DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hay people!

Before I start the story a little bit of clarification. .. This particular one is inspired from all the fairytales I've ever read, heard or watched...it may even seem similar to many tv shows from my childhood. .. so let me make it clear u r right! 😆

My first story was of dreams of happily ever after. .

Now this one will b on how it feels to own a fairytale. ..

Every girl dreams of living a fairytale life.. but how does it feel when a boy is forced to live one...

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INTRO


There is a clear cloud of worry everywhere .. I was only hearing all kinds of screaming around me some of pain, agony n some due to the huge bills!

Yes I was waiting out side the ICU for the doc to come out n give me any news. ..

As I saw doc coming out I rushed to him to enquire about my Dadi! My only family!

He said she wanted to meet me...

As I entered in I saw a very old lady struggling for her life as she didn't want to leave me...

Maan .. she called me weakly. .

To which I looked at her with tear filled eyes. ..

Don't loose hope son! I'll be alright. ..to which I noded. .

Kissing her palm..

Babaji if this is the last moment of my life please bless my son with a huge family. . As I don't want him to stay alone. . She said wiping my tears. .

It's been a week since then my small house was filled with so many relatives I don't even know few relations existed some came to meet dadi, some to find some job, some as they were fed up living in a village!

soon I was running out of money! All my savings have been spent on dadis med n the over flowing relatives!

As I was talking to dadi about the crises ..she said it will soon come an end as I won't be living longer!.. n the relatives will be leaving soon after!

Babaji how I wish he become all wealthy so that u never have to look back when u spend!

N to my horror I had a lawyer searching me from ages to hand over me a peace of land which I inherited!

Up on seeing it I I couldn't believe it in the centre of the city! Which would cost fortune. .. which I sold in almost triple the market price. . That's it from there on there was no turning back! I was super rich!

A month passed as I was called by the doctors saying my dadi was counting her last breath!

Even though she was in the best hospital in town but money couldn't save my Dadi's falling health !

As she saw me she spoke

maan it time for me to leave. ..


Babaji please send a angel to my son's life when it's time. ..as I won't be there to find one for him.. she said smiling n patting my cheek!

Those were her last words. ..

To be continued...

Part 1 page 6

Part 2 page 7

Part 3 page 11

Part 4 page 15

Part 5 page 18

Part 6 page 24

Part 7 page 28

Part 8 page 31

Part 9 page 32

Part 10 page 34

Part 11 page 36

Part 12 page 39

Part 13 page 34

Part 14 page 42

Part 15 page 52 (last Part)


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KASH! mera OS :)

The Tough Nut!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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CS
Maan Singh Khurana!



With out any intro.. dashing n desirable in the whole town then n country now!😳



Geet. ...something!




A complete puzzle which all of us have to solve..😉

Dadi. ..




Who Lived for her grandson

Not to forget Maan's family. .I tried giving there names but then I was afraid of thread getting finished😆
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well this story I will able to start from starting
poor Maan lost his dadi who was his only family
waiting for CS and next update
jaldi dena
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

superb intro

waiting
continue soon


Thanks for liking aparna! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia

well this story I will able to start from starting

poor Maan lost his dadi who was his only family
waiting for CS and next update
jaldi dena

Ya even I feel sorry for him 😉
Cs given!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on new story dear.
Nice intro n cs. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on new story dear.
Nice intro n cs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat59

Congrats on new story dear.
Nice intro n cs. Update soon

Thanks chahat!
N soon not happening!
As u know I have dreams to complete😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaniqra

Congrats on new story dear.
Nice intro n cs.

Thanks for liking!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story...you are super fast...😆

wow a fairy tale for a boy...kaunsi wali cindrallu ya rapunzellu...😆

but looks like it's really a fairy tale 😲...dadi ma jo bhi bol rahi hai wo wish secret small angels puri kar rahe hai...dadi bhi koi angels ki duniya se hai kya...

interesting concept...



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