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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: KasiKasi
Nice ff
Part 1 & 2 awesome
maneet r married.geet is graduate or maan is farmer
waiting for next

Thanks for reading😳

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Update

Maan has made up his mind and seems that he assumes that his maa cooked and not his wife , the sad fact is that he feels his wife is ashamed about him so all he wants to do he give her pain with his words .
but again I'm not understanding why Geet did not wake him in the morning , fine she might be scared because of whatever he did the night before but she too needs to meet him half way .
In Geet's mind all she sees is that her husband don't like her

Point y didn't she wake him??

I haven't expected this question...

Thanks for reading😳

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Mamatha

@mamatha.

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Hey...

Loved the concept of story, where a educated girl married to a farmer of a villager.

It wil be interesting to watch two different personalities wil cope up with the responsibilities and a sacred relation called marrige...

Waiting for next part...

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jaidevchoudhary

@jaidevchoudhary

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

nd dis one I lykd completely...waitng 4 d update...I lykd tough nut at start bt den u screwed it...to be honest enouf...I guess It was me who did have enouf gray matter in ma brain 2 understand ua dat story...bt this one is good...great going..waitng 4 update

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Nice story concept

maan uneducated and geet graduated

that was big difference

both force to this alliance

and on first day maan mu her

and she also didn't clear his mu

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Rashmi234
very nice part

Thank you😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: mamatha.
Hey...
Loved the concept of story, where a educated girl married to a farmer of a villager.

It wil be interesting to watch two different personalities wil cope up with the responsibilities and a sacred relation called marrige...

Waiting for next part...

Thanks for reading😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: jaidevchoudhary
nd dis one I lykd completely...waitng 4 d update...I lykd tough nut at start bt den u screwed it...to be honest enouf...I guess It was me who did have enouf gray matter in ma brain 2 understand ua dat story...bt this one is good...great going..waitng 4 update

Thanks for reading!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sanum23
Nice story concept
maan uneducated and geet graduated
that was big difference
both force to this alliance
and on first day maan mu her
and she also didn't clear his mu

Hope for the best!

Thanks for reading😃

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Part # 3

Her father who was her angel from childhood whom she shared every little secret with didn't consider telling her this... how could they do this to her...

She didn't even know what she was crying for... it was more than a hour she heard her mIL call her washing her face she made herself presentable n walked downstairs

Dadi quickly came to my side n took me to one of the rooms

After making me sit she handed me a glass of water slowly patting my head

Missing them??

Her head shot up at the question with the silent tears that escaped!!

We all have to pass through this phase beta me ur MIL every one... one day u will see when u will be called by ur mother for some thing... u will not even have it in u step out of this house... By then this will be ur home where you will find peace n solace...

U know what happened when I came here for the first time. ...

Suddenly the door slammed open n her MIL walked in looking all tensed

Maa what happened is everything alright geet is ur hand still burning here let me see...

Maa I think we should apply ice hai na... u don't worry geet see it I'll apply ice it will be alright and not even burn...

Shanti calm down its nothing see she is missing her parents thats it u sit down or else ur knee pain will start again...

Maa!! She is my dIL n u aren't even letting me love her!!

Shanti stop being so dramatic. .. acha geet beta where were we... You know when I was at ur age

And few more ladies joined n this discussion continued all the while in the kitchen n while having lunch too...

By evening most of the relatives left only the close ones were left who were leaving next day morning...

In all this she did get distracted n was occupied my some work or other... she learned that usually her Maan's father comes home for lunch or he would send someone to get his lunch picked from home n maan never has lunch from home... It would always be from the farmers families who work in their fields...

Once he took lunch with him n there was a huge drama created at our house demanding an explanation if they did something wrong y did we send him lunch... true there still existed people were so pure at heart!

By evening her MIL was her maa n FIL was papa accepting them was so easy it was just few words of love n respect they were ur family now!!

As they say mother in laws are not evil or strict they are just possessive for their sons... as they say son is always closer to mother...

It was already evening n maa asked her to freshn up n get ready she didn't know if they were going out some ware or something... n she didn't want sound rude to them by asking unnecessary questions. ..

Walking back to the room brought back the harsh realities back to her... she didn't even know what to do now as there is no way out of this situation... she was married was her present the sooner she accepts it the better it would be!!

Quickly washing her face she got ready n walked down to ask if her sari was ok or she needed to change...

Geet switch off the gass beta...

Ji maa..

Geet make sure u on the lights of the backyard too nandu may come a bit late today

Ji dadi!!

This was the scene he was greeted with his wife running aroud the house from one corner to other lifting her sari a bit adjusting her pallu at her waist all fresh n beautiful while he returned in the evening... he was late as usual but when he was in the field he usually forgets himself!!

Then the motor also was on repair so he had to engage more labour to water their field dropping Ajit at his home n having snacks by Bhabhi he was he was a bit too much late...

Maa saw him at the door and called to get in n freshn up so that they can have their dinner together!!

Still in shock he walked towards his room when he heard his maa send geet to the room if he needed something!

With the melody of her payal he knew she was about enter... he caught her hand n pulled her into his arms shutting the door behind!

Her smiling face... fresh n glowing looks or her accepting his family he didn't know what was the reason he for once wanted to forget everything n feel her in his arms...

His wife whose every relation would start from him... who would walk with him...who would wait for him... fight with him... care for him... want him and love him!!

His hold on her tightened with every passing second...

What ever the issues may be he will do his best to resolve them after all if she could accept his family y can't he bend a little maybe he was wrong too...

Parting a little he gave a tight kiss on her cheek n walked to the washroom leaving her baffled!!

To Be Continued. ..

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago