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Posted: 14 years ago
great update..👏
i love this FF..baby is sooo cute....😆
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Fabulous......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...........
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved Geet's restlessness after hearing about the Engagement....😆😆😆...................
Loved Geet's anger.....😆😆😆😆😆..........
Yaar bechara Maan kitni baar Geet ko manayega????🤣
Baby Talks are always Superb......❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.........
Eagerly waiting for the next part..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice Update
Geet is toh minddddddddd blowing here😆😆
Jus love her
Kab kya karti hai kuch pata nahi
Loved Maan's teasing n their sweet romance
Geet was awesum here😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 17

geet snapped away.. picked up the shervani, shirt & buttons & left the room
maan rubbed his head for a moment & ran behind her...
geet went to daadi's room & gave the shervani...
daadi - thanxs beta..idhar bethoo
geet - ji...
daadi - i want to u to order flowers, then cake, rings collect karna hain
jewller se, dev ke shervani tailor se laani hain, pandit ji se baath karke
get the pooja item arranged, meera ke parents ke liya gifts laani hain..
geet - ji..she makes the note of every thing...
maan walks in...geet ignores him..
daadi - thanxs for taking some time out...
maan - daadi!!!
daadi - ok I have told geet wat has to be done..just go with her & make the arrangements
maan - why should I go with her?(in attitude)
geet - I will manage daadi
daadi - maan this is ur brothers engagement...please be more responible
agar yeh BP problen na hoti to I won't have asked for any help to u..
(daadi holds her chest..pretending!!)
maan & geet get worried..
baby~laughing looking at daadi 🤣
maan - jaise aap teehk samjhe..

it was around 3pm...they sit in the car & leave..geet was quite & still ignoring maan
maan clears his throat!!! geet turns to look out..
maan -tumne lunch kiya
geet - mujhe bhook nahi hain
baby~mujhe to hain!!!
maan - yah kya karthi rahthi ho...today morning only u were feeling
so weak...aur phir se lunch skip kiya
geet - mein na kaha na..mujhe bhook nahi hain...
maan stops the car infront of a resturant
maan - challoo..kuch to ka loo..
geet - nahi khana mujhe
maan - tum mera gussa khane pe kyun nikal rahee ho?
geet - mein aap pe gussa nahi hoon...waise bhi aap ko jo karna hain
aap kar sakthe hein...mein kaun hoti hoon..bolne wali..
maan - Geet ..yeh sab baath hum khana kaa ke bhi kar sakthe hain...
geet - nahi nahi nahi
maan comes out & opens the door for her...
she closes the door..aap khana kaa loo main car mein wait kathi hoon...
maan goes inside the resturant...geet ignores him...
baby~mujhe bhook laghi hain...geet~aaj tujhe khana nahi milegha...
yeh sab kuch teri wajah se ho raha hain..baby~yeh aacha hain romance papa karthe hain aur bhooka mujhe rehna padtha hain

maan comes back with the lunch...
maan opens the lunch box..& feeds her..
she turns her face away...baby~mama please khaloo mera fav hain..sushi
geet~yuck!!!baby~please mama..main aapka cute sa baby hoon na..mera liya😳
geet~nahi..nahi nahi..
maan feeds her again...she turns away..
maan keeps the box behind & holds her arms..tumhari problem kya hain
main ne kaha na ...mere aur sasha ke beech kuch nahi hain...
tum mera bare main aise sooch bhi kaise sakthi hoo...
geet mumeres woo office mein sab loog...
maan pinns her on the seat & comes really close...
maan - mujhe koi faraq nahi padtha kaun kya sochtha hain...
lekin tum ...tum bhi!!
!& turns his face away
kuch ajab se kashish thi un aankoo main jo geet shayad samjh gayee..samjh gayee un ankho ka khafa hona..un ankoo main uski duniya bus ne laaghi thi..
she picked the lunch box & fed him..he turned away
baby~oh no!!! papa aap bhi!!!

she fed again...he pushed her hand away..
she held her ears & made a baby face...maan looked at her & smiled...
he kissed her forehead & said hate u...
geet - hate u 2..3..4..10
baby~1,2,3, baad main can I have some sushi please!!
maan feeds her...geet - yucks..aap yeh khathe kaise hoo?
maan & baby rolled their eyes..
maan - tumhe pasand nahi hain to tumne us din kyun kaha ki ..
tumhe sushi khana hain

geet - meri pasand na pasand se aaj kal kuch nahi hota...
maan - kyun?
geet - ise to aap ka he taste pasand hain to main kya karoon??
points at her stomach & then quickly points at her heart...
maan - tum kya boolthi rahthi hoo mujhe kuch samjh nahi aatha

maan kisses her hand that was pointing on her chest..she hugs him..arching her back
maan moves up kissing to her neck..
geet - mujhe abhi bhi ek baath samjh nahi aayee
maan - umm ..kissing her collor line
geet - blinds kyun band the? baby~
maan bites her
geet - aaah!!!moans in pain

maan - challo show me the list..
geet - flowers first...
maan starts the car..& drives to the florits..
geet straightens her duppata..& blushes..& looks down
maan ki kushi ka tikana nahi tha...itna khush kyun tha...
geet ko mana liya isliya ...yah phir..uske sharmane main bhi ajab
se khushi thi...uska thora sa sharmana thora sa gabhrana
phir sharmake aapne nazree jhukana...chup chup ke dekhna palkon ki chilman se
honton ko kaat ke ungli ka chabana...uff suke har ek aada pe
maan mar mar ke jeetha tha..mano!!

precap

selecting floral arrangement😳...uff aapne liya nahi....dev ki engagement😆
thanxs for all ur replies...this quicker update is on special request!!!!for killing the weekend
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di 🤗

For Part 12-17

all parts was awesome,superb,fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved dem sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Baby is d life line of this ff❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️........................loved his cute n adorable talks😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
loved Maaneet moments n their nafrat ka rishta❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Geet is sooooooooooooo possessive😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Geet ka baar-baar naraj hona aur Maan ka manana was fabulous😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Dev n Meera...........good
eagerly w8ng for next part😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
plssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it. and baby is sooooooooo cute. k wen have u planned to tell Maan abt the baby. i want Brij r pinky to tell Maan just like slip of the tng. it wud be cool maan will have heart attack
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar pm nahin kiya shayad kafi jaldi thi update kerne ki. but as usual fabulous. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update....
maan ne geet ko mana liya...😳
when will maan know about the baby....
love the baby talks...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi do yu mind if yu reduce i little hindi sometimes i don't understand thank so much super update pls cont soonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Uff main kya karu..... Fida ho gaye hum aap ki iss kahani pe...
Madhoshi ne hume Madhosh kar diya... itne awesome updates k liye dhanyawad....
This ff rocks... & the baby dialogues are really cute...

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