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zubi123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

nice and lovely, i really liked the mummy and baby conversation and every time geet talked to her baby look lovely and update the nxt soon

and i think geet shuld join the office.

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Hey Muskaan,

What an update!

very lovely,

The talks between Geet and baby is really cute.

Par yaar Geet maan ko kyun nahi batayegi apne pregnancy ke baare main,

i think she do not want any favour business, ummm may be

Good job👏

Love

Lakshmi

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Aleena

@cute-aly

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

HIT he & FIT he

she frooze..that voice haunted her..is with in her now..she cluctced her dupata
(she looks at her tummy & mumers..yaar baby tera papa to bhuat ameer hain..tera koi chance nahi ..jungle main rahta to phir bhi kuch chance tha..yeh to koi shyazada lagtha hain)

aap kapdoo main aache lag rahe hoo..she closed her mouth with her fingers and her eyes droped in shame..

kyun dar gayee..tumhe laghraha
hai tum aapne aap ko meri kareeb aane se rook nahi paavooghi..(geet mumemers..jab rook na tha tab tu nahi rooka aab rooku na rooka kya farak padtha hain..) kya..kya khaha tumne..kuch nahi...aap itne bhi koi khash nahi hain..mera ddlj wala raj type to bilkul bhi nahi...

tum bhi meri type ki ...she cuts..aap ki type mujhe bana bhi nahi hain..
naghi panghi...choti choti mini skirt...wali. .is liya ..mujhe yeh job nahi karni..

unhe subha shaam dehkoonghi to mera kya hoga..waise bhi geet woo srk type nahi hain
to tujhe kya ho sakta hain..mana ki he looked realy handsome today. in those clothes but...
its not that he looks bad without cloths either..baby snuggles again..baby tu aaj kal
bhuat naughty ho raha hain...mummy papa ke adult baathe nahe sunthe..challo apna kan band
karo..ek min..kya boltha papa ka office join karlein ..aur suno office jaa kar koi man maanee mat karna..

waiting for next

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Kanishta

@Firegurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

hi
wats up sorry d
late reply
the update was wonderful
especially the baby part was very cute

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Hey Muskan,

Part 2 -> what Geet is Preg? That was quick...I'm glad it's Maan's baby!

Poor Geet though...I hope they meet soon (next part)?

-Sona

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

febinyusuff - thanxs dear...maan...ummm kya kahen!!!!
nihatri - shall try to make it longer sweety
lallulal2010 - thanxs..just trying to make it cutely romantic
princess_xaini - thanxs
aarthi - yah the baby is naughty..really
Fatima - thanxs dear
rinky70 - yah!!first step..so it is
NoorFatima - waiting dear
mimas_ence - thanxs
ansah - glad u liked it
wajiha-1 - baby ki to office hain...
jaya - i know mean Maan na!!!..nahi re..he himself does'nt know
wat is he saying when he sees her
aanu - thanxs ..glad u liked the shayari part
hermoini - thanxs dear
sweet scorpio - thanxs a lot sweety
MaanEET_FAN - sure darling
Maania - ajab maan ki ghazab kahani...hehehe
Uzma - thanxs dear..actually muskan was also not sure
after pyar ka ehsaas I could ever write anything...then came along
a craving to show their passion..which I was not able to potray in
pyar ka ehsaas..they are more hubby wify their chracter shetch is different
..this madhoshi..ummm so is this FF
ginny_2 - thanxs dear
Navpreet - glad u liked this more than my other FF...ok some where i am GGGRR
but yah i am glad
MeetPremeer - thanxs a lot dear
misbah92 - thanxs dear
humz_786 - glad u commented finally..
JYOTESNA - thanxs alot..I wish they give me a job
Starry_night - geet in maan's office..then how will I write??
I mean wat will I write
vinithaa - baby & momy cute na
-Destiny - glad u finally caught up..pmlist updated dear
Shwetha - me too waiting..madhoshi hi madhoshi
19rbutt - this maan is very different MIND IT
Dhara_s - me to luv baby & momy part
maneet1985 - thanxs alot
shivangi783 - thanxs dear..I guess ur inbox is full..please chck
kashndsel4eva - glad u finally did
Adeena.- wow u commented ....thanxs alot
sireesha.- I know naughty geet!!
samanthawllms7 - thanxs alot
reshmi87 - baby is my fav too
simran - I have added u darling I guess ur inbox is full
bshah856 - thanxs yaar
SakshiGarg - me love u too..
rama6 - thanxs dear
Muniza - this ff is full that..cute & nice madhoshi!!
priya - glad u like it
lovelycutietedy - thanxs dear
naddiya26 - thanxs a lot dear
Tressa - wait...there will be more baby talks
muskaan_22285 - after all baby kise ka hain
charmed ones - even I rolled off my bed afte writing that part
MjhtFan_Mahima - thanxs
asmi123 - neither will they work..nor will let others work
platy01 - mind it we have a baby hear now!!

sona - thanxa alot.... thanxs each one of u....thanxs again love muskan

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Hi Muskan di ,

gussa ho ku? u never replay my pm ? when u update plz update soon na yeh ff aage kab badhega can't wait due to u always write a great part of ur ff so 😳😳😳😳😳

love u😳😳😳😳😳

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

~madhoshi~

part 5

next day
she reached office..geet aapne kaam se kaam rakhna..unki taraf deehkna bhi mat
aur aapna moo band rakh na...warna maki gus jayaga..look at ur self...the momement u see him...ur mouth drops open... like u have never seen any one so hot..so seducing..so manly
geeet stop it...phir koo gayee...she bumps into him...
maan - deehk ke nahi chal sakthi tum...(in strin tone)
she looks down(geet kuch mat bool..mat deehk unko..keep ur head down & leave)
she turns to leave...maan holds her arms...pulls her close
maan - where do u think u are going?
she was still looking down his touch was just enough to lose it all over again
uske saans teez hona laaghi..maan could feel her restlessness..uska bhi wohi hal jo tha
maan - GEEEET..I am asking u something...
she softly says cabin..looking down..controling her obvious emtions oveflow
maan - tumhara cabin udhar hain...
ji..she bends her head & walks away...
maan wonders wat happened to her..she goes inside the cabin & prasies her self..good
girl..bus 2 months & I am done with all this...baby jumps up...tu nahi yaar..tera papa..
seriously tum aur tumhare papa ke chakar main..main pagal hojaaon ghi...
geet calls pinky & asks..mujhe kaam kya karna hain..
pinky - kuch nahi yaar..u will have to attend his calls
do wat ever DD says..like dictation...
geet - dicatation..school main he mare marks dictation main kam aathe the..aab kya hooga..
pinky starts laughing..yaar yeh woo dictation nahi..hain
geet - phir kya hain..geet wonders..

maan was walking pass her cabin...

she was resting her head on her elbow & looked confused..uska chera jaise koi masoom
kali hoo..jo dhoop se pershan hoo..use main kuch baath thi jo na chahthe huyae bhi
woo uske cabin main chala gaya...
geet - aap ko kuch chahiya..
maan - umm..hain woo woo mujhe coffee ..right mera liya coffee bana ke conference
hall main le aana..she nodded her head..

after he leaves..geet wohi ..yeh kya?? coffee?? ..aab yeh coffee kasie banthe hain..
maine aaj thak pani bhi nahi boil kiya..coffee kaise banvoon ghi??
she takes a long breat..nahi geet ho jayaeegha..relax..kitchen main kitne bar maa koo
kana banathe deekha hain..waise he kuch hoga...she goes to the pantry..looks around..
there was no gas..only a kettle & microwave...she stood there for some time wondering..
ok let me ask pinky..she went out looking for pinky but she was busy at the reception..
she thought she could ask adi ...she looked for adi ..he was in the conference room..
she stood near the door & tried calling adhi softly...adi sir ..adi sir..
maan came out & shouted
maan - ek coffee lane main tumhe itna deer lagtha hain
she gets scared & starts to leave with tears in her eyes...maan calms himself..holds her chin up
to meet her eyes..she was still looking down..

maan - kya baath hain
geet - mujhe woo mujhe..coffee bananee nahi aathi..
maan smiled ..geet was offended..
maan - aacha suno..(she looked at him)add milk..coffee powder..& sugar..(geet lost looking at
his eyes..his lips..his stubble looked little longer today)
maan - GEET tum sunrahi ho..
geet - ji aap ne shave nahi ki!!!......
maan - kya?
geet - nahi main coffee laathi hoon..she rushed out..
she added milk..kitne coffee ?? woh to nahi bathya unhone
she goes to the conference room slowly opens the door & peeps..suniya..maan goes near her
ji woo coffee powder kitne spoon dalne hain? every one was shocked..maan went out & said
one spoon..she smiles & walks away..maan continues with the meeting..
she comes back again & peeps in again..
geet - suniya..
maan - kya hain?
woo sugar kitnee??? one spoon..finally she makes the coffee & brings..maan smiles & sips
it..& spits out..
maan - yeh kya hain..
geet - coffee hain...maine to wohi sab dala jo aap ne bola tha..
he drags her to the pantry...
maan - why is it so cold?
she mumers..aap ne garam to karne ho nahi kaha tha..maan closes his eyes..
maan - geet..main tumhara kya karoon ? ek coffee to tumse bantha nahi hain..
geet - ise liya maina kaha tha..main aap ke saath kaam nahi
karoon ghi..aap ne hi jabardasthi mujhe yeh job diya..aur subha se mujhe ek coffee ke chakar
main uppar neechi uppar neechi gumaha rahe hain...aise koi kartha hain kya..starts weeping..
uske aansoo jaise uske dil ko challeni kar rahe hoo..ajeeb se bechani thi maan ke dil main
uske aansso ko dehk kar..
maan - geet please tum rona banth karoo..
he wipes her tears.. use ne palke japkayee..aur use deehk thi rahi aapni nam aankoo se..
their gazed locked..his eyes was blank..like deep something which she could'nt read...
but his touch was mesmursing..madhoshi ka pal..jaise wo koo hi gayee..
he broke out of that look..
maan - I will teach u how to make coffee..
he put the mug in the microwave..she wondered wat it was..
maan - yeh microwave hain..he explained
these are the buttons..yeh loo coffee bangayee..
she took the mug from him..& smelled it..nice..she took a sip & said aachi hain..
lekin kadvai hain..blaaa & gave it back to him..
maan smiled & shook his head...us ne bhi use taraf se piya..
aise laga ki uske honton ko pi raha ho..muskaratha raha..
kya karoon main ise pagli ka...suddenly geet held her stomach & sat down...maan rushed
maan - kya huwa ..he kept his hand on her tummy..wat happened..
geet - I am having a stomach ache(she made a baby face)
(zaroor coffee ke liya tang kar raha hain..ur not allowed coffee samjhe tum..she mumered)
maan - geet tum yeh kise se baath kar rahe hoo? (maan still had his hand over her stomach)
geet - aap choodo mujhe..ek coffee ke liya uff...
dono ne mera zindhaghi bhwal kar dhi...

maan ...kya karoon main iska..na use door jaapatha hoon..na use kuch keh patha hoon..
uske harkethe kitne masoom aur pyari hain..aapni hi dun main rahthi hain..
kuch khayal nahi ..kya kar rahi hain..kyun kar rahi hain...bus aapni man marzi
aise chalthi hain jaise pura duniya ko wohi sambal rahi ho!!
kud ko to sambal nahi pathi..jo uske dil main hain wohi uske aankhoo main..aur laboo main

geet went into her cabin & sat on the chair...baby seemed happy
pata hain..papa ne touch kiya ise liya kush ho raha hain..
but thats not fair..pura pura din main tujhe touch karthi hoon
tab to itna kush nahi hota...doohkabaaz...baby ignores...her..

precap

maan saves geet from gundas..yet again😉

NEXT PART 6

thanxs for all the love & support...please do comment

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

lovely updates.....just read last two parts..... this FF is also good as the other one....love both of ur FF......plz cont sooon.... ***edited***

oopsss.....didnt see that part 5 was updated.....will go read it now and then comment but i m sure its a great update😉😳

*edited again*😆

loved the coffee scene and when geet calls maan saying "suniyee...." loved that.....cant wait for maan to find out that geet is pregnant with his kid!............plz cont soon........

Edited by dhrashtee - 14 years ago