~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 1~

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Posted: 14 years ago
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~madhoshi~

ek ajnaabhi se raat...do ajnaabhi...
na kabhi mile...na kabhi milna tha...lekin woh mile..kuch istarah..
ki phizayen bhi madhosh hogayien...ehsaas koo gayen..na unhe kabhar thi na us raat koo..
dari sahmaee hoyee geet..bachthe bachathe...us ke bahoomain...
jaise badaloon nabhi bagawad kar di ho...rim jhim..khush the shayad...
yah..koi shadhish..thi...unkhi..dono..ke jism aag ke tarah..jal uthe..
ajeeb sa kinchav tha..ajeeb se kashish..thi..dono door hona chathe the..khabhi..
dupatta ne saath chota to khabhi zulphoone..nazthikiyan..badnelaaghi..
kuch is tarah se koye the khi..naam bhi nahi poocha...
phir has ke ..aapni hi aap pe...mafai bhi maang li...
mera pechai goondai padeyen hain...mera dost chani ko mar diya...
abhi tum unsab se door hoo..daroo mat..
abhi subha hone main deer hain chahe to soo loo main idher hi hoon...nahi!!!
uske awaaz mein ek dar tha..jo use aapni taraf keech raha tha
thanhai...boondoo kii tip tip...khamoshi...aur sasoo ka uthal puthal hona jhalkaraha tha
kabhi nighaiyen mili..tu..khabhi sharam se ankhee juhk gaye...vaadii men chaahat ka
mausam tha shayad..kuch istarah ko gayen...ki sharam ho haya ki sare hadh jaise badal gayen...
bus ek dosre ke bahoon main ..intne kareeb aagaye the ki aab door jana namumkin sa laga

madhoshi main kuch aise kar gaye..jo unhe khud hosh main kabool na hota..
hotone chhuaa kuchh iss tarah badli fiza badla sama..
na usne aitraaz jataya...na wo sambhal paya aapne aap ko..

bus behthe hi challen gayen..ek ajeeb sa ladak pan tha...junoon tha...
dono ki sasen ek hogayi...dono ki jism ek hogayen...jaise bus is ki talash thi..
man ki awaaz to jaise kisi ne sunhe hi nahi...

jab savere surmai se andher ki chaadar hate..use dek kar woo sharmayee..
hosh sambala..phir apna aanchal..suniye..suniye..darthi hoyee..use boola rahi thi
palak jhapkathe..raat ke madhoshi main..use deehka..unki nazre mileen...
woo..main..main..I am sorry..there was defenit regret in their eyes..
mujhe ghar jana hain...main tumhe chot detha hoon..
nahi..main chali jaaovoo ghi..she just left..
chali gayeen..bhina kuch kahen...maan dehktha raha..rookna chatha tha shayad..
lekin kis haq se rook tha..

hi me again muskan...just could'nt stop my creative bug..from writing another...this is not as long as pyar ka ehsaas...I am trying to keep it short & fewer updates...
please let me know how is...also tell me whether to include u in the PM list...just click the like button I would know...
love
muskan
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SahSah thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
hey...that was nice....
looks really interesting...
will be waiting for it...
do add me 2 ur pm list
thx....u r fab...
do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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am second yaaayyy 😃
really nice dear 👏⭐️👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
loved it ⭐️
are u starting another ff?
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oooooooo lol
amazing...
congrs for ue 2nd ff
interesting do update and add me to ur pm list
xx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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All I want to say is...
Best Wishes for your new FF! 😊

May it be as successful as Pyaar Ka Ehsaas 😃😃😃 (TBH I'm sure it will!)

I really like how even a few words, you convey so much passion! It really is commendable 👏👏👏

Please add me to your PM List and thanks for PMing me about this ⭐️




Edited by Ayesha_MSK - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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muskan wowwwwwwwwwww loved it yaar👏plz PM me about next part😊and ya plz send next update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yay muskiiii.......... another one... so sweet of you... please include me in your PM list.. also, I think you won't cut down the number of updates for pyar ka ehsaas per day 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*** Edited....

hey loved the starting....waiting for u to cont... why making it short...we all love ur multiple updates in one day😃..... i know this will be a rocking FF same as "pyar ka ehsaas"..... good luck... cont soon... and dont forget to add me to ur PM list...
Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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another ff!
nyc
btw it wz nyc.....nycly written
add me to ur pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u have made it again waiting for more update.

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