You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Some times pain becomes just a word when you cant show your helpless situation to any one ... Despite of being surrounded by a crowd of people u feel you are the one left alone in the world to fight your own battle which was never yours

When a girl is given freedom to chose her chose of cloths education then y not a husband? There are several questions, which every girl has at a point of life if only there is some one to listen

It was just 3 days back she was called back from her college as she finished giving her exams the same night her engagement was announced she wasn't given a chance to speak for herself...

That night was no less than a nightmare for her every one took her ignorance as her acceptance n silence as her shyness... she still remembered that night after her engagement she was walking in the corridor lost in her thoughts when she was pushed to the wall harshly few of her bangles broke before she could yelp in pain a large palm closed her mouth not letting a sound escape her lips...

Looking at her closely as if analyzing her he spoke in his dangerously close voice

Good u are pretty enough even I was wondering what did maa see in you... giving her a last glance smirking he left the corridor leaving her shattered for life!

Her fianc of few hours rubbed it on her face that she was nothing but a peace of good looking meat... she tried talking to her ma but all she got to hear was the wedding was in next 2 days n her fate was sealed with him!

She was a graduate n a topper of her batch she had her dreams and aim set in life, which came crashing in the blink on an eye!

Come to think of it is it only the girl who dreams of her future may be he wasn't give a choice too maybe he too has planned some thing else which didn't include her in it!!

Before they both could go any further in their thoughts he filled her partition an tied the scared chain on her neck!

The lone tear that escaped her eye went unseen in her long veil n his fisted hands in the shower of flowers!

She didn't want to cry for her family who became strangers to her with every passing moment n he hated her for at least not being emotional towards her family!

Seeing her standing like a statue he picked her up n walked out towards his jeep for the world, which looked on, it might have seemed romantic but for him it was his limit of tolerance... She and her attitude can go to hell for all he cared was he couldn't bare any more tantrums from her highness...

He was Maan singh khurana the son of sarpanch of the village and she was Geet khurana his newly wedded wife!

I know you might have heard a lot of stories on Sanjog and Destiny which ends on them getting together to live happily ever after or may be not so happily too this is my take on such a ordinary story of usual couple with their flaws

Rest I would let you know if you wish to...

-Spoorthi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Part #1 pg 3
part #2 pg 8
part #3 pg 14
part #4 pg 21
part #5 pg 27
part #6 pg 35
part #7 pg 40
Part #8 pg 50
Part #9 pg 56
Part #10 pg 69
Part #11 pg 75
Part #12 pg 84
Part #13 pg93
Part #14 pg105
Part #15 pg114
Part #16 pg131

Thread #2


CS





Maan Singh Khurana
As we already know is the son of sarpanch 6th class pass helps his father solve the issues of village

Geet Khurana

Ambitious and a today's girl whose life is in the current day well educated that's it for now...

Rest we have maan's Maa, Baba, and Dadi
u can imagine them with who ever u want i'll pakka not mind😉

we'll have few more characters they will be introduced as the story progress
...


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Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for the new story!!
Really amazing start!!
geet want to pursue her studies
but everything shattered with the name of marriage
Maaneet married... hope maan understand her
eagerly waiting for the journey of maaneet!!
Thank u for this story!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for new one
seems intersting
by the way added as buddy😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mittu--

Congo for the new story!!
Really amazing start!!
geet want to pursue her studies
but everything shattered with the name of marriage
Maaneet married... hope maan understand her
eagerly waiting for the journey of maaneet!!
Thank u for this story!!



Thank you for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyadecember

Congo for new one
seems intersting
by the way added as buddy😊



thank you!😊
n thank you for the second one too😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story with realistic touch.
Waiting for more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1mk1

nice story with realistic touch.
Waiting for more.


Thanks for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting sentiments of a girl who is overqualified in the match
I wonder why he agreed to the match?
Just because she was pretty enough?
Do you finish stories or are you one of those famous for incompetes?
I hope not😆

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