STORY OF MY LOST HEART! (Completed!)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Surrounded by tall n well built people who were starting at me ..n were getting close to me more than necessary. ..Though I was brave n all I couldn't help but notice the tiny fear that was creeping in my head!

Cursing the very thought of having fun out side the palace. . I took my defensive position. ..tightening the hold on my sword which was well hidden under my scarf!

To my dismay we were In a scheduled corner of the market place which was bursting with people who hardly noticed me... it all happened due to my over interest in the street food which was in the nearby stall n I lost my way... as I was walking through the crowd one of these men I think noticed my golden bangles. .

As I was about to draw my sword I heard someone call one of the men.. who was talking about guards wandering nearby searching for someone...

Suddenly they started to panic n hurriedly walked away leaving me alone with the stranger!

As they left he turned towards me ..That's the first time I saw him! His eye's were the first thing that caught my attention. .

U don't have to worry about them any more .. u r safe!

The command n strength in his voice were hard to go unnoticed! N that's the exact moment I learnt it's not necessary to exhibit physical strength everywhere!

Thank you! I mumbled. .

Being a princess my self I had few limitations n boundaries set which I couldn't cross. ..I couldn't help but watch him walk away Into the crowd. ..


Sitting by the pillar looking at the beautiful moon which was smiling brightly at me n the cool breeze which was helping me weaving dreams. Playing with the water of the pond. . I was Lost in the thoughts of today's events ...

I think there's more to my story don't you think?




Index

Part #2 page 3
Part #3 page 5
Part #4 page 6
Part #5 page 6(same page)
Part #6 page 7
Part #7 page 9
part #8 page 9(same page)
part #9 page 10
part #10 page 10(same page)
part #11 page 11
Part #12 page 12
Part #13 page 15
Part #14 page 15(same page)
Part #15 page 16
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice
interesting concept
waiting
but what about daadi's last wish

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice

interesting concept
waiting
but what about daadi's last wish


Thank U!

N about that...
Dadi ki last wish h puri tho karni padegi😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeti.1

Wow
Nice start
Interesting


Thank U! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting...she is a princess who rarely comes out of her palace and she met him..who is he, he sounds like Robinhood or Zoro..
would definitely like to read more of her story...
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Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

interesting...she is a princess who rarely comes out of her palace and she met him..who is he, he sounds like Robinhood or Zoro..

would definitely like to read more of her story...


Thank U! 😃
U will know him but slowly. ..
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Glad u liked! 😳
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this is really nice
waiting for next

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