The Tough Nut! ( Completed pg.45 27/3)

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The bumpy road n the most annoying group of classmates showing too much enthusiasm as if we were on some holiday!

For God's sake we were heading to our medical camp n look at them they don't even look like doctors. .. Babaji where am I struck!

These were the thoughts of Babaji's favourite child... actually there is a long list of things that she hates n poor Babaji has to make sure he never forgets anything from it... Not his fault after all, he is the one who called her parents to him. ... now she didn't have any other option than to turn the way she is...

The sun was about to set n there was a slight amount of moisture in the atmosphere, the moving bus n the flowing winds and not to forget the beauty at the window seat a complete Aradhna set up right!

Now babaji had planned for the perfect timing for the entry of our hero

Cutting through the winds ... overtaking the vehicles passing by... He reached the bus keeping his concentration solely on the road ahead!

Sometimes I wonder if it wasn't for the song that was playing from the bus, all that happened would never have happened. ..

Mere sapno ki rani... Playing on the radio I was too much irritated by the fact that in no time all of them will start singing on the top of their lungs, spoiling the whole piece I just started to feel with their silence. ..

The valley was deep so the driver was very careful while taking turns as I was about to close the window I saw a biker reach the side of our bus... he was in his white shirt n blue jeans. ..

It was a second our eyes met bus took a turn n he vanished from my sight!

The strange point of the whole scene was, for some reason the ghat road was closed in the evenings n there was no way there could be a biker on the road...

Maybe he must have bribed the guards or something. .. what ever it was he was somethin! Catching the attention of her... that too without even a proper meeting was something which wasn't expected at all

Years passed by nothing changed now she was a full time doctor, who had only one expression on her beautiful face which carried her arrogance ... her parents left her a small independent house in a decent locality where she hid herself from the rest of the world!

It was a regular night after a tiring day at the hospital she was called from the hospital to attend an emergency it was an accident case n the patient was struggling for his life...

She was the best in her field but as the nurse cleared the blood off his face her hands froze recognising him... but she had a task in hand so masking her emotions she did what she was best in ...

There are few instances when all the nature n also babaji join hands against all our attempts to fight the inevitable. ..

He was no more. ...

There was no one from his side and the hospital management couldn't trace his family even after months so she took his responsibility on herself and completed the rituals...

Why?? Maybe coz she was also an orphan n knew may be this was the end even she was expecting...

Right after a month from that day she received a letter from nowhere. ..

Mere sapno ki rani!!

Aaj hum ne apna beeta hua kal aur aane wala kal aap k naam kiya!!

Today I write my past and future on your name!!

Only yours...

There were some documents n cards of some flat on the name of Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana

But her eyes were struck on the letters "Only yours"




To Be Continued...


Index

Part # 1 Page 3
Part # 2 page 6
Part# 3 page 9
Part# 4 page 14
Part# 5 page 18
Part# 6 page 22
part# 7 page 29
Part# 8 page 31
Part# 9 page 42
part#10 page 45(last part)




Babaji ka bhi ajeeb khel hai na... now don't ask me yaar what is this it isn't making sense and all... people who would walk with me in this story are most welcome n those who have questions doubts n are not sure about it. .. hmmm can have chocolates cool drinks n enjoy your holiday!!🥳

Q k I don't have answers. ...😆

And yes if you are talking about my other works phir please don't worry sab complete hoga bus I need some time. ..😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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one minute, did u kill the hero of the story even before it started?
no angsty story please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

one minute, did u kill the hero of the story even before it started?

no angsty story please.


Sorry I didn't get you
angsty Matlab??😕
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28


Sorry I didn't get you
angsty Matlab??😕

crying type stories. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

crying type stories. 😆


Oh tho ek secret share karti hu
it isn't a rona dhona story😉
Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My dear... wat a start... I think twist happened even before the story started and u gave us a shock... 😡. But I read the comments below😉 so as it is not a rona dhona story u deserve👏. So now waiting for the exact story to unveil. But really different start dear. Left a lot to imagine and nice way to create interest⭐️. Pm me pls.
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Originally posted by: chiki143

My dear... wat a start... I think twist happened even before the story started and u gave us a shock... 😡. But I read the comments below😉 so as it is not a rona dhona story u deserve👏. So now waiting for the exact story to unveil. But really different start dear. Left a lot to imagine and nice way to create interest⭐️. Pm me pls.


🤗
I really didn't expect such a comment too😆

But PM😕
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Thank you😊
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A nyc start...
right nw its mysteriois...
i jst hv one ques...
Starting mai when she was on bus d timeline was when she was in medi college...
n when she treated dat man it was years after dat bus incident...
right??

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