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Part 13- aww Geet falling for her husband, they say you fall in love once you realise the importance of a relation maybe that's what happened here. But so happy and then the hug and Maan finally getting some Akal but like I said I don't blame him 😆 amazing update can't wait for the next
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maan thinks she is not in to him and she like someone else but seeing her putting in her mang,he become very happy and go and lift his wife in his arm,geet cant understand what is happen to him? nice update soon
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Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

i dont like this aanchal

make her maan's sister :P

cont soon


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thanks for reading!
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Originally posted by: sugivarun

hi dear
Amazing writer with amazing storyline
I won't think this maan will suddenly forget geet and attracted to some random girl.surely u will surprise us with good turn of events.its really difficult to read this maan anchal parts on this storyline with heavy heart


welcome to the story!🤗

thanks for reading😊
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Originally posted by: sophiexx

Part 13- aww Geet falling for her husband, they say you fall in love once you realise the importance of a relation maybe that's what happened here. But so happy and then the hug and Maan finally getting some Akal but like I said I don't blame him 😆 amazing update can't wait for the next


good that u dont blame him😉

thanks for reading!
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Originally posted by: idunno

maan thinks she is not in to him and she like someone else but seeing her putting in her mang,he become very happy and go and lift his wife in his arm,geet cant understand what is happen to him? nice update soon


thanks for reading!😳
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thank u😳
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Originally posted by: annirogc

waiting for next part

posting in a while😳
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Part # 14



After being back from her house there was a sudden feeling of loss like she has left behind her childhood.. her playfulness n her 22 years of life behind... helping Maa in the kitchen she looked in her reflection in the nearby plate it was like she was seeing someone else so calm n composed!

She didn't want to be left alone so she walked into Dadis room n n settled beside her silently resting her head on her shoulder seeking all the love n care from her!

Maa came after a while talking to papa on phone she sounded tensed n worried... cutting the call she explained the situation to Dadi that some suraj tried to steal n sell weat bags from the mill in the night! N Maan was still unaware of it... though this was wrong thing to do suraj was a good person there might be something behind his deed... and so on the discussion continued...

Wonder y Maa was so afraid of Maan... though he maintained a tough exterior n was upset with her n didn't like her at least to some extent he seldom got angry! Haan haan Babaji I know he gets agitated at every silly thing when it comes to me but its only with me otherwise he is always calm isn't it?

She was on the terrace bringing the dried cloths when she noticed his jeep coming into the gate n stopping with squeaking halt!

He was unusually early today was everything alright.. or was it coz of that Suraj issue... she hurriedly climbed down the stairs almost tripping on the saree which was on top of the heap of cloths she was carrying as she wasn't even able to look ahead cursing herself for her clumsiness n cribbing to her Babaji she entered her room to sort out the cloths n take them down!

Dumping them on the bed she sprawled on them on her stomach smiling n straightening her back muscles ... suddenly out of nowhere she heard someone clear throat was it maan.. she quickly got up pulling her dupatta which was some ware between the cloths n turned around to hide her embarrassment

He quickly walked out of the room not wanting to do something like the morning n go in flow with his ever ready emotions... n make her feel more uncomfortable! Though he found the idea of staying away from her n giving her space quite absurd but he didn't want to spoil the things which were already on a delicate note...


She heard a huge roar n a heated argument from the downstairs while she carried the rest of the cloths down..


Maa n Dadi were standing on one side n I think it was the Suraj guy on the other side with his head bowed down n tears streaming down his cheeks...

Why Suraj I trusted u like my brother y did u do it!


bhai wo...


Shut up! Not a word ... if I was out of town then u could have asked Maa or Baba right but u didn't n u felt stealing was the best option right!


Get out of my sight suraj I don't want to see ur face ever in my life... u have shaken my belief on people around me now!


Leave!


He hurriedly left out of the doors leaving our family in thoughts... Maa n Dadi quietly left leaving papa n Maan alone... she quietly left to the kitchen to prepare for the evening snack as they were home early!


This was on habit she learned from mom to make something light for the evening to have it along with tea as she was setting the tray she heard Maa from behind asking to take coffee for Maan as he was early today... thanking her Babaji inwardly she replaced the tea with coffee n made her way out ... Maa n Dadi were quite shaken up with the events n even warned me to be careful while talking to Maan...

He was quite furious n hurt dejection was clearly seen in his body language with his slumped shoulders n restless eyes.. She quietly went n stood beside him placing the cup on the parapet wall of the terrace n looked on while the sun was setting


Maan I heard someone say it's not people but the situations that are wrong!


Don't hurt yourself!


Slightly creasing his shoulder standing by his side she left silently letting him ponder over his thoughts for a while...


Was it the same Geet who was playing with the washed clothes a while back who talked so maturely!... Shaking off his thoughts he walked back down as it was already dark n he was standing there for quite a while... he freshened himself n came down for dinner with a straight face not letting his expressions tell that he was way calmer than the evening though his eyes were searching for her... coming with a excuse he turned to Dadi...


Dadi where is Baba he isn't here for dinner... is he ok?

He is alright Maan there is some paper work of his office n Geet is helping him...

Ok let me call them!... even before Dadi reacts he was on this toes to his father's office room... there she was by his father's side jotting down something chewing the pencil mercilessly... god she is so adorable... he was proud of his wife who effortlessly stepped into his shoes for being a son to his Baba n helping him in his affairs lifting his burden off his shoulders at least to some extent!


He was broken off his thoughts when his Baba called out to him!


Maan what are u doing there come in beta...


Baba wo Maa is waiting for u for dinner..

Oh thanks for reminding beta ... I was really hungry... chalo Geet lets wrap it up for today we'll finish it off tomorrow!

She was setting the papers n arranging the files back to its place...not noticing that he was right behind her admiring his better half leisurely!


Geet please don't eat pencils what will others think if they see u!


The khurana's don't even feed their DIL much n her poor self survives on pencils!!


Her eyes popped out of sockets listening to him while he walked out taking backward steps kissing the pencil!


Did her husband tease her Babaji the thought getting red in embarrassment




Colours filled in my life... are few shades of you and few of me...





To be continued...



Hay pep!

I will not be much active on If for a while don't panic u'll get ur updates on time😳

n yaar i dont want so many people to read this story... this response is giving me sleeplessness🤢 please come up for a solution for it too😳


Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part...geet really dwel into maans family very well..love the way their relationship progressing..hope to see more maaneet moments...

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