Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1)

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AMAAYA SAHANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello people... I am one of the silent readers of this forum... for the first time I have thought to write ... and as I am a great fan of ky2 so this ff begins from the talent hunt day... and is full of love, drama and emotions ... of nandini and manik both...

PROLOGUE

LOCATION: LONDON HOSPITAL

a girl lying on the hospital bed in a private room and a boy is sitting beside her holding her hand... and saying... I'M SORRY ... I'M SORRY ... PLZ OPEN UR EYES ... HIT ME... TAKE ALL UR ANGER OUT ON ME... BUT PLZ WAKE UP... Suddenly the girl starts sinking... and here the boy gets tensed seeing her condition... and runs to call the doctor ... and as the doctor comes ... he asks the boy to leave the room ... so the boy comes out of the room... and cries his heart out... and says... NANDINI PLZ FORGIVE ME... FOR LEAVING U... PLZ DON'T GIVE ME THIS PUNISHMENT... PLZ COME BACK... I M SORRY FOR LEAVING U ALONE... THAT DAY...

I DIDN'T KNEW AFTER 2YRs I WILL SEE U ... AND THAT TOO IN THIS CONDITION... PLZ PLZ COME BACK... and falls on the floor... he is none other then the MANIK MALHOTRA. ..

After sometime gets up and runs to another private room of hospital wer a man in his 50s lying on the bed...

and seeing him manik runs to him and says... DAD MY NANDINI IS HERE... AND THAT TOO IN SUCH A BAD CONDITION ...THAT'S ALL BECOZ OF ME... but his dad gives him courage by saying... MANIK GET A GRIP ON UR SELF UR NANDINI NEEDS U ... U HAVE TO BE STRONG FOR HER... U HAVE TO BRING HER BACK ... U HAVE TO TEACH HER HOW TO LIVE HER LIFE AGAIN... AND TELL HER HOW MUCH U LOVE HER... and that was it for manik he controls himself and with a determined look on his face... moves to her room... only to be shocked to see the person standing near her...

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Hello peeps so how was it? Did u all like it ... plz do tell me whether I should continue or not...

And keep guessing who is the person standing near nandini... what happened 2 yrs back ... that landed nandini in hospital that too in London... how come manik landed here... why manik left her... and wer is FAB 5...?? LOOKING FORWARD FOR UR COMMENTS...

Index

Prologue

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3(A)

Part 3(B)

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9

Part 10

Part 11

Part 12

Part 13

Part 14

Part 15

Part 16

Part 17

Part 18

Part 19

Part 20

Part 21

Part 22

Part 23

Part 24

Part 25

Part 26

Part 27(A)

Part 27(B)

Part 28

Part 29

Part 30

Part 31

Part 32

Part 33

Part 34

Part 35

Part 36

Part 37

Part 38

Part 39
Part 40

Part 41 pg 119

Part 42 pg 123

Part 43 pg 127

Part 44 pg 131

Part 45 pg 136

LINK TO THREAD 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133675286

Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago

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sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome prologue...

interesting...is it continuation f KY2 or something different...

can't wait to read more...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

interesting
pls pm me
when u update

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AMAAYA SAHANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

It's different after the talent hunt track...

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AMAAYA SAHANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART- 1 PAST LINKED PRESENT

2 yr ago...

The talent hunt day...!!

HOST: And the winner of the talent hunt is none other than fab 5...

( though fab 5 won but that spark, that joy of winning was missing... the real fab 5 was missing... but as it's said problems of the family should stay in the family...)

So for the sake of the audience five of them hugged each other... and received the trophy ...

But that day fab 5 didn't broke ... the one who broke was the MANIK MALHOTRA. .. yes he broke... which was noticed by the fab 4 and obviously nandini... but they didn't knew Wat this will lead to...

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Manik just left the college and went to malhotra mansion...

And nandini didn't go behind him rather she decided to talk to fab 5...

AT COLLEGE...

NANDINI:I wanna talk to u all plz just for 5 mins can we talk...?

( Cabir and Mukti agreed readily BECOZ they also wanted that only... and somewhere down in them they knew nandini can bring them back... and aliya and dhruv agreed after lot of pleadings...)

And then nandini made them realise that Wat the are is just because of fab 5 ... they are nothing without each other ... she made them remember their own lines that's ALL FOR ONE AND ONE FOR ALL... how they supported each other in every phase of their lives... and Wat not...

(They understood Wat they were loosing just because of their stupidity... but who knew the damage was already done... )

AT MALHOTRA MANSION

Here manik was standing near his room's window and a packed bag was kept on the bed... and he was talking on his phn with someone saying... YES I M COMING TO U... I'LL BE THERE BY TOMORROW...

yes manik was going ...but wer no one knew ... but he was totally broken and could not see the increasing drift between the fab 5... he could see the awkwardness growing BTW the fab 5 ... could not see his family breaking... so decided to leave everything behind his SHINNING STAR behind ... and start a fresh... but before starting fresh he needed some closures... and so he decided to msg everyone...

I M LEAVING... NOW U ALL DON'T NEED TO FORCE UR SELVES TO STAY TOGETHER... BYE AND NEVER TRY TO FIND ME... BECAUSE THE MANIK U KNEW DIED THE DAY HIS FAMILY DRIFTED APART AND BLAMED HIM FOR THAT DRIFT... THANK U FOR EVERYTHING. .. FROM...

ALL FOR ONE AND ONE FOR ALL ... TO THIS DAY... WHERE WE THE FAB 5 BROKE...

(with this he left the fab 5 behind keeping that fab 5 key chain on the side table of his bed)

And he also msged his star...

NANDINI SORRY FOR AGAIN BREAKING UR TRUST ... FOR AGAIN LETTING U DOWN... I CANNOT BRING FAB 5 BACK... NOW I M NO ONE...

MOVE ON NANDINI ... I WILL NEVER COME BACK TO WAT I WS...

( he kept that manan bracelet and the tie bracelet there only along with the key chain) and left for the airport...

He boarded his flight leaving everything behind ... he just left... he did not even once thought to meet his shinning star... Wat will be the consequences of his this step... he just left...

BACK TO PRESENT...

manik was shocked to see who was there ... all his past just came in front of his eyes... and his eyes brimmed with tears ... and head bowed down in shame... not being able to face the person In front of him...

THE PERSON standing was equally shocked ... to see him after 2 long years... though was happy to see him after 2 yr but the anger took over that happiness...

PERSON: ohh...!! Look whose here... THE MANIK MALHOTRA... why are u here... to break her once again... Why have u come back... just go away... go away... leave her... u toh left her naa... when she was not at fault also... it's all becoz of u she is here... u punished her for believing in u... for trusting u... for solving all ur problems... why... just becoz u did not believed in ur frndship that ... one day... one day everything will be back to normal... one day everything will be fine... u did not believed in ur love ... ur shinning star... that she will make everything alright... U R A COWARD MANIK MALHOTRA. .. U R A COWARD... who could not face his fears... that day wen aliya said it's ur fault... she ws wrong... but today... Wat nandini is facing is all becoz of u... it's all ur fault... today I just pray to GOD... PLZ LET NANDINI DIE... AT LEAST SHE'LL BE FREE ... SHE'LL AT PEACE...

That was it for manik... as he heard these words... he broke... he is the reason behind all this... it's becoz of him that his shinning star is here... and his own SO CALLED FRND... is praying for his love's death so that she will not have to face him... and suffer more...

Manik couldn't say anything more than... PLZ... DON'T SAY THIS... PLZ... I BEG U... PLZ MUKTI... PLZ... I'M SORRY FOR WAT I HAVE DONE...

(yes the person was none other then Mukti...)

Mukti: sorry...!! Wow manik malhotra... for bringing her to this stage of life ... u just wanna say sorry... and u think everything will be fine... just a sorry...!!

(Manik couldn't say anything more...)

Just then doctor came and said...

MUKTI I HAD ALREADY TOLD U THAT NANDINI'S CONDITION IS GETTING WORST DAY BY DAY... THIS IS THE 10TH TIME SHE HAS LANDED HERSELF HERE... IF THIS CONTINUES THEN I AM SORRY TO SAY... EVEN WE CAN'T DO ANYTHING... then Mukti looked at manik who was shocked to hear Wat doctor said... then the doctor left and Mukti once again was about say something to Manik but... her phone buzzed... and she picked up... and was talking...

Mukti: haan Cabir ... haan vo hospital mein hi hu mai... nai use hosh nai aaya abhi tak... chal theek hai mai tujhe call karungi jaise hi use hosh aayega...

With this she kept the phn... and left as the nurse gave her a pescription and told her to bring medicines for Nandini...

And here manik was all broken again ... all his determination just got shattered just as he heard that nandini has landed in the hospital like this for the 10th time...

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So here is the first part of my story... plz do tell did u like it...

Suggestions are more then welcomed... and keep thinking... Wat Mukti is doing here... how nandini landed here ... that too 10 th time...

And not forget... Wat was the reaction of fab 4 and nandini on reading manik's text ... 2yrs ago... next part will be about how everyone reacted... and of course the entry of remaining members of fab 5 and Navya...

AMAAYA 😊😊

Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 9 years ago

plz cont the story...pm me also

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vaishnavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wht she joined hospital for 10 times
what happened to her ?
waiting how will fab 3 and nandu react when they will
see manik
waiting for the next update
thanx for pm
cont soon

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Adya Agrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi dear..so this is ADYA here..

And your story is impressive...i mean your imagination and writing skills are really good..

Although i also started on e"THE FAULT IN OUR STARS" and i am not happy with the response still yehi expect kar rahi thi so just one thing ke ask for comments and do make an index in your story thats Very important...

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..

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AMAAYA SAHANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

PART 2 WHOSE FAULT WAS IT...?

So back to past...

AT COLLEGE :

The great fab 4 standing in front of nandini and thanking her for giving them the peice of mind... the girl whom once they bullied like hell... the one who was just another girl for them ... Today the fab 4 included her in their family as their angel... who brought them together...

Just when they were about to do the group hug... their phones beeped with a msg from the only missing member of their family... THE MANIK MALHOTRA... everyone was happy... but whoknew that their happiness was just momentary... as after reading his msg their world shattered into pieces... everyone standing their with blank faces... the only thinng which came to their mind was... WE HAVE TO BRING HIM BACK...(but who knew that he already left them behind... and just vanished)

They all reached MALHOTRA MANSION...

but got nothing more than disappointment... they reached his room and found that keychain and bracelet... They were shattered... They blamed themelves for this... But then seeing the one thing which came to their mind was NANDINI... They looked around but couldn't find her... then it clicked in their minds that in their grief and guilt they forgot that she was not with them in this whole of SEARCHING MANIK session... They drove back to college...

AT COLLEGE...

They reached and the scene in front of them was heart breaking... Nandini who just few hours back was all happy beyond limit was standing their lifeless... in the same position holding her phone in her hand nd blankly staring at it... then they ran to her and shook her but no response... then Navya came forward and called her... NANDU... NANDU... PLZ SOMETHING... FOR GOD SAKE SAY SOMETHING ATLEAST...

(but no use the poor soul just broke into pieces... that much that she cannot even register her surroundings or could hardly hear anything...)

Then Mukti came forward and just put her hands around her shoulder and signaled everyone to follow her... and then they brought her home... and navya took her to her room and others just stood their and explained everything to chachi... and chachi being the most unnderstanding soul ...understood the reason behind this condition of her daughter...

And evryone left ...

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NANDINI'S ROOM...

There she was just lying on the bed staring at the sealing of her room blankly... then suddenly she got up and moved towards her fireflies... (then after wat seemed like eternity she openned her mouth )

HEY FIREFLIES... TUM TOH JAANTE HO NAA KI MERA MANIK ESA NAI HAI VO MUJHE ESE CHOD KAR JAA HI NAI SAKTA... VO MERE BINA NAI REH SAKTA... USNE HI TOH KAHA THA KI MAI USKI SHINNING STAR HU... I KNOW KI WO WAPAS AAYEGA... DEKHNA KAL SUBH HOTE HI VO AAYEGA AUR KAHEGA NANDU MAI TUMSE DUR REH HI NAI SAKA... SORRY ESE HI CHALAA GAYA... PAR TUM DEKHNAA MAI USE INTI EASILY MAAF NAI KARUNGI...

(how much broken the poor soul was that she was not able to believe the truth... she was hoping against the hope... that her manik will come... thinking that she just sat on the floor with her fireflies jar and drifted into sleep with the hope that morning will bring her manik back..)

Here Fab 5 was also shattered... but not more than nandini...

AT CABIR'S FLAT...

After dropping nandini at her place all of them went to cabir's place...

ALIYA : Its all because of me.. i should'nt have said like this... to him... because me he left...

DHRUV : Its all our fault... (with this he started crying...)

CABIR: but its our fault he shouldn't have done this with nandini atleast... did all see her how broken she was... God knows how she will handle herself...(cabir said with pity towards her0

mukti said...NO CABIR WE WILL HELP HER ... SHE WILL NOT DEAL WITH IT ALL ALONE ...MANIK LEFT HER BUT WE WILL NOT LEAVE OUR ANGEL... WE WILL BE WITH HER ALWAYS... WE WILL NOT LET HER LOOSE HERSELF... AND I FEEL MANIK WILL COME BACK... NOT FOR HIMSELF ... NOT FOR US... BUT FOR HER HE WILL RETURN...

With this determination they all slept that with new morning they try evry possible way to find manik...

BUT THEY DID'NT KNEW IT WWAS ALREADY LATE... AND NOW NOTHING CAN BE DONE...

NEXT MORNING...

All reached the murty's place ... thinking they have to behave sensibly and have to be strong for their angel... but they did'nt knew this morning will be another shock for them...

they rang the bell ... wat they saw was enough to take their senses away...

PRESENT DAY...

As manik was standing all shattered... seeing his star in that condition... that becuse of him... but wat had happened to her was still not clear to him so he decided to get every detail about her... as he was about to move... there entered navya in the hospital...

As she reached near her room she just froze then and there seeing manik... but decided to avoid him.. and again stepped forward and moved in nandini's room ... and manik also was going behind her only to be stopped by HIS OWN FRND... HIS CUPID ... CABIR...

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SHOCKED HOW CABIR AND NAVYA CAME... WAT THEY ALL ARE DOING IN LONDON... ?? WHAT HAPPENED TO NANDINI...?? WAT THY SAW AT THE MURTY'S PLACE WHICH TOOK AWAY THEIR SENSES... TELL ME HOWS IT AND DO COMMENT AND DON'T FORGET TO CLICK THE LIKE BUTTON...

NEXT PART WILL REVEAL WAT THEY SAW ... AT MURTY'S AND CABIR AND MANIK TALK...

AMAAYA 😊😊

Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago