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Posted: 10 years ago
Part#9




Now this house doesn't even feel like mine... nothing has really changed same curtains... same wall colour even the bead spread is the same which I left... sitll I could feel it... somewhere deep inside... which was screaming at me reminding I'm at at my mom's place not my!

Starange but just a week back this was my home... but now how a simple terminology has changed the whole outlook!

Every action of my mom makes me feel I'm just a guest to this house, who has to leave sooner or later!

A girl just after her marriage isn't treated as a girl anymore... she suddenly grows up into a woman... on whom there are expectations. .. responsibilities and people dependent upon... every mother who very well knows that her daughter can't even clean her wardrobe. . Or is too lazy to wakeup in the morning expects her daughter to build her home with love n become a dutiful DIL of the house!

It's been 4 days since she is here... her mom haven't left side even for a moment... pampering her to no ends... her dad seems to have grown old suddenly. .. his restlessness n concern filled eyes on the first day ware very hard to forget...

That night after dinner when she walked into the backyard and confronted her father to know y did he bring her back... y didn't he even inform her before making a visit... he was so proud n there was a spark in his eyes... my dad was so very proud of me to have accepted that she was no more just their daughter but a Daughter in law of some other family... n she was right he should have informed her at least!

Though after a day she understood that bringing her to her house was a part of some post marriage rituals. ..but the fact annoyed her to no ends that y now!!

She has just started talking to him n after her almost suicide stunt the things got more bitter... she couldn't even explain her stand... or even apologise for her stupidity!!

What would he think of her... will he ever come to pick her up?? Or is he planning to leave her here n wash hands of her! If so what will she answer her mom... how was she going to face her dad!!

It was around midnight she was hiding her cell under her blanket still contemplating whether to ring him or not... her mom was sleeping next to her... she fell asleep while talking something n explaining her duties... but sleep was far from her eyes

What if he was sleeping he hardly sleeps she didn't want to disturb him... but what if he's awake...

She stole his no. From dad's cell this evening... now it wasn't that easy to ask your husband's no. From your father right!

Ok I'll will cut the call in a single ring if he is awake he'll call back.. anyhow she didn't have too much topup in her cell!

Changing the phone to silent mode taking babajis name she pressed the dial button n even before the ring completed she cut the call... taking a sigh of relief!

Good going geet now if he is awake he'll ring u back or else let's assume he's asleep...

Must be tierd hai na babaji!

Looking at the phone now n then whether it was working properly or not if it was charged or not ... clearing the inbox... If would drop a msg... changing her phone to vibration mode... she slowly feeling low gave in to her tired eyes...

Maybe after 10mins of half n hour she heard her mom shaking her in sleep to check where the sound was coming from that broke her sleep searching her cell under her pillow she looked at the screen to find his name flashing on the screen. ..

Picking his call she whispered a hello in a all hush tone making sure she wasn't disturbing her mom... she walked out of the room asked him to stay on line n not to cut the call... Making him all more confused with her strange behaviour that too middle of the night...

Geet???

Shhh...

Huh???

Opening the terrace door she took a breath of relief...

Geet??? Are u there???

Ummm

I saw a missed call from you. ..Everything fine. ..

Hmmm...

U wanted to talk something...or ask...

Wo... when... I mean when are you coming to pick me up??

Shit babaji did I sound desperate! Just take me with u babaji or burry me deep in...

Geet?? Do I hear laughter in his voice babaji this so embarrassing!

Umm what I mean is wo... Mom wanted to know... hmm yaa it was mom who asked me to confirm

Actually ur parents wanted to spend a few days with you... we were immediately married after your exams I suppose so they didn't get even few days with u... your mom requested maa to let u stay there for a week!

Oh... I didn't know. ..

This is getting more n more embarrassing babaji. .. Please spare ur poor child!

Hmmm

Does that mean you will be here the day after tomorrow??

No geet they called just yesterday! Which means a week more...

It's the magic of marriage that the nights are always shorter than the days!!





To..Be... Continued. ...





Hay yaar pep!
Chota part hai I know but u haven't read maan babu's side yet!
So hold on 😉

N for all those pep who post waiting msgs in this thread. .. he he😃 mujhe na badi sharam aati hai please don't wait for me☺️

And most importantly mai ne mana kiya tha na previous part pe comment na karne ko issi liye maine revenge le ne k liye delay kiya update karne me😈
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
great update dear
please do continue
fianlly geet try to talk with maan
great work dear please do contine thanks alot for the great update dear 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update the way u wrote girls situation after marriage in her own house its really beautiful because me also saw the same when my sis got married n came my ammi was pampering her too much (i was bit j)wow maaneet part was fab geet gave miss call like some school girl n thought if maan will come or not after her awesome act of suicide geet wants to go but she have to stay n best thing is she is restless lovely part cant wait 4 maans pov thnx 4 update
Edited by Drashtilove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice ud
geet not feeling as comfortable as before in her on
father house as she in her husband's house
she was missing hr husband she wants to clear
some thing to hr husband after she did that night
she having doubt that maan will take hr back or not
so she try to call him
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: srikantharaja

great update dear

please do continue
fianlly geet try to talk with maan
great work dear please do contine thanks alot for the great update dear 👏


Glad u liked it!
Thanks for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update.can u give me the link of your other works on maaneet
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

amazing update the way u wrote girls situation after marriage in her own house its really beautiful because me also saw the same when my sis got married n came my ammi was pampering her too much (i was bit j)wow maaneet part was fab geet gave miss call like some school girl n thought if maan will come or not after her awesome act of suicide geet wants to go but she have to stay n best thing is she is restless lovely part cant wait 4 maans pov thnx 4 update


Hota h u know but then in situations like these feel happy too she will anyhow leave in few days😈

N next part tho last part bhi h.. so sab sawalo ka hal bhi mill jayaga😉

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Nice ud

geet not feeling as comfortable as before in her on
father house as she in her husband's house
she was missing hr husband she wants to clear
some thing to hr husband after she did that night
she having doubt that maan will take hr back or not
so she try to call him


Thank you so much for reading!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: krithi12

nice update.can u give me the link of your other works on maaneet




Links hai read at ur own risk!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zida

thay r coming close


Yep!
As I already said just the initial steps are unsteady😉
thanks for reading!

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