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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mauaa

hii.. how r u spoorthy..
i read all the parts in one go..
poor geet.. actually i really don't like such rural types of stories.. but i've read yr previous stories so i kept on going.. and after reading all parts actually m liking it...
so the story starts with their marriage.. and maan is more like a illiterate rich guy who values beauty more than anything..
you are right there were similar stories before this also.. and you are trying to portray as per your thoughts .. and i like it that way only.. and please don't make it a sad ending.. i don't like it.. atleast stories me to sabkuch achaa hi hona chahiye... happy ending makes me v happy n gives some good hopes that some day you will also have a happy day like this.. so don't crush that thinking plzz..
OMG.. character scatch is terrible.. maan is 6th pass??? thoda bada nahi sakte? ok.. chalo bargain karne ki try karti hoo 😉.. make geet teaching him or inspiring him to study further...
Part 1
OMG... geet was hungry.. and what she got on the name of food.. juice and sandwich that too in a washroom.. ahh.. she is so depressed already...
so maan is possessive for his family.. come on, how can he expect geet to do all things on the v 1st day.. would he be emphasizing husband?? lets see..
thank god.. maan didn't force her.. but misconception has increased,,
Part 2
geet is under so much pressure.. a new place new people to handle and maan is being mean.. i hope geet would sort out every thing soon..'
but everything is going wrong.. maan is taking everything wrong..
Part 3
v bad starting for geet and maan.. but thankfully maan's dadi n mother r v good to geet..

and and and.. aakhir geet ka jadoo chal hi gyaa.. everyone is happy with her so as maan.. and i m loving this story alot.. waiting for more..😳
i am looking forward to have a mindblowing lovestory... hope to get that soon..!!!!😃


Hellos and hi's
I'm perfectly fine... n the story has just started y worry about the end!

Sill if it soothes u this will a positive wala end😉

I actually wanted maan to be a anghuta chap🤣 but the story required his signature so 6th class😆

Now for ur request it would be easier for me too if I have a direct link but its quite not possible ffro.m mobile so ...

Thanks for reading!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chiki143

Even before I could say that its different story u gave 3 updates... but really the story is different with maan uneducated and geet educated. But in all these u still mainted his attitude the same😉. Nice concept. It happens in lot of arranged marriages... u have dealt it very nicely till now dear. It was sooo different for me. Thought maan will be brutal after reading prologue and part 1 but u proved me otherwise. Good start and wonderful going👍🏼


I have someone guide me with the characters n basic storyline so this particular maan has a variety of shades to him just wanted to explore that area...

Strange thing doc when ever I'm trying to experiment something I'm getting such a good response😆

Even in the other story I was really amazed to see people trying to encourage me at the worst phase😃

Thanks for reading hopefully it won't disappoint u!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing. So geet is married to that man who is not educated . geet was shocked knowing his truth n get annoyed with her parents but she has no option as for now she has to make herself understand and get ready to adjust in this environment. Maan's family accepted geet with their heart and geet is also happy seeing their love. Maan kissed geet on her cheek. Is it start of their married life. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

It's amazing. So geet is married to that man who is not educated . geet was shocked knowing his truth n get annoyed with her parents but she has no option as for now she has to make herself understand and get ready to adjust in this environment. Maan's family accepted geet with their heart and geet is also happy seeing their love. Maan kissed geet on her cheek. Is it start of their married life. Waiting for next dear


Thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part #4


Is it that easy for a girl to accept and adapt into the new lifestyle. .. yes she is married now that too to a farmer... willingly or not she has to accept this as her life...

But is she ready for it?

Accepting family is always easy they are elders have there set of boundaries n limits with each relation they are bound to... dadi can advise u... maa can guide you. .or papa can support u but they have there own ways in which they are linked to the daughter in law of the house...

Husband and wife is the only relationship which has no boundaries or limits. .. like this is the only topic we should talk ... we should behave in so n so manner or the dress you are waring...

Come to think of it maan quite didn't approve her night dress yesterday it was way too short ended just below the knee... but he didn't say much coz his saying anything would have spoiled the matter more given his foul mood yesterday!!

He came out after freshening up only to find her in the same position looking all lost n confused!

God how was he supposed to control when she was looking like that!

Closing his fingers in to a tight fist he turned towards her grabbing her tiny waist he pulled her close to him self...

Trailing his finger sensuously from her arm to her cheek he just kissed... he whispered in his low n controlled voice

Y are u so tempting Geet?

Giving a quick kiss between her brows he left her abruptly walked down to join his parents! He was beyond happy now with everything slowly falling into place...

She didn't like it!

Her heart beat has increased as if she had run a marathon... its only after he left she took a breath of relief...

She didn't like him touching her... kissing her or taking unwanted liberties on her... she wanted to know her husband before moving further... the knowledge of him being uneducated was still a fresh wound for her... it wasn't easy for any girl to give in so easily but she was trying right...

Can't he give her some time n space...

Wiping the tear that escaped she walked down before she was called again!

She has already lost her apatite in all the current developments in her life. ..

So she just pretended to eat something while serving every one...

Her lost look wasn't unnoticed by everyone but they choose to ignore thinking this was her first dinner away from her parents she might be missing them...

Yes she was missing them only if she had a say in her marriage too she would have respected them even more...

It was maan who noticed her unusual behaviour like she was just holding on to her patience... her already filled eves which she was trying hard to hide... she didn't even have a single roti n she was already done!

He already had a busy day tomorrow with the motor gone to repair he needed to visit the town's workshop to get it fixed and if delayed he would only be returning the day after tomorrow... finishing few more of his works from the town...

So finishing his dinner he walked out to the corridor out of his home where his father was seated reading some book... informing about his plans for the next day... he walked into the house to at least take some fruits for her...

His mother handed him a glass of juice too.. oh he loved his maa so much!

Making a straight face he the glass from her escaping her teasing looks... he could hear his dadi n maa burst into laughter behind his back but he dared not to look back...

She was standing In the same place he was in yesterday... clearing his throat he approached her thrusting the the glass in her hands he urged her to drink!

Maa sent it for u... finish it!

He said standing tall n intimidating on her... she quietly drank the contents slowly prolonging the time making him more restless...

As soon as she finished he picked up n dumped her on the bed!

She immediately turned her back to him closing her eyes tightly while he took it to be her shyness...n hugged her from back gluing her to him self completely

Taking in her fragrance he mumbled ever so slowly in her ear that she would have missed if not the closeness

Geet!!

How is ur hand now better??

Here let me see... Hmmm good it was small burn...

She immediately pulled back her hand from his hold... chanting babajis name just to grant her one last wish ... just a little more time...

He found her silence a bit odd so he pulled her top of him just to look at her face... she hid her face in his chest...

Geet???

Before he could process his thoughts further he heard his cell ring... it is not very frequent that he gets a call from someone that too at such a late hour... so he pulled away from her and took the call...

Which much to her relief gave her time to compose herself... he sounded serious n was tensed while quickly dressing up... while being in the call...

He was about to rush out that he stopped n turned to look at her... she was just behind him by now she grasped the situation that in a drunkards fight they burnt their houses n the fire was spreading... it was a serious issue n needed immediate help!

She nodded n gave her silent support n he walked out making few more calls taking papa with him!

Her first day of marriage!




To Be Continued. ...
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Concept itself is banged on... its really something that I might wanted to read before I get married...so far I am loving the part one... its awesome... can't wait to finish reading it (currently going to enjoy few last moments with my family and cousins before my marriage)...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting story... loved all the parts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic and Superb Update

Geet has accepted Maan's family whole heartedly yet she has not accepted her husband in the same manner , why because he is not educated at the same level as Geet , because he touches her
so if her husband was educated and he kisses or holds her she would not have a problem with it .
Maan holding and kissing his wife because he wants his marriage to work fine he maybe uneducated but he could be someone that is extremely wise .
if Geet needs to know her husband than she needs to ask him questions if that is what she wants .
It is not his fault that he married her likewise with Geet its not her fault but she needs to understand that now she is married she has to accept her marriage 100% not halfheartedly that would be wrong .
yes I do understand for girls its very tough coming into a new home getting to know the in laws and in her case she is fortunate that her in laws does like her .
I also understand if Geet is educated she would like her husband too to be educated so that communication lines are opened easily also but an educated husband does not mean a wonderful married life , an educated husband could easily treat Geet worst

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks for reading😊

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