless but situation made me so as I needed to protect my throne but you changed me you changed me princess and now it your responsibility to prevent me from being the person I was and I promise to fill you up with all love

Saying this he left to all her isolation as each of his words still echoed in her minds , how suprising the law of nature was a person she hated ad become someone she pitied maybe just for a few moment but her heart did melt for him , a turmoil of several emotions travelled in her mind finally the long awaited evening was over , as they took their farewell it was uday headed manyata to her palaguin he did not accept her to speak or reply to anything he said so an unknown silence prevailed but he was again shocked by a new side of her as all of sudden he could feel her hands slip into his as she looked away and said

MANYATA:I never played with dolls it was only my sisters , I used to go to practice sword fighting with my bhaisa and by now I had been a champion

UDAY:so my love have beauty with brains too ok we shall have a sword fight soon and I too have a gift for you

MANYATA:gift no it is ok I do not need

She was cut short by him

UDAY:I have asked my people to bring another tiger to the palace I still feel sorry for your simba so here I tried to replace it

MANYATA:you need not do that it was fine with me I did feel bad but I had got over it by now

UDAY:no it might help me maybe you can teach me a thing or two about pet and we can call him samba this time

MANYATA:samba seriously I have a weird feeling in future this name is going to be famous

They craked up into laughter as their innocent smile rang up in the forest , a memory never to be forgotten , a different fragnace filled the air was it call of love? Or a silence before the storm?



done with this chappy
please do forgive me for my mistakes
do hit the tiny like button
it won't burn your fingure
no res box

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its awesome ...anni ...🤗
I loved this developed side of Uday and so do manyata...He shared his pain with her and that too making her realize in the sweetest yet authoritative manner ever that love can indeed make a man god and situation can indeed make a man devil
Just hope their trust and love(though one sided now) is never hurted due to family ya royal politics...
Continue soon and thanks for pm...
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

Its awesome ...anni ...🤗

I loved this developed side of Uday and so do manyata...He shared his pain with her and that too making her realize in the sweetest yet authoritative manner ever that love can indeed make a man god and situation can indeed make a man devil
Just hope their trust and love(though one sided now) is never hurted due to family ya royal politics...
Continue soon and thanks for pm...


thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey...
Yippee I am the second one to comment..
Coming to the update...
It was extremely beautiful...
So finnaly Manyata atleat talked to Uday in a good way...
Get well soon...
Thanx for the pm...
Edited by nityatandon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey...

Yippee I am the second one to comment..
Coming to the update...
It was extremely beautiful...
So finnaly Manyata atleat talked to Uday in a good way...
Get well soon...
Thanx for the pm...


thanks you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update .

continue soon.

danxs for pm.

GET WELL SOON.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii baby sister
baby GET WELL SOON missing u
awsssmmm update as usual
love manveer convo its a bit centi
hope manyata change her view about uday soon
no thanks for pm
love u baby come back soon IF is sooo lonely without u

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