MG-FF What does she want? Part 37 page 139

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue:

Who was this looking at me?
Do I recognise her?
What does she want?
A young woman dressed in a green salwar suit, heavy dupatta covering her head, hair in a single plait with matching paranda stared at me,...



This is my 1st FF. I have read loads of them on IF and have been thinking for sometime that I too should write a MG FF. I will try to weave in the original story. Anyone want to read my story?


Characters are not owned by me...I will just play with them for a while

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Characters:

Maan:
28 year old business tycoon, MD of Khurana constructions from Delhi as per Geet serial.
Never married; had his heart broken by Sam

Dev:
Maan's younger brother; Married to NT
Gambler and womaniser

Daadi:
Looked after Maan and Dev when their parents died

Geet:
21 year old; From HP but finished her interior design course in Delhi

Brij, Daarji, Rajji and others from HP, as per serial

Pinky, Adi and Sasha as per serial


Part 1: Page 1 Part 21: Page 47 73379883
Part 2: Page 2 Part 22: Page 51 73456340
Part 3: Page 3 Part 23: Page 56 73532918
Part 4: Page 4 Part 24: Page 61 73611623
Part 5: Page 5 70566873 Part 25: Page 66 73688663
Part 6: Page 7 70646231 Part 26: Page 70 73768060
Part 7: Page 10 70719319 Part 27: Page 77 73915902
Part 8: page 11 70788549 Part 28: Page 81 73988506
Part 9: page 13 0866825 Part 29: Page 87 74065155
Part 10: page 14 70944324 Part 30: Page 92 74139786
Part 11: page 16 71059710 Part 31: Page 102 74424051
Part 12: page 18 71230876 Part 32: Page 108 74497411
Part 13: page 19 71371396 Part 33: Page 114 74642588
Part 14: page 2171445842 Part 34: Page 124 75336173
Part 15: page 23 71519696 Part 35: Page 128 75404841
Part 16: page 25 71598415 Part 36: Page 133 75475429
Part 17: page 27 71677521 Part 37: Page 139 75552576
Part 18: page 28 71747527
Part 19: page 32 71815362
Part 20: page 34 71892244 THREAD 2 75597491
Edited by angeesh - 12 years ago
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Part 1:

"Geet, Geet...quickly...the boy is here. I hope you are ready". Her mother's voice woke her up from her staring session. It was only then she realised that the girl in the green suit staring was her reflection in the mirror.

She, Geet Handa, was dressed to meet her prospective groom! When did that happen??? While she was still thinking about that, she heard Brij veerji call out "Geet come down. Daarji wants you to meet the boy and his family...make sure you behave and keep your eyes down. Girls need to be humble and keep your head covered at all times. We don't want you bringing shame on the family"

Geet entered the room, where Dev Singh, his bhabhi Naintara and his mum, Pammi were waiting. Dev was tall and handsome. He had been instructed not to talk directly to Geet, as her family was very strict and conservative. Only elders did the talking. So he didn't speak but tried to make eye contact with her. He was told that his eyes could enchant anyone and had entrapped many a woman in the past, making them to do anything for him. This was what he was trying to do with Geet. Enchant her...attract her...make her fall for him...Unfortunately Geet as instructed, wasn't looking at him/

Naintara and Pammi were doing all the talking. They told the Handas that had come to HP from Canada to find a nice Indian bride for their NRI boy, Dev. A bride who would be homely and have good traditional values.

Through the discussions, Geet sat immobile. She still couldn't believe this was happening to her. Two days ago, she was in Delhi, partying with her friends post exams, and today, she was in HP decked out like a village belle, waiting to be selected as a bride. Was this what she wanted? Did anybody care??

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome!!!!
I hope geet runs away from dev!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
interesting..
but hoping for some changes..is dev going to betray her? hope Geet is strong here..
continue soon
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Thanks for the likes and comments. Here is the next part


Part 2

Suddenly Geet heard Naintara speak "Daarji, we like Geet. She will fit nicely into our small family. We would like to give these bangles as a shagun and call the pandit to find a suitable date for the engagement and marriage, if you agree. Since we need to return to Canada soon, we would like the wedding to take place as soon as possible".


Geet was 21 years of age and was considered old and would soon be out of the marriage market in HP, so Daarji readily agreed for this alliance.


Later that evening Geet sat in her room staring at the moon thinking about fate and those who controlled her fate. In less than a week she would be married to Dev and on her way to Canada to live with her in-laws. She was not even consulted. Did anyone care what she wanted?


What a difference from 2 days ago, when Geet was happily building dreams of a life in Delhi, working as an interior designer and being independent. Was it only 2 days ago that she had received an internship with one of the most prestigious companies in Delhi? In 4 weeks time, she had been planning to enter Khurana Constructions as a junior interior designer. Not anymore though. Those dreams were truly dead.


Meanwhile on the outskirts of HP, Dev was sitting drinking. He contemplated the innocent Geet. She hadn't even looked at him. In fact she refused to look at him. Was he losing his touch? Girls normally look at him in awe and are ready to do anything, yes, anything for him. But not Geet. He was challenged by her. He needed her to want him, just like all the other girls who have come and gone in his life. Just like Naintara...


Of course, Naintara was not Dev's bhabhi, but his wife. The wife who stayed with him, no matter where he strayed or how often he strayed! She was completely in love with him and would forgive him no matter what he did, which he took full advantage of.


Dev and Naintara were in need of money. Dev, as usual, had gambled their life savings while trying to impress yet another rich lady. It was his hobby...a very costly hobby...a hobby that his family were no longer willing to fund. Dev had been thrown out of the family business as well as the family home. He had ruined too many girls' reputations and squandered so much money. He was definitely the black sheep of the family and would never be welcomed back. Naintara, silently wondered why she stayed with Dev. She of course knew the answer...she loved him...and always would.


They planned this sham marriage to Geet who was the grand-daughter of the wealthy Daarji. While Naintara, planned to take the Geet's property, Dev was planning to take something else from Geet...on their Suhaag Raat...well he would be married to her...



Edited by angeesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
geet's all dreams destroyed
Kill this Dev
Feeling sorry for Naintara That she is in love with such a pevert
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the likes and comments
Please bookmark if interested in the story- don't know how to pm yet 😉

Here is part 3

"You phone me, once you've got her and I'll come". Dev disconnected the call. His plan was falling into place. Today, he would make Geet fall for him. It would make their Suhaag Raat all the sweeter...


Geet's mum (Rano), Tayji and Geet went to Amritsar to buy her wedding clothes and jewellery. It was torture for Geet, but what could she do? Was she even consulted?


It was dark by the time all the shopping was done, having purchased what felt to Geet like half of Amritsar. On their way back to HP, their car broke down. It was the middle of no-where. There was no light and little or no traffic on the road. The ladies stayed in the car, while the driver tried to fix the fault. Suddenly they heard the noises of engines and lights. Three masked men on motorcycles came by and saw the ladies in the car. The driver tried to protect them, but he was knocked unconscious. Two of the men took Tayji and Rano out of the car and tied them together. Geet was left in the car as they had other plans for her.. ...


Geet was shouting and screaming, but there was no-one about. One of the men was about to grab Geet, when she took some red mirch powder from her bag and threw it on his face. As he screamed, she quickly got out of the car and ran into the field. She ran and ran until she was out of breath. Finally she came to the edge of the field but had to stop suddenly as she realised the field ended in a sheer cliff leading to a lake below. What was she to do now?? Should she run back into the field? Her thoughts were cut short, when she heard the sounds of the motorcycle engines coming close to her and then she saw the headlights. They were too close. Rather than let herself be taken by them, Geet remembered her Babaji and jumped off the cliff into the lake.


The masked men looked on in disbelief. She had jumped. They had not thought that she would jump...what would they tell their boss?? He was waiting for their phonecall...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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PLEASE DONT MARRY GEET TO THAT LECHEROUS DEV
DONT GO THE SERIAL WAY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You will have to wait and see what I do with Geet😉


I will try to give another update a bit later on today

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