Silly Little Heart!! (Completed!)

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Life is not that simple as it seems ... every big thing in life comes with a small twist to it..


It was a cool morning of Rainy season... i was returning from my visit to the temple... I saw a big shining black car passing by me... maybe they were our new neighbors... ignoring them I walked towards my home as I was getting late to my college n had a important assignment to submit...


Walking towards the main road.. jumping over the puddles carefully I somehow managed to reach the main road only to realize it was some strike today n there r no taxi's available... taking a bus was not in my option as it will take longer time to reach the college n my lecturer will surely murder me...


I had one option to go back home n plead my brother to drop me to college... maybe I could bribe him ... n that he can take his girlfriend to movie n I will give him my pocket money... I was still thinking about the pros n cons when the same black car stopped in front of me n its Driver who's seemed to be a nice person offered me lift unlike its owner who was in the back seat romancing his laptop...


To my luck they were going in the same direction... n I was in need so I agreed... on reaching the college I pulled out two chocolate from my bag thanking them I gave it to the Driver Kaka n one for the Man in the Back Seat n left hurriedly...


This continued for the next 3 Day as the Strike continued... But on the fourth Day there was no Driver n he was driving...


On asking he replied that driver wasn't feeling well so took a day off! The whole drive was silent n as a habit after reaching I took out a chocolate now I didn't know how to give it to him... but to my relief he took it from my hand n started eating... I don't know y I was suddenly blushing ...n left hurriedly...


The strike was called off that evening... n the drive was silent... We never interacted in these 4 days I never felt the need to talk but suddenly I felt may be there were words to be spoken... to let him know I was grateful to him may be thank him ... before I realized I was home..


I got down n was walking to my home when I heard him say he will pick me up tomorrow... a shy smile crept on my lips I just nodded n walked off hurriedly...


It was weak end n my relatives arrived at my home... suddenly everyone was interested in my marriage... it was getting too much n I left on a pretext to bring some groceries...as I walked few feet ahead I felt some one follow me turning back I found him ... before I could question him he said he was just talking a walk as the weather was good n n he had nothing much to do...


We walked in silence where we stopped at a stopped at a door ...he rang the bell n I guess his brother opened the door... it was small house but had some warmth ... his brother was a friendly person ... His brother had a huge dog... n named it Scooby ... I wasn't afraid of them but at the same time I didn't like them too...


I wasn't event dressed properly ... I was afraid if he's going to introduce me to rest of his family... I was in my salwar kameez messed up hair, reading glasses...in short not so presentable!... to my luck his brother told me his family stays a bit far from here...


It was quite long time I thought I should head home or everyone would get worried... I went towards the kitchen to tell him the same... when I accidentally heard him talk of leaving!


I didn't know y it hurt me so much!


I turned back to leave when he pulled me in to a hug n I let my tears flow...


he parted after a while...removed my specs cleaned them up n put it back... he slipped something in my hands n left... i walked back towards my home n hurriedly left towards my room n opened my palm... I was confused y did he give me keys. .. on looking at the key chain closely I realized there was a inscription on it.


Our Home MG!





INDEX

Part-2 page-4

Part-3 page-7

Part-4 page-11

Part-5 page-18

Part-6 page-19

Part-7 page-25

Part-8 page-27

Part-9 page-29

Part-10 page-33 (Last Part)




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Originally posted by: divydecember

Nice start
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

fab start! Well written



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Awesome work sporthy. Love it
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