MG-FF What does she want? Part 37 page 139 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous part read all parts in a go
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superb update...
i hope this reena doesnt spoil geets dress...
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oh i am loving the way you are shaping it...i loved it completely.
I enjpyed the way u removed Maan-Geet's any chance of MU as they talked so freely..as i said earlier also I hate MUs between Maaneet and that fact i loved the ebst.
They are sensible people and Maan is not too hot headed but intelligent and shrewd...
as to ur number of readers...i think are too less for such a wonderful effort...i will like to send your link to my buddy list when next time I PM abt my FF update...let me know if it is ok. I am sure u will get few more readers this way...
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Thank you for appreciating my effort.
Please send a link to anyone you think would like the story.
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dear when is the next update??????????
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Thank you so much guys.
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Here is the next installment. Hope you like

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Part 19

Geet was so restless. She couldn't sleep and hadn't slept all night. She kept tossing and turning in the bed lost in her thoughts. Who was in control of her life? Not her she thought sadly. The only one who had bothered to ask her whether she wanted to marry Maan, was Maan. No-one else cared...no-one else thought she should have a say in her own life. Was marrying Maan the right decision? Or the only decision as he put it? She thought through her options. Ending her life would be cowardly and though she tried it yesterday, she didn't feel that brave anymore! Could she run away? Run to Delhi and be with Pink? But there would be scandal...and what would become of Rajji...and Maan? No running away was not an option either.

Her thoughts were interrupted when her mother came into the room saying, "Geet, it's time for you to get up now. Look the sun has been up for so long. Are you not hungry? I have made your favourite, aloo paranthas."

"Mumma, are you trying to bribe me?" Geet said yawning and getting up from the bed.

Yes, we have a lot of things to do in preparation for your wedding tomorrow, so get up now", Rano said while tidying Geet's room and fixing her now vacated bed.


Maan was looking at the selection of diamond rings sent from the jewellers. He was unsure of Geet's size, so decided to ring the Handas.

"Hello, could I speak to Geet please?"

"Arre jeejaji, Geet ki yaad aa rahi hai? Abhi you only have to wait one day and Geet didi will be with you forever" Rajji teased.

"No, I just wanted to find out the size of her ring finger" Maan stated seriously.

Ole, Rajji thought. He is no fun. He didn't even respond to my teasing. Babaji, protect Geet, Rajji thought.

Rano who overheard Rajji's teasing took the phone from her and answered Maan's question. She then asked in a teasing voice "Anything else beta, do you want to ask any other question or maybe talk to anyone else?"

"No, thank you", and Maan put down the phone.

Rano looked at the phone and then at Rajji. "This Maanji is very serious. Pata nahi, usko Geet kaise pasand aagayi" walking off. It became apparent to Rajji, that Rano did not know the real reason behind the wedding.

Actually Rano, Taiji and the rest of the family excepting Daarji were told by Brij that Maan loved Geet from the time she was in Delhi and Dev's family found out. That was the reason that Dev's family withdrew from the marriage. But Maan being a gentleman, proposed to Geet. Brij made it clear to them, not to embarrass Geet or Maan by bringing this subject into conversation. Had they known the real reason behind the marriage, it was doubtful that they would stop the wedding, but it would definitely change the atmosphere of the wedding house.

Geet heard the doorbell ring and ran to open the door. She stopped abruptly as she heard Daarji shout "Ruk ja oh kudiye"

"This is not the done thing. You are getting married tomorrow, start acting like a grown up rather than a child. Rajji, you attend to the door. Geet you sit down here." Daarji continued.

Geet sat down near Daarji. She was getting bored. What was the point in her Mum waking her up? She should have stayed in bed. It was not as if they were allowing her to do anything...anytime she tried to do something or help with preparations, she heard the same excuse "you are getting married tomorrow, so just rest"

"Geet didi, Geet didi, look, here is your wedding lengha from jeejaji. Ms Roy just dropped it off, saying it is a designer lengha from Amritsar and that you have to wear it since jeejaji chose it." Rajji said excitedly. Pulling Geet up by her hand, Rajji dragged Geet up to her room. "Open it, open it didi. You have to try it on, didi. Let us see jeejaji's choice for you. This is the outfit he wants to see you married in and wearing on your suhaag raat" Rajji winked. Geet kept quiet, but started to blush hearing Rajji tease her. Also Geet who had not really thought beyond the wedding, became tense thinking about the suhaag raat.

Geet stared at the beautifully wrapped packet lying on her bed. She had been staring at it for the last half an hour. She didn't want to open it. It would make he wedding and the aftermath of that wedding (SR) real too. "Geet didi ab khole bhi. You have been staring at it for so long" whined Rajji. Just then Taiyji and Rano came in. "Well have you not opened it yet? Chal, let me open it, if you cant" Taiyji said. Just as Taiyji was about to take the packet from the bed, Geet snatched it and said firmly, "No, I will open it. It is for me, so I should open it"

She laid the packet back on the bed and slowly moved her fingers to open it. Her hands shook in nervousness. What lay beneath the beautiful wrapping?

Ms Roy knocked on the guesthouse door. Munshi opened it, much to Reena's disappointment. "Is Mr Khurana, not here? I have his sherwani for him"

"No, Mr Khurana, has gone to do a site visit. He needed to check some work before the wedding tomorrow" Munshi replied.

"Oh", said Reena unhappily.

"Just give me the sherwani, and I will give it to him".

"No! I will come back later" Reena said hurriedly holding the packet closely as if it were her most prized possession,

Just then Munshi's phone rang. It was Maan, asking whether or not his sherwani had been delivered from Amritsar. "Yes Saabji, Ms Roy has just brought it. Ok Sirji, I will tell her. Bye"

"Ms Roy, Mr Khurana asked me to take the sherwani from you and to pass on his thanks". Saying that, he took the sherwani, with some difficulty from Reena's hands and closed the door in her face. Reena stood there staring at the now closed door. Her opportunity to see Maan today had just been cruelly snatched away! "They are acting as if this is a real wedding...well I will make sure it ends badly" Reena thought wickedly.


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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
it's awesome
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Fabulous this reena is cheap creating more problems
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this B***h Reena is getting possessive day by day...

she is messing with Maan...

hope what she gave Maan thinking it as Sherwani may have been Geet's wedding outfit and Maan should come to know what she is doing and what she brought for Geet...she should get good scolding for her ministrations...

so deal is shaked (hand shake) between Maan-Geet...koi chinta nahin hai...

jab shaadi ke baad Geet sath mein ek hi kamre mein rahegi to Maan jyada dinno tak bach nahin sakega...and phir humari pyaari dramebaaz Daadi bhi to hai...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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