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Posted: 6 years ago
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Pehle pyaar ka pehla gum!


It was raining outside...and there was a girl siting near her balcony door, staring at the dark night with her teary eyes.

Pehle pyaar ka pehla gam...
Pehli baar hai aankhen nam...
Pehla hai tanhai ka ye mausam...
Aaa bhi jao, warna...
Ro denge hum...

At that moment, she felt that her life is also dark like this rainy night without any moonlight n twinkling stars.

Her heart was yarning for that one person who has become her life in last one n a half year. Who's simplest gesture is enough to bring a sweet smile on her face. When he smiles at her...she feels that she is special. And when he talks to her...she feels like she is the luckiest girl in the world!





To read more......








Index from original thread


Prologue

/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3262141/maaneet-os-pehle-pyaar-ka-pehla-gum-sequels-link-pg-142


Part1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68342106?tid=3262141

Part2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68410701?tid=3262141

Part3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68576205?tid=3262141

Part4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68777559?tid=3262141

Part5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/68861116?tid=3262141

Part6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69030389?tid=3262141

Part7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69421306?tid=3262141

Part8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69936007?tid=3262141

Part9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70313967?tid=3262141

Part10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70548946?tid=3262141

Part11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71417867?tid=3262141

Part12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71931706?tid=3262141

Part13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/72428756?tid=3262141

Part14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74040327?tid=3262141


Part15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/74474861?tid=3262141

Part16

(a) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75083090?tid=3262141


(B) https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/75124381?tid=3262141


Part17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76791761?tid=3262141


Part18

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77447028?tid=3262141

Part19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/78627061?tid=3262141

Part20

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79044794?tid=3262141

Part21

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79519881?tid=3262141

Part22

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/80285818?tid=3262141

Last part

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/81438598?tid=3262141



Maan's point of view

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3563163/mg-os-pal-pal-soch-me-aana-na-last-part-pg71-next-os-link-pg83

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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
Congratulations on your story

The concept is just Fabulous

Maan and Geet are best friends in 9th class
and she enjoys his teasing
it seems both know each other well and enjoy spending
time with each other
school trip was awesome

will be waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thanks for posting this!

fabulous start! superbly written!

loved how they met and became friends! Geet misses Maan so much!

liked how he teases her!

waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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wow and i get to read this again :) I had wanted to know how it ended, hope this time we'll know
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on your story
Will read soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very sweet start
Innocent friendship to love
Geet's feelings beautifuly written
In love with him and he is so nice caring
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on your story
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just love their pure friendship
Her realisation her feelings for him so special
It's seems like when they are together whole world fade , they keep engrossed with each other
And he too deeply care for her ... sharing chocolates ..sharing is caring lol

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just noticed the story name.. phela gum😭😭 oh no
Edited by Keepdreaming - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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thank you... will read!

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