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Posted: 10 years ago
came across this ff during my exam period but then didn't comment, I got kinda scared 😉 but wow what a story, I mean what a story (humour intended lol). but honestly amazing starting, maan an illiterate and geet educated and A lot of misunderstanding
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Posted: 10 years ago
and then the misunderstandings continued, maan went away for business and geet realised the importance of in laws. I like the slow and steady pace, although its not slow at all, considering its only been a few days and she's accepted her in laws and to some extend her husband. but it must be hard to be married to someone you don't know, and ur families not told you anything as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
she's comminting suicide, like wat and I thought all will be good, thank god maan didn't go to sleep and his advancements may not be appreciated by geet, but is by me but only on geet lol. she going to her families, I was scared also thinking that maybe he thought she was nut case and its best to do one
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Posted: 10 years ago
but thank god maan has more brains then me well at least you do lol, shes missing him and im missinh is ff so please update soon spoorthi, pretty please, Your a ⭐️⭐️⭐️ and this story is great 👏👏👏
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looks like u r hell busy so will waiting dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
typing chup ke se in office will post in a while😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
spoorthi !! do u need some spoorthi😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mamta-salian

spoorthi !! do u need some spoorthi😆😆


Ji nahi
u wait for me to post it
agar zor ka jhatka zor se na lage na tho u can call me any thing😉
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Originally posted by: sophiexx

but thank god maan has more brains then me well at least you do lol, shes missing him and im missinh is ff so please update soon spoorthi, pretty please, Your a ⭐️⭐️⭐️ and this story is great 👏👏👏


U were scared of this story😆

Chalo glad u liked it!
Welcome to the story sophie😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part #10


Silently cutting the call he looked at the starlit sky ahead...

It was a beautiful night... with gentle n cool breeze flowing in the air... just like her serene n gorgeous...

He knew he wantedly sent her away but it was necessary... suicide is a big step one would never ever think in those terms in the right frame of mind... he understood that she was emotionally drained n it would only be right if she was away from this new life of hers

He was always a man of few words it was only his dadi who could make him speak or else he always opted silence

She is the first woman apart from dadi who had seen him express... sadly which she couldn't understand!

It is always said that a girl has lot of dreams regarding her soul mate n her wedding... she makes sacrifices... adjusts, adapts and accepts her new lifestyle

Sudden relations... emotions expectations n acceptance were too much for him too...

He along with his own family had her family too... giving their daughter to him they have showed their trust in him... he also had additional responsibilities relations and change in lifestyle...

He one side was happy that for once they had a normal chat but the there was an uncertainty lingering round the corner too... there were a lot of what if's!

As they say life is all about taking chances n he was sure ready to take one...

After that nights call his father had some official work so he accompanied him to the collector office in the city... n it's not very hard to guess that the work got delayed n they were struck for few more days..

By the end of the third day most of the work was done except few Documentations n signatures... so he asked his father to leave home while he will follow with the rest of the papers shortly!

It was a quite a busy evening with crowded vehicles and roads people drained n worn out heading back to their homes...He didn't have much to do as the officers left for the day n his work prolonged for a day more...

Freshening up in the guest house he walked out to have a stroll in the city... the sun was just about to set n the weather was a bit cooler than the usual... finding a street food stall he thought to grab some thing for the time being which would keep him occupied...

His life was back to normal with his wife gone for more than a week now it was almost like he was back to his bachelorhood... not his fault though he hardly spent any time with her as from the very next day of his wedding he was back to his work n his tight schedule didn't allow him more leisure time...

He was about to sit when he felt a sharp pain on his foot ... he moaned in pain and was about to yell at the person but his breath caught his throat looking at her... she didn't even turn back fully but rushed away being dragged by her friends she yelled a sorry to the person she hurt with out even caring to look back!

Dressed in tight faded jeens n a floral shirt with a huge watch on her left wrist which was holding few bags giggling with her friends she disappeared into the crowd!

He heard the shop keeper saying something about college girls now a days. ..

Even before he knew what he was doing his legs followed her into the crowd... she looked beautiful!

He knew it stalking someone was wrong n if someone noticed him he would be in trouble... but something in her cheerful laughter pulled him!

When her glossy lips pouted to try the new shade of lipstick he knew he was a gone case...

Gosh the beauty her smile held when she posed for few pics with her friends was worth millions!

He didn't even realise he was seated in some restaurant until he heard the waiter asked for the order!

It was not so him to ogle at the girls he respected women at all stages of his life... giving a one last glance at her he walked out of the mall with a dreamy smile adorning his face...

Was it a new turn to his life or just a passing feeling he didn't know yet but all he knew was her college was very near to the government office n he would definitely be there on time to have a glance at her!

As the night darkened he closed his eyes waiting for the night to end sooner as he was desperate for the day ahead!

To meet her n to know more about her was all he had in his mind... his actions weren't in his control any more

It's all in us as to what n how we presume things...

Life always gives us choices its up to us to chose them wisely!

He was so lost in his dream land that he even missed to notice his cell flashing which displayed

Mrs.Maan khurana calling!

This was the first time that the night held uncertainty at both the ends!



To be continued. ...



Hay yaar people!
Thank you all so much for the wait! This weekend im having off from work so the updates would be prompt hopefully!

N about the chotu part above
Maan babu phisla!🤣


Oh yes and for all those who are taking ACT to be my next story sorry to disappoint u it is not! Ek k baad ek serious stories mujse nahi hogi!

And about Act! I posted it long back n just asked one of my friends to read it n u all came to know about it!

My next would be named BOYFRIEND! Which would be a breather for me n would post it just before I post the last part of this one which has still so many more parts!

And and and yaar pep! Thoda stubbon bano.. story we all are creating together u know it so demand karo... dhamki do... kya u all are being so lenient on me...

I liked Tough Nut thread more!😛


See u all tomorrow!

-Spoorthi

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago

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