MG-FF What does she want? Part 37 page 139 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awesome update.
maan ka dhamakedar entry. waiting to know how they met or rather say how maan saved geet.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
beautiful part dear😊
but please dont let geet marry that dev😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
I dont want geet and dev to get married. plz write something differant.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44



Ange when u are diverting this story then please don't let Geet marry Dev...

he is so cheap yaar...atleast Dev of GHSP had some humanity in him...

so Maan was caressing her in sleep...

and Geet is feeling aroused...she already started dreaming X-rated thoughts about him...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Hey
ur reali nyc compared to othr new comers...
so cheer up
i lyk ur way of writng :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
GEET IS ENGAGED BUT SHE WAS EXCITED BEING IN A STRANGERS ARMS
HOW WILL SHE GET MARRIED TO DEV AFTER THIS

PLEASE DONT MAKE HER MARRY DEV
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Thanks for liking my writing style and my story

You guys need to trust me...I am a Maaneetian at heart😉

Hoping to update in a while


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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

So here is the next part.

Enjoy...lots of likes and comments please.😃


Part 7

A little later, Geet came out of the tent to find the campfire burning, and Maan boiling some water. She was dressed in her salwar suit from yesterday and her dupatta firmly paced around her neck. She tried to make sure, none of her skin was on display. She tried not to look at him. Her heart was racing, as she could still feel his touch on her waist and her ...ahem. "Geet, jhali, stop thinking about that!" she scolded herself.


Without any make-up, she looked so pure and innocent...."except when she argues", thought Maan!


She handed him his shirt which he quickly put on. He noticed that it smelt sweet, like her...but why all of a sudden was he thinking that way?? Maan cursed himself for having such thoughts about this little girl...


He was about to ask if she wanted some coffee (he didn't have any tea), when they heard the sound of jeeps coming close. Both turned around to see 3 jeeps parking at the top of the cliff. A few men pointed towards them and started shouting. Geet recognised one of them to be Brij. She became quite pale and nervous. "Hai Babaji, veerji looks so angry. He will kill me for sure today." mumbled Geet loud enough for Maan to hear.


Dev had come out of his jeep to see Geet standing with a man near the lake below. Before he could get any closer, Brij told him to stay behind, and that he would go down to get Geet. Dev watched Brij, climb down the steep path on the cliff side. His gaze turned towards Geet, who looked very cute in the morning. He definitely wanted her. Then slowly his eyes drifted to the man beside her...the man looked very like Maan... No! He didn't just look like Maan, but actually was the great Maan Singh Khurana...his brother, Maan.


"Shit", Dev shouted internally and turned around abruptly, showing his back to the people below. He quickly dialled Naintara, and told her what had happened. She told him to make an excuse and leave that place as soon as possible without raising too much attention. Dev told Brij's friends that his mother was suddenly very ill and that he needed to leave to attend to her. He told them that he would catch up with Brij and Geet later at Handa Haveli. Dev escaped hoping and praying to God that his brother hadn't seen him or recognised him.


Brij came towards Geet shouting at her. "Who is this man and why are you with him? Are you trying to bring shame on the family? Today, I will kill you with my bare hands. No girl will dare look at any man outside her family ever again"


His hand which was raised to hit Geet was stopped in mid air, by Maan. Maan held Brij's hand tightly and asked angrily "Who are you and why do you want to hurt her?"


"I am her brother and I am here to take her away. She has spent the whole night away from home and has brought shame on the family. She will need to be punished", answered Brij


Geet was numb. She knew Brij's anger, and his thoughts about women. How could escaping from those masked men and staying alive be a bad thing? Maan had held her during the night and touched her, unknowingly. Did that count as being "touched" by a man? Was she ruined now? Had she brought shame on the family? Was she to die at the hands of her brother today??


Maan tried to calm Brij down and explain how Geet had come to stay with him last night. He reassured Brij, that Geet was still pure and innocent. Maan gave his full name and various references in the village that would vouch for his character, including his Munshi, who was known to the Handa family.


Somewhat pacified, Brij ordered Geet to come with him. He begrudgingly thanked Maan and walked towards the cliff path dragging Geet away with him. As he left, he turned to Maan and threatened..." If you are lying and I find out that you have played with Geet, I will ruin you".


Brij led Geet to the jeep. He thought, "All is not lost. If what Maan said is true, then Geet will get married to Dev in 4 days time and I will be rid of this girl forever." Brij looked around for Dev, but was told by his friends, that he had left to attend to his ill mother. Brij hoped that this was the reason for his departure and not something else...Brij hoped that Dev did not doubt Geet's innocence.


Brij and Geet drove home in silence. In the meantime, his friends had taken the other jeep into the village to find out who told Dev about Geet's disappearance and make sure any gossip in the village died with that person.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
wow great story plz update soon
i hope when maan knows about his brother i really hope he get what is coming to him from is his maan
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
SO BRIJ HAS TAKEN HER HOME
BUT WHO WILL SAVE HER FROM DEV
LOVING THE STORY A LOT

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