Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I had thought of everything which could happen to nandini...but this drugs thing never came to my mind. Really good. Thanks 4 d update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
all parts was superb
i like it.
continue...👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Hats off to you girl...
Amazing update it was...
Waiting for next chapter
Continue asap

Shivi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Amaya sweetheart just red ur story in one go.story is flawless..beautifullly penned... uare amazing writer i must say...u portraited the scenery of broken nandini very wel..the last update made me cry almost...manik is soo selfish how can he just walk and go ...he event think for once how nandu gonna survive without him not even once,,,,,he is solely responsible for nandu's this condition... i was shocked to read nandu's home... then the bar in her house then last she is badly addicted to drugs which has risked her life...manik doesnt deserve forgiveness for what he did to nandu and fab-4 ...waiting to read further if possible pm me for next update ...tc...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
PART 4- AND SHE LOST HERSELF...!!

Hello readers... I know I am late but what to do I got stuck with my college work... so not to waste time let's just move back to the story...

DOCTOR'S CABIN
As doctor said... SHE IS ADDICTED TO DRUGS... SO MUCH SO THAT SOMETIMES SHE EVEN FORGETS WHO SHE IS...

Shocked would be an understatement to describe the reaction of manik... listening to this... the floor beneath him just slipped... he couldn't believe his ears... what he just heard... was true... that his nandini who once said... don't u know nandini Murthy doesn't drink... is now a drug addict...
The only words came out of his mouth were WHAT...??? ARE U OUT OF UR MIND...? HOW CAN U SAY THAT ABOUT MY NANDINI...he said this in a loud voice that scared the doctor again... and then doctor said... YE..YE...YESS MR. MAL...MALHOTRA... THIS IS THE TRUTH... and after being reassured by the doctor ... he just said HOW... but the poor doctor didn't had the answer for this... and somewhere manik also knew... doctor was not the right person to ask this question... so he just got up lifeless... and went out of the cabin... and again broke down... as he walked out... all the flashes of his past came in front of his eyes... as he was moving towards nandini's room... their first date... their first kiss... nandini's laughter sounds... we're playing in his mind... her words were ringing in his mind...MANIK I WILL ALWAYS SHINE FOR U... I WILL ALWAYS KEEP U IN MY PRAYERS AND I WILL ALWAYS TRUST U... but what he did to her... he not only broke her trust... but he broke her... his shinning star.. who brought him out of the darkness... but what he did ...? He pushed her in that darkness...
With each passing second his guilt was increasing... and increasing... he was ashamed of himself... he punished her... because... he couldn't become a good friend... because he couldn't save his friendship... he just let go off his love of also... today tears had no stop... they were just flowing endlessly from his eyes...
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But he composed himself and entered the room with the determination to find the truth... from the people in front of him... who were shocked to see him again... as he was now in a more devasted state... but they didn't gave a heed to his state because now for them he was no longer their manik... he was just a stranger... JUST A STRANGER... so being most aggressive... out of aggression ... Mukti asked...
WHAT ARE U DOING HERE...?? GET OUT OF HERE RIGHT NOW... she said this while pushing him... but he being more stronger... didn't even moved more than 2-3 inch... Mukti continued... NOW WHAT U WANT... HAVEN'T U HAD ENOUGH TWO YEARS BACK... THAT U HAVE COME BACK AGAIN... IT'S ALL BECAUSE OF U... WE LOST OUR FRIENDSHIP... BECAUSE OF U I LOST MY BELIEVE IN TRUE LOVE... BECAUSE IF TRUE LOVE MEANS THIS...(pointing towards nandini's condition...) THEN I AM HAPPY THAT ABHI IS NOT WITH ME... BECAUSE OF U WE LOST OUR THAT NANDINI WHO USED TO SMILE... BECAUSE U ... SHE NOT ONLY LOST HER SMILE... BUT ALSO HERSELF... CONGRATULATIONS ...!!! MR. MALHOTRA U HAVE SUCCEEDED IN BREAKING AN INNOCENT SOUL... SO MUCH SO THAT... SHE IS JUST BREATHING BUT NOT ALIVE... NO EMOTIONS... NOW SHE HATES THE WORD LOVE... SHE HATES U... AND MORE THAN THAT SHE HATES HERSELF FOR ONCE LOVING U... IT'S FOR UR DEEDS SHE IS PUNISHING HERSELF... JUST KILL HER MANIK... ONCE AND FOR ALL... JUST KILL HER...!! U MUST HAVE COME BACK FOR THIS ONLY NAA... BECAUSE ONLY THIS IS LEFT WITH HER... HER BREATH...
(All this while manik was just nodding his head in no... not to say such things...)
He just falls on his knees in front of Mukti... and says... while crying bitterly...
I M S... S...SO.. SO... SORRY ..!! PLEASE... PUNISH ME BUT... PLZ... PLZ.. DON'T SAY SUCH THINGS... U KNOW SHE IS MY LIFE...!! I WOULD RATHER KILL MYSELF...!!

MUKTI: MY LIFE... OH ... WOW... MANIK... SHE IS UR LIFE... SINCE WHEN...??? she said mockingly... and continued... HOW CAN SHE BE UR LIFE MANIK... WHEN SHE HERSELF IS LIFELESS... SHE HAS LOST HERSELF... THE DAY U LEFT HER... OR RATHER SHOULD I SAY ... THE DAY WHEN I MADE HER REALISE THAT U WOULDN'T COME BACK... I STILL REGRET IT... WHY I SAID THAT... IF I WOULDN'T HAVE THEN ATLEAST SHE WOULD HAVE BEEN IN A BETTER CONDITION THAN THIS... (with this Mukti too got tears in her eyes... and so did cabir and navya... by remembering that day...)

MANIK: what are u saying Mukti...?

MUKTI: haan... manik... it was not that she just saw ur msg and believed that u are gone... she never lost hope... she was loosing herself bit by bit... but never did she loose hope... hope ... that u would come back... come back to her... which never happened... we also accepted that u would not come back... but she never accepted... but I couldn't see her like this so... that day... I just said the truth to her... and that was the beginning of ALL THIS...
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Flashback
As nandini fainted dhruv and cabir picked her up and drove to hospital as fast as they could... they came to same hospital where navya was admitted... as they entered the hospital... aryaman too came running to them as Navya's delivery was still going on... and then doctor came and took her in the emergency room...

OUTSIDE THE EMERGENCY ROOM...

Mukti: Its all my mistake... I should'nt have said that to her... knowing how sensitive she is... what if something happens to her...

Cabir: nai Mukti... kuch nai hoga humari nandini ko... Dekhna woh ek dam theek hogi...

Aliya: haan Mukti... vo bilkul theek ho jayegi... aur isme teri koi galti nai hai... so don't blame urself...
And dhruv being the silent one just hugged Mukti... to calm her down...

Cabir: I think hame nandini ki chachi ko call kar lena chahiye...

All nodded in agreement and he further moved to call chachi... he called her and told her the whole thing... with this chachi got all worried and just rushed out her house taking Rishabh and Chacha with her... to the hospital... and cabir went to navya... by this time her delivery was done and she was blessed with a boy... so he informed his friends too... and they all came to meet her... as she was weak so not to stress her more they didn't said anything to her about nandini... an just congratulated her with a warm hug... and then one by one met the little angel... then the nurse came and took the child away to keep him under observation... and injected navya ... soon she dozed off... then alya stayed with navya in case if she needed anything... and following her dhruv also decided to stay there... and reasoned if there was any emergency... and the rest moved to nandini... by then Chacha chachi and Rishabh also came there... and this time Mukti dealt with them... and apologising for her deed... yes ... Mukti for the first time apologised to someone realising her mistake... and chachi being a great person just said... that it was necessary to make her face the reality...
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After about 30 mins
the doctor came out of the emergency room...
With this everybody just stood up and asked him about nandini's condition... to which he answered...
SEEMS LIKE SHE HAS GOT SOME KIND OF SHOCK... SHE TRAUMATISED DUE TO SOMETHING...HER BRAIN IS THIS NILL... SHE IS EVEN NOT RESPONDING TO THE TREATMENT... WE HAVE TO WAIT TILL SHE GETS CONSCIOUS... though everyone was shocked to their core... but then coming out of the shock Mukti asked HOW MUCH TIME WILL IT TAKE FOR HER TO GAIN HER SENSES... to which doctor replied which came as a shock to everyone... SEE I DON'T WANT TO GIVE ANYONE FALSE HOPES... SHE IS HIGHLY TRAUMATISED... SO IT TOTALLY DEPENDS ON HER... RESPONSE... saying this the doctor left... leaving everyone shocked...

PRESENT-

MUKTI- manik u had such an effect on her that she lost her senses... and it was not loosing her senses just for few minutes or hours... or a day... TWO WEEKS... DAMN TWO WEEKS... SHE WAS UNCONSCIOUS... par uska hosh mai hona naa hona ek barabar tha manik... uss din vo hosh mai toh aayi lekin... we lost our nandini... and she lost herself...!!!
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So here goes part 4... what nandini did after coming back to her?? senses... ?? What will manik do?? And next part will definitely tell how she reached here... In London... and if all of them had supported her that time... then where are dhruv and aliya now...?
When will nandini wake up... what will be her reaction... on seeing him..???
And now plz do comment how was it...?? Suggestions are more then welcome... and also click the like button... if u liked it... and once again sorry for late update...

AMAAYA😊


Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
It was superb manik k ek action me sabki life badal di nandu has suffered so much now only manik can heel her. he has given her so much pain but wohi use wapis LA sakta hai. Waiting to know how she got addicted to drugs
Pls update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Omg Nandini's condition is so bad
Mukti is blaming herself
Manik just broke down
Amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Dear update is very 2 interested.
Mukti ka har jawaab. ..bang on tha.
Now manik know exactly what he did.
But sad for nandnis conditions. ..pyar
Ka dard. ...kahan pohncha dia bechari ko.
I want to read more about this story.
Each and every detail was awesome.
Please update soon can't wait to read.
Thanks for pm. And sharing this.
Very emotional love story.
God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Sweetheart u are sth special ... Awesome update... Big Wala thanks for the pm and the update ... Really really touched by ur words... Superb update just totally flawless... Manik was paying for his own deeds...mukhti's conversation was awesome... The flashback omg was shocking two weeks nandu didn't came back to senses omg... I had tears reading it yaar ...thanks a lot for this update and ofcourse for the pm ... Eagerly waiting for ur next update... Eid Mubarak dear ...May Allah bless u with happiness and success.. Tc.. With lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Thanks for pm n update...poor nandu suffered so much caus of manik ...

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