You are My Home!! (part#16p g.131) - Page 5

Originally posted by: priyasree

Nice start

New flavor...

Originally posted by: zornitsa

New flavor...

Good job...

Girl from the circle ..where they dont have voice or choice.. But follow the ..whatsoever..

So the pain should have be inevitable.. From beginning..

Has she was allowed to get education.. Maybe she thought ..could voice out...but ..harsh truth.. Undeniable..

Decision taken and to be followed..

There she was mending ways...accept her destiny..

Come another blow from her fianc.. To be decor as good looking meat..

Now everything gone and done...she standing in dark corner..finding ways to express..and approaching him..but ..but..which she did not know.. Is inferior thought got into his mind..came out as hard arrogance..

Maan is all swept off by geet's beauty...on the engagement ..which he didn't want to accept.. But urge feel her was the encounter ... And Arrogance was all he could come up with..

Even at the wedding ceremony.. And her send off..

But he can't stop caring for her... As he is caring person by nature...who colud treat a non blood as sister...not to forget to give pain killers to mother for knee pain...

So ..caring and protecting geet come as reflex ..as he considering geet to as his..which still he have recognize and accept... May be lifting off her was also..a care ..not to get too emotional ...for leaving her parental home..

Again everything is getting into a wrong direction.. His thoughts about her..city life...

May be this how it has to be started...

And finding their home..

Have to wait..for upcoming.. Stunts.. Drama..Romance..

Congratulations for new story..which always can be explored..

Superb start...

Cont. Soon..

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Wow u are the first one to talk on maans side

and I loved it❤️

Thank you so much for reading!!

concept is really very cloose to reality ..

amazing concept n really different because geet is more educated than maan congo 4 new story

loved the part maan is very rude but he loves her family very much maaneets first night but misunderstanding begins very nice start thnx 4 update

Originally posted by: DAZZLINDD

Great start

Geet is like most of the girls ... who doesnt have a choice when it comes to selecting their life partners

n Maan ... it looks as if he hates girls ( Its not likely ... coz the affection wid which he states Meera is enough to show that ... he s not one of those highheaded village Guy who thinks girls as filth )

... or maybe he himself was not ready for marriage

both are reacting to the marriage in their own ..way not trying to understand other

Waiting for more 😃

PS : Do u have a compiled thread of u r stories ??

I havnt read much of u r stories ... would love to read em

Originally posted by: preeti.1

concept is really very cloose to reality ..

awesome