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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start yar.. at first it seemed as if geet is getting married to someone else coz maan can't be that rude.. but indeed it was maan.. would love to read more n know how geet puts but with her gaon ka hudband nd also gets him to love her.. update soon..

luv
Rucha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dqno1

Interesting sentiments of a girl who is overqualified in the match

I wonder why he agreed to the match?
Just because she was pretty enough?
Do you finish stories or are you one of those famous for incompetes?
I hope not😆


Subha subha humari toheen😆

I take time but I do complete😊

My ghost story is about to end so this😃

Thanks for reading🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: frnd.of.frndz


awesome start yar.. at first it seemed as if geet is getting married to someone else coz maan can't be that rude.. but indeed it was maan.. would love to read more n know how geet puts but with her gaon ka hudband nd also gets him to love her.. update soon..

luv
Rucha


Thank you😃

I was thinking of poor maan he has to put up with his seher ki gori wife😆

Thanks for reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Looking forward to read ur ff... It is new concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulations for new story dear..😃
Waiting for another amazing one..

Par pehle TOUGH NUT update karo na..
End mein aake chod diya..😭
Ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha hai..
Update soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: creddy

Looking forward to read ur ff... It is new concept


Thank you!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Congratulations for new story dear..😃

Waiting for another amazing one..

Par pehle TOUGH NUT update karo na..
End mein aake chod diya..😭
Ab aur intezaar nahi ho raha hai..
Update soon dear..



Will update tonight
I was waiting for everyone to read the note I left in the thread!!😊

Thanks for reading 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Part #1


Anger and fear are two major emotions which rules one's self taking control of situations and turning the situation either on our favour or the opposite. ..

When they grip your heart there isn't much left for rational thinking... nothing in the world would seem right!

She was alone on a dark night with her husband who was driving n his family who were trying to make a conversation with him... his house was in the next village which was supposed to be very near to their and on the whole journey till now there wasn't even a ray of light!!

It is the irony of life the fields n the cool breeze from it which used to be so soothing to her were now developing an uneasy feeling like something worst was yet to come!

Her wandering thoughts came to a halt with the sudden break of the jeep n his raised hand which has protected her from hitting the rod!!

It was late in the night n she was hungry on the name of some rituals she wasn't given anything to eat since morning... now out of thirst and hunger and mostly helpless situation of not having anyone by her side tears blurred her vision which were on the verge of spilling!

Suddenly she was pulled to a room by few girls who offered her juice n a sandwich which they were having with spilling tears she took it unable to control herself she asked if she could use the washroom!!

Washroom wasn't the place to eat but after a whole day she got only these few minutes for herself stuffing the sandwich into her mouth she cried her heart out!!

With something In her tummy she was able to control herself n her overflowing emotions... washing her face she went to complete the rest of the rituals of the night!!

He hated the sight of her not even an hour she was treating his sister (ok not blood but meera was his sister!) as a servant! Yes he asked meera to make her eat something but that doesn't mean she will make meera work! How dare she ask her to carry the tray when she was walking like a princess bare hands...

His blood boiled at the sight of meera carry such a heavy tray n she not even giving a helping hand!! Keeping his anger in check not to create a scene in front of his relatives he walked to his dadi asking her to hurry up with the rituals as it was already past midnight!

After getting teased a bit on the name of getting impatient to be with my bride...he finished all the final rituals... somehow pacifying his mom to postpone the rest of the rituals to next day and asking her to rest!

Making sure everyone is settled n handing his mother some pain killers for the joint pains which would start sooner or later with all the running she did he was literally pushed into his room by his friends as their bhabhi was waiting from so long for me...

Sighing deeply he locked the door of his room n turned to search for his wife in all the flowery decoration... it was dimly lit so finding her became a bit more difficult! He walked into the room towards the balcony to get some fresh air...

Not knowing what to do she walked towards him who was lost in his thoughts... the sound of her jewellery caught his attention n turned towards her...

She looked so beautiful under the dim lights ...

He grabbed her tiny waist n pulled her towards him in a jerk startled by his sudden move a gasp escaped her lips... clutching her hair in a painful grip he tilted her face close to his looking into her eyes he was about to kiss her when he noticed her going stiff n shutting her eyes tightly...

His anger reached its peak n pushed her away walking to his wardrobe n he picked his white kurta pyjama n slammed the washroom door before commanding her to change!!

What does she think of herself she thought I was going to force her?? How dare she think so low of me!! Am I not her husband then y on earth is was behaving as if I was some monster!!

Da*m women I hate her!!

Freshing up he walked only to find her clutching her clothes n sitting on the edge of the bed!

Her husband didn't like her!!

His actions only strengthened her doubts!!

He took a step towards her when he heard her mumble

Babaji! I'm tired!!

Being rejected second time in just a hour of time his ego was hit badly

Most of the times the difference creep into a relationship just coz of miss communication she wasn't clear in her thoughts n her actions were showing something else... she wasn't ready for physical aspect of marriage yet!

Hell she wasn't ready for any thing related to the marriage... being brought up in a conservative family she knew the value of marriage n she was still trying to accept the fact that she was married n he was her husband!

How was she supposed to react when he would touch her... giving up she stepped out of the washroom in her fresh look n a bit damp hair

That's it he totally lost it! Twisting her hands behind her back almost caging her between the washroom door he dipped his head into her hair nuzzling in the crock of her neck... let his words sink into her skin which were slow n threatening!

Don't use these city tactics on me I'm not one of those spineless puppies who roam around women! Giving her a i mean it look... Patting her cheek lightly he went to his side of bed clearing the flowers he immediately drifted into a deep sleep giving into the tiredness...

Tactics!! Babaji???




To Be Continued. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
the update was great
story actually has a different concept and i would luv to read it further
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gulshan.MG

the update was great
story actually has a different concept and i would luv to read it further


Thank you🤗

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