FF|Arhi|Th4 How IPK should've been[ch22sc3 pg102

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I'm pinching myself right now. Two months ago, I couldn't have imagined to reach this place and here we are in Thread number four!

Thank you to all my lovely readers for your support and your even lovelier feedback. I'm really flattered to see you take the time to read and comment generously. Keep it coming. It makes me want to write more and more for you guys.

For NEWBIES to this thread: This is my version of how IPKKND should have progressed from the night of the wedding.

Rather than Arnav returning, this alternate universe has Arnav walking away from the wedding due to Dadi revealing the truth about Garima. Eventually the truth comes out followed by the redemption track of Arnav that we never got to see post the kidnapping.

I believe IPKKND lost a lot of viewers the night they showed Anjali's miscarriage. I too didn't like it. I always thought that Anjali's character could still be given an important role without having to resort to the cheapness of miscarriage and didi ki saut track. So this is my way of seeing IPKKND without the miscarriage.

You'll find the sister in Anjali that we all adored, you'll find the brainy ruthless businessman in Arnav that we fell in love with, you'll find strength in Khushi as opposed to being a doormat, you'll find Aakash and Payal ACTUALLY having a role to play, you'll find screen space for Shashi, Garima, Buaji, Nani, Mami and NK, you'll find a proper exit for Dadi and also many missing loops closing, and a much better farewell to one of the most badass villains of all time Mr. Shyam Manohar Jha. You'll find Love, hate, drama, comedy, sadness and family moments...

... in short, this is my humble attempt at recreating the world of IPKKND that we all loved!


INTRODUCTION PROMO of the story

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBWgbavSqqk&feature=plcp[/YOUTUBE]


Somethings to keep in mind please:
- I update almost EVERYDAY (unless I have some work in which case I inform before hand)
- I write in the screenplay format i.e. locations, settings and dialogues
- I write an English version after each scene in Hindi (I prefer Hindi, because I am more comfortable with the dialogues in hindi, it's almost like watching the serial)

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INDEX for this thread (Index for older chapters is in post two)

Chapter 19 Scene1 Page 5 (Home sweet home)

Chapter 19 Scene 2 Page 13

Chapter 19 Scene 3 Page 25

Chapter 20 Scene 1 Page 33 (Baby steps)

Chapter 20 Scene 2 Page 42

Chapter 20 Scene 3 Page 51

Chapter 21 Page 60 (Karwachauth Mahaepisode)

Chapter 22 Scene 1 Page 71 (Decisions Decisions)

Chapter 22 Scene 2 Page 78

Chapter 22 Scene 3 Page 102


THREAD 5 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3317193

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please use the below
INDEX to easily navigate between chapters and scenes of thread one, two and three.

Chapter 1 Scene 1 Page 1 (The D-Day)

Scene 2 Page 1

Scene 3 Page 2

Chapter 2 Scene 1 Page 2 (The half truth)

Scene 2 Page 3

Scene 3 Page 4

Chapter 3 Scene 1 Page 5(The confrontation)

Scene 2 Page 6

Scene 3 Page 7

Chapter 4 Scene 1 Page 9 (Let the games begin)

Scene 2 Page 11

Scene 3 Page 13

Chapter 5 Scene 1 Page 17(The domino effect)

Scene 2 Page 20

Scene 3 Page 23

Chapter 6 Scene 1 Page 27(What you see is what you get)

Scene 2 Page 31

Scene 3 Page 38

chapter 7 Scene 1 Page 42(Sugar and Spice)

Scene 2 Page 49

Scene 3 Page 55

Chapter 8 Scene 1 Page 62(Lord of the rings)

Scene 2 Page 69

Scene 3 Page 76

Chapter 9 Scene 1 Page 86 (King, Queen and a Jack(ass))

Scene 2 Page 92

Scene 3 Page 99

Chapter 10 Scene 1 Page 1 (th#2) (Back to square one)

scene 2 Page 8 (th#2)

scene 3 Page 16 (th#2)

Chapter 11 Scene 1 Page 23 (th#2) (Blast from the past)

scene 2 page 29 (th#2)

Scene 3 page 37 (th#2)

Chapter 12 Scene 1 page 45 (th#2) (Game Over)

Scene 2 page 54 (th#2)

Scene 3 page 62 (th#2)

Chapter 13 Scene 1 page 73 (th#2) (The pursuit for Happiness)

scene 2 page 82 (th#2)

Scene 3 Page 90 (th#2)

Chapter 14 Scene 1 Page 102 (th#2) (Fireworks!)

Scene 2 Page 111 (th#2)

Scene 3 Page 122 (th#2)

Chapter 15 Scene 1 (Page 3)(th#3)(Never too late)

Scene 2 (page 13)(th#3)

Scene 3 (page 23)(th#3)

Chapter 16 Scene 1 (page 36) (th#3)(Rewind and replay)

Scene 2 (Page 45)(th#3)

Scene 3 (page 55)(th#3)

Chapter 17 Scene 1 (Page 66)(th#3) (Lord of the rings -II)

Scene 2 (Page 77)(th#3)

Scene 3 (Page 87)(th#3)

Chapter 18 Scene 1 (Page 96) (th#3)(Mischief's in the air)

Scene 2 (Page 107)(th#3)

Scene 3 (Page 117)(th#3)

Edited by smitzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG!! :O



Im soo excited for you!! :D



Thread 4!! That is just Awesome dude!! :D


Edited by ipkkndfanforeva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

OMG!!



Im soo excited for you!! :D



Thread 4!! That is just Awesome dude!! :D




LOL!!! Shwethaaa darling!! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread
its an amazing story
and loved the last chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: saarah96

congrats for new thread
its an amazing story
and loved the last chapter


thank you so much dear! I'm glad you feel so 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Many many congratulations. U truly deserve it. Its one of the awesomest FFs I've ever read. Continue the good work :) 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey congo for new thread...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Smitzy !

Res karo please :D
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is a happy time for us I think! New threads for the both of us! Whoppee for us both! 🥳

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