PART-24 U R MY PAIN...!!
Hello everyone...!! So I am back...!! And really really sorry for keeping u in suspense ..!! But a BIG BIG THANK YOU...!! to all those who commented...!! Finally...!! Page 50...!! I feels great to read all your comments...!! It really motivates me to write further...!! When I started with this story...!! I never thought I will get such great response...!! Thanks to each and everyone...!! And a warm welcome to all the new readers... of my story...!! And now let's move on with the story...!!
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At nandini's place 11 am-
Manik: nandini... I m ready for anything just... atleast don't do this to urself...!! Punish me as much as want...!! But don't do this to urself...!! It hurts to see u like this...!! ( saying so he tried to touch her face... but seeing him extending his hand to touch her... she backed off ... and manik was just staring at her... understanding her actions... he took his hand back...!! Thinking now he has lost this right...!! Right to touch her...!! But still he continued...)
Nandini say something...!! See I am standing here... YOUR CULPRIT is standing in front of u...!!
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After what seemed like eternity she spoke but what she spoke... shook them to the core...!!
Nandini: WHO ARE U...?? (She said with complete blank expressions...)
Her this question shocked them all...!! As how can she forget manik...!! The one who is responsible for her this condition...!! And manik was blank even to react because he thought whatever it may be she can never forget him...!! Then looking at manik's hurt and blank expressions abhi came and said it from his side to nandini...
Abhi: Nandini...!! Do u even know what u are saying...?? He is manik...!! 'Your manik' !!
( listening to abhi...!! Nandini looked at him...!! As her whole concentration landed on those two words... YOUR MANIK...! ! which was enough for her to handle now...!! So she furiously said...)
Nandini : I don't know him...!! Did u hear it... I don't know him...!! ( she said looking here and there...)And now all of u leave...! And get it straight in ur heads...!! Never ever come close to me ever again...!! I take back all the time that I gave u all...!! And u urself called for it...!! Now just go...!! And dare not enter this house... 'even if I die...!!'
( her words shattered manik more and more... as by her talks he got to know she hasn't forgotten him...!! It's just she hasn't forgiven him... so was giving him punishment by behaving like this...but as he heard the last words... he couldn't stop himself and called her in loud voice...)
Manik: NANDINIII...!! ( then he calmed a little as he saw her looking at him...) please don't say such things...!! U are angry on me naa...!! Then take it all out but please... don't keep it to urself...!! It will hurt u...!! Please atleast don't push them away from u...!! They are not at fault...!! They were always there by ur side .. and are still there for u...!! Please don't punish urself and them as well...!! They have put so much of efforts in bringing u back...!! Please don't say such things ...!! Please... I beg u...!! Just don't do this to urself... because of me..!!
Nandini: ( coldly) who are u...?? Haan ... who are u to me...?? That I will listen to u...!! I haven't given anyone rights to rule me...!! The once whom I gave those rights... have already left me all alone...!!( she was basically pointing at him... as if saying he doesn't matter to her anymore...) and even if they come back SOMEDAY...!! then they should know that they no more matter to me...!! Because I have come to far... and have moved on from them...!! And ' the nandini' they knew is already dead...!! And this nandini... doesn't gets hurt by anything...!! ( the last lines she said furiously... and her breathing became fast...)
( All were getting worried now about her health...!! As already she was on medicines and then so much of stress...!! Can lead to serious problems...!! So abhi gestured cabir to tell her to calm down...)
Cabir: Nandini listen just calm down...!! Please don't stress urself...!! Please let's move to ur room...!! Even ur hand is not ok till now... u rest ...!!
Nandini: Huh...!! U all really care for my health...!! Seriously...?? ( all nodded at her this question...) oh so u all care for me...!! ( she said with a sad and mischievous smirk...) or I know how all of a sudden u all started with my treatment...!! How all of a sudden... you came back to me...!!(she said by looking at abhi) and how all of a sudden... u decided to get me rid of the drugs...!! It's all because of him naa...!!( looking at manik... who was looking down out of shame ...) He must have come to u all and apologised...!! And u all being the '' true best friends'' thought we should help him...!! To get back HIS TOY...!! ( she referred herself as his toy... which shocked them all but before they could react...she continued...) tabhi mai sochu like how this perfect planning...!! Talking about past..!! Decorations...!! Walk...!! Medicines...!! Kya planning kari...!! And I thought... ki u all did this for me...!! But u toh did this for him...!! Because he said so... right...?? Just say yes or no...!! Didn't he said this to u all...?? ( all of them looked down... and nandini got the answer... and continued...) see...u all used me as a toy.. again...!! Jab chaha... tab vese chala liya..!! I being stupid listened to u all...!! ( she was now breathing really fast...)
(All of them looked at her in utter shock as she was taking them wrong ...!! And then... navya said...)
Navya: nandu tun sab galat samjh rai ho...!!! Esa kuch nai hai...!! Hum sab such mai tumhari madat karna chahte hai...!! Please...!! Tum shaant ho jao...!! Tumhari tabayat kharab ho jayegi...!! Tum abhi bhi weak ho...!! Please hum tumhe room mai le chalte hai...!!
( And here comes again this weak... and strong point... so how can nandini stay quiet...)
Nandini: Navya...!! I m strong...!! Did u hear it...!! I am strong...!! I can handle everything on my own...!! I am no more anyone's toy...( she said while looking at manik... and manik looked at her with lots of pain in his eyes...)
Manik: nandini...!! U are not a toy...!!! I never thought of u as a toy...!! Please don't say this...!! I never thought of u like this...!! Please...
( Manik was feeling so much guilty and ashamed of himself that now he doesn't even have the guts to say sorry to her... or apologise in any manner... because what he deserved was just punishment and not any forgiveness... and he was very much ready for the punishment...!! But nandini... refused to recognise him...!! And was considering herself as a toy... which pierced manik's heart... as he himself made his love feel like a toy... being used up in need and then thrown away ...!!)
Nandini: Huh. ..!! How does it matter now ..!! What matters now is... u all are no more a part of my life... !! Go get a life of ur own...and don't ruin mine...!! JUSST LEEEAAVEEE...!!
(she shouted on top of her voice... and that was it now she was out of control... so to calm herself she just grabbed one bottle from the backyard... and drank it in one go before anyone could register what actually happened she already had finished half the bottle...!! And she held the bottle with her injured hand... which caused more pain... but she was not able to feel it... as her heart was crying.. crying and aching beyond limits...!! But still tears never came in her eyes...!! In front of them... because she didn't wanted to show herself weak... she was trying her best to forget everything that had happened since morning...!! How her life changed again... with his mere come back in her life...)
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They all were feeling so helpless... but as nandini moved from the hall to the backyard they followed her after coming out of there shocked states... but were stunned to see her drinking again... as how difficultly they had stopped her from drinking but now she was again drinking..!! Then abhi just snatched the bottle from her as it was really harmful... even a single drop of alcohol... in her body was harmful and here she gulped half the bottle... and as he snatched it from her she became all the more aggressive...!!
Nandini: didn't u here what I said ... just leave...!! Leave me alone...!!
( Her condition was getting worse now...!! As alcohol has started showing it's effects...!! She was loosing her senses...!! But still saying...them to leave ...!! And then she took just two steps shooing them away...!! But then manik came in front of her...!! And forcefully held her shoulders... before she protests...!!)
Manik: Nandini...!! Kya haalat bana li hai tumne apni...!! Kya Mil gya ye sab karke...?? ( he was saying all this furiously but them calmed down... and said helplessly...) Kyu apna dard chhupa rahi ho...?? Ek baar bol kar toh dekho...!! Hum hai...!! Mat do khud ko itna dard...!! It hurts... nandini... !!( he got tears in his eyes...) it hurts to see u like this...!!
Nandini: If it hurts...!! Then don't naa...!! Don't see me...!! Because now this is the real me...!! Just leave...' just leave like always...!!' And u all... ( she said turning back to the others...) u all also just leave... like everyone did...!!
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They all were feeling helpless... as nandini was not ready to listen to anyone...!! She just wanted everyone to leave her...!! May be now she doesn't have the strength to face that rejection again...!! So before they leave her... she thought of leaving them...!! And being left with no other option...!! They thought to do as she says...!!! And manik said...!!
Manik: ok...!! Fine... u want us to leave naa...!! We will leave ...!!( This shocked all his friends as to what is he saying... but he assured them by blinking his eyes and said...) but first let's move to the doctor...!! It must be paining...!! ( he said looking at her hand...) let's get ur hand checked...!! Nai toh pain badh jayega...!!
( And seeing his all the more caring side...!! She was already loosing her senses...!! But on listening him talking about her pain... she said... )
Nandini: u care for my pain...!! Like really...!! Then just leave...!! ' BECAUSE U ARE MY PAIN...' DID U HEAR THAT...!! ' U ARE MY PAIN...'
( saying the those last words in painful and loud voice... she lost all her senses completely...!! And fainted...!! And before she could hit the ground...!! Manik and cabir held her...!! All of them got tensed for her... but abhi said it's not the time to waste... they should move to the hospital...!!)
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Cabir abhi manik and nandini... were in one car with nandini in manik's arms on the back seat... they were trying to wake her up...!! But sprinkling water on her face...!! She was coming to senses... but then she started breathing really fast...!! She was sinking...!! All of them were tensed for her...!!
Then abhi said something...!! Which came as a shock for manik...!!
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Precap: Doctor: I am sorry...!!
So here I end this part...!! Till the next part...!! Keep thinking...
What will happen...?? What did abhi say...?? How will manik react...?? What happened to nandini...?? And precap...?? Hawww...!! Is this the end...!!will nandini let manik heal her...??
Will be waiting for ur response...!! Please comment...!!
AMAAYA...
Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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