Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Thanks for asking dear.
Personally I love long part.
But please what ever is easy for you.
I will be happy with it.
Thanks for sharing your story.
I have one more requests. .
Can you pm. About your story to some more people.
This more readers will come to know about your
Story. Please try once and I will tell my friends to.
Please update by the time you said. I'm desperately waiting.
My time zone is usa.So maybe I will find by the evening.
Please pm.
Thanks for updating. 😛.
God bless you.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
PART 3(B) TRUTH OUT...!!

Travelling back In time...

After seeing nandini's condition their worry increased... as they thought what if manik doesn't come back... what will they do... how will they control her...? But somewhere... her hope gave fab 4 a hope ... that their manik... the soul of fab 5 will return...
So they also supported her... this increased her hopes...
They waited, waited and waited for him...
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Days passed... and their hopes were falling... but NANDINI ... her hope was still the same... here fab 4 's hopes where shattering... and their nandini's hope and determination was increasing with each passing day...

(But as it is said ... never keep ur hopes too high ... because with increase in hope... the pain of seeing those hopes getting shattered also increases... same was the case with nandini...)
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IT'S BEEN ONE MONTH SINCE MANIK LEFT... but nandini's hope just increased day by day... and now fab 4 has lost all their patience and hope... that manik will ever come back...

Searching and waiting for manik... they had spend that one month of their lives... this one month brought a lot of changes... dhruv and aliya were trying to sort their problems... mukti and nvya were concentrating on nandini's behaviour... cabir and dhruv were going heals over head to find their lost friend... they were so much into this searching mission that they forgot... that they had an album on their heads which need their attention ... as it was high time now... they should take up their responsibility back... as they had signed a contract with radio O2 on winning the talent hunt...
But this was not possible as their lead singer was missing... it was then dhruv took up the responsibility to complete this album... for his buddy... may be this was how he's gonna say sorry to him... and try to bring him back... but all went in vein as he was not able to make a single song... properly...
That's when radio O2 manager took the contract from them... and offered the runner up group to do this album... i.e. nandini , navya and aryaman...
But nandini being nandini didn't wanted to take this opportunity from fab 5 and tried to convince them... but this time fab 5 convinced her to do this... for her manik... to bring him back... they convinced her to make her voice reach manik when she cannot reach him... because this album... was a great deal .. and chance... to express her feelings for manik... so she agreed...
And they were given 2 months for preparing a song...
Those two months went in hast... with fab 4 helping aryaman and navni in making the song... their life was coming back to normal... somewhere they had accepted this life of theirs... and had moved on to some extent... but there was one person who still hadn't changed a bit... and was still the same... what changed in her was her smile... which seemed to be vanishing with time... but for her friends ... who had supported her in her difficult phase ... she tried her best to act normal... in front of them... but once she reached home... she used to cry her heart out. ... every night... so that she can plaster that fake smile... next morning again ... she thought her frnds didn't knew what she was trying to do... but they knew... still didn't said anything... because they knew... she will just divert the topic and will not talk about it... as they will only say that he's not gonna come back... which she didn't wanted hear... so neither they talked anymore about him ... neither she raised his topic...
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ALBUM LAUNCH DAY...
Everyone was there... and the performance was about to start... but suddenly... Navya started shouting in pain...and everyone rushed to her... seeing her condition it was clear that.. it was time... for bringing that new life into the world... so she has to be rushed to the hospital... without thinking anything... cabir and aryaman came forward to take her to the hospital... and then aryaman... said... I WILL TAKE NAVYA TO THE HOSPITAL... U ALL STAY BACK AND AND PERFORM IN THEIR PLACE... his words came as a shock to fab 4... as how are they gonna perform... so...
CABIR: Bro u stay her I'll take her to the hospital... u perform...
ARYAMAN: nai cabir ... it's more important for u all ... and about lead voice... nandini will sing... (saying this he just rushed to hospital with navya in his arms.. leaving behind a shocked group of people...)
But the need of the hour was their performance... so without thinking much they just went to the stage... and as fab 4 has helped them in making the song... so they knew it ... already...
STAGE - It was all dark at first... then song started... with nandini's voice...

Tu mujhe chhod jaaye
Yeh nahi ho sakta, saathiya
( she began the song... remembering the talent hunt day wen that msg came from manik... and her world just stopped their... still she didn't loose hope...)

Meri baaton mein tera zikr sadaa
Meri yaad mein teri fikr sadaa
Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho
Mujhe tum se mili apni adaa
(She remembered how her day started with him... his talks... his way of teasing... romancing... and how he brought music back to her life after that pandit thing happened...)

Kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
( dhruv sang these lines looking at aliya... as if asking her to accept him... and telling her how much he love her...)

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Arz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
(Nandini sang these lines just hoping that her manik will come now and take away all her pain... she just closed her eyes ... thinking that wen she'll open her eyes... manik will be standing in front of her... but to her dismay no such thing happened...)

Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikaala
Main jo mit bhi gaya tto wajood mera
Sadaa tujh mein rahe zinda
(As Dhruv sang these lines... aliya looked at him ... they shared a passionate eye lock... Mukti thought of Abhimanyu... and cabir all this while was tensed for navya... and our nandini was thinking of manik... how he always protected her... look after every problem of hers... those scenes just came in front of her eyes and a smile came on her face... but soon vanished as the reality hit her... that she was just imagining )

Kyun ki tum hi ho, abb tum hi ho
Ki zindagi abb tum hi ho.. woh o..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui abb tum hi ho
(She again sang in grief ... just praying... to her aaiyappa to send her manik back to her...)

Tum hi ho, tum hi ho
Karz bhi, mera marz bhi
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
( dhruv finished the song... and nandini just left the stage all crying... and came to the green room... followed by fab 4...)
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They reached the green room only to see an all broken nandini... in these 3 months this was the first time she cried in front of everyone... and now she had no energy left ... to keep her pain to herself... and just cried... and cried... but then...
MUKTI: nandini... stop crying...!! U cannot cry on someone... who left u... like that...
NANDINI : no Mukti ... he will come back... he will... he didn't left me... he will come... he cannot just leave me like that... he loves me so much Mukti that he will return...
(Now Mukti spoke... what they had avoided all these months thinking... everything will be normal if they don't discuss it... but now the conditions and situations had forced her to bring nandini back to reality... that manik's not gonna come back...)
MUKTI: nandini... he Is NOT GONNA COME BACK... did u hear it... he will not come Back... he is a coward... who couldn't face the situations so he left... he will never return... to us... he has forgotten the bond of fab 5 and bond BTW him and his shinning star... he will never come back...(Mukti said it loud and clear so that it reaches nandini's ears... she shouted on top of her voice... just to bring nandini back to reality)
And yes she was so right... he never turned back to them... his own family... that day Mukti... brought the reality in front of her... but that same day... fab 4 lost their angel... because after hearing Mukti's words nandini stood there all numb... she somewhere knew this but... WEN it came to her like this. .. she lost her senses and felt dizzy... and was about to collapse on the floor but dhruv and cabir came on right time to hold her... and she was unconscious by now... they rushed to the hospital...
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BACK TO PRESENT...
LOCATION: LONDON HOSPITAL
Cabir and manik reached the hospital and rushed to nandini's room... but cabir stopped manik form entering... and just closed the door on his face... and manik just left for doctor's cabin ... because now... he was curious that what had happened to her...
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DOCTOR'S CABIN
MANIK: doctor ... Hello I am manik malhotra... I want to know about nandini Murthy... case ... as in what has happened to her... each and every detail...
DOCTOR:sorry Mr. Malhotra but I cannot give any information to u as it's against the rules... to leak any patient's medical history to anyone other than family...
MANIK:(furiously) I don't give a damn to rule... do hell with ur rules... u know who u r talking to...?(with this he just grabbed the doctor's collar ) I said want to know ... that means I want ... did u get that...??
(Doctor was horrified with his this behaviour and so decided to tell him)
DOCTOR: See Mr. Malhotra I don't know what she is to u... but... since u r insisting then listen... nandini is really not well... I don't know Wat had happened in her past... that made her take such big step to forget all that... but it's really harmful for her... she is...
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MEANWHILE IN NANDINI'S ROOM :
MUKTI: cabir how can u take him to her place... u know what all he can do...
CABIR: Mukti... that time listening to him I was so angry... that I couldn't control... I just wanted him to know... that just because of his stupidity... how much nandini has suffered... I wanted him to know what has he done to that naive girl... who once used to laugh whole heartedly... but now laughs only sarcastically... that to on her own life...
She has lost herself just because of him... and because of him she is now...
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IN DOCTOR'S CABIN... AND IN THE ROOM SIMULTANEOUSLY...

DOCTOR in his cabin and CABIR in nandini's room... said... Is ADDICTED TO DRUGS... SO MUCH SO THAT SOMETIMES SHE EVEN FORGETS WHO SHE IS...
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So ... done with the most awaited part... but I know some questions are still there in ur heads... how come she came in contact with drugs... ? Why didn't fab 4 stopped her...? How will manik react...?? Where are dhruv and aliya... ??
Next part will be how manik will react... and how he will confront his frnds...?

Thank you...!!

Now chalo chalo... comment fast... fast... as i have also posted it before time...and also click on like... if u had liked it... tell me... was the part up to the mark... or not...
And for pms plz buddy me... and silent readers... please... atleast comment on this part... as now the most of the suspense is out... and more yet to come... but still this was most awaited one... and the rest is up to u... and sorry if I have disappointed anyone... with this part...
Criticism and suggestions more than welcome...!!!

AMAAYA😃😃😊

Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
nice part...
cont soon
waiting fr the next part...want to know how will manik bring back nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Thanks for the update
The song was superb goes with the situation
The way u penned their feelings while singing was beautiful
Their pain mukti crying for abhi
Nandini for manik
Cabira tensed for navya
Nandini is addicted to drugs?? How
Where is her family chacha chachi Rishabh amms?
Mysteryyy...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Dear..update was very emotional and awesome
And of course up to the mark.👍🏼.👏.⭐️.
You give very beautiful details about each and every thing.
I was literally cried when reading nandnis conditions. 😭.😭.
The song choice was very 2 good .
It felt like this was only for her. 😭.🥺. I was very sad
Through the reading. This is the power of your writing.
I just feels each and every scene in front of me.
This is the story they need to make ky2.s2.👏👏👏.
Thanks for sharing this very important and very interesting
Storyline.
And chapter was long and I enjoy it too the core.😛.
Yes you posted before time.
Thanks for p.m.
I just wanted to read more and more.
Can't wait for the next part. 😛.
God bless you. ❤️.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
awesome writing
pls continue soon
its so emotional
poor nandu on drugs omg
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
awesome story
quite emotional
I cried reading this
waiting eagerly for d nxt chapter
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Thanks for the update!!...bechari nandu is suffering so much that she is addicted to drugs..manik what did u do...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update nandini is totally shattered.
Ab manik hi kuch kar Sakta hai. Manik hi nandu KO wapas LA Sakta hai . pls its good to see that maniks friend are with her waiting to read how she got addicted to drugs n what will manik do.
Pls update the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Hy...dear me once again. 😛.
Poor nandni ko drugs edicts dekh kar dil ro raha hai.
I want manik see his own eyes ...
How he destroyed her life.
Samne ho ke bhi wo helpless ho.
Because I know drugs can't be easily koi shod sakta hai.
So that would be maniks punishment. .
Kabi wo manik ko pehcane kabi nahi. ..
Apne nashe main mast...
This will be going to very satisfied. .
For his punishment. ..
But whatever you will update I will love it for sure.
Thanks.
Keep smiling.⭐️😛.


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