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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG I love it it has a certain charm to it. can't describe but it's gonna b amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey muskaan.i really liked it plz add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~madhoshi~

part 2
Dil pe aise azaabon ko utarte dekha usne chup chap use khud se bichhadte dekha...
kuch der tak use jaate hue deekha aur bas deehktha hi raha..
he was not sure wat happened..how did it happen..why did it happen at all
it all seemed unreal..too beautiful a feeling to be true..too scarey a truth
he rushed out looking for her..atleast I owe her an appology
pura din is kahyal main tha..jo huwa..teehk tha yah nahi...offcourse teehk nahi tha!!
woh to dari hue thi...18 saal ki thi shayad...use shayad pata bhi nahi hum madhoshi main
kya kar guzar gaya...agar use kuch haogaya to...
maan how could u let this happen..guilt ate him up...he knew it was his mistake..
but she did'nt resist at all..infact her eyes kept him capative...
the alluring desire in her eyes was too much a temptation to handle...
woh mujh se madat manghe ne aayee aur maine uske saath...chi...how could I
ise aacha to..I should'nt have saved her...main ise ehsaas ko dil main liya jee nahi saktha


geet shamhe huee..darthi huee ghar punchee ..reached home...her parents were really worried..brij veerji..geet where were u..I heard wat happened to chuni..I was so scared for u..he hugged her tight & instructed her to be close to him..never to leave the house without him...he knew his friends who killed chuni will be looking for her...every one was concerned about her they advised her take some rest..she slept for a while..she woke up after few hrs..feeling safe & secured near her family..on her bed..geet almost forgot wat happened last night...untill she stood up an aching soreness between her legs reminded her for their intimate moment she rushed to the washroom..she quickly checked her reflection in the mirror, searching for any changes...uska chehra wohi tha, but it was little pale..there was no visual proof of the difference in her body...jab pani ki boonde us ki chera par padhi har ek ehsaas us ke zehan main wapse jaag utta...unka har ek pal..woh honton..uske zism ke khusbhoo...uska use choona..jaise mano ek bar phir ko gayee hoo us ke bahoon main sharam se doobh gayee uski nighaen...kudh se nazar nahin milla payee woo...

kaise ek ajnabee ka saath...aur woo..ehsaas use aur bhi madhosh kar raha hain..
shayad yahi pagal pan tha..shayad fiza main kuch tha..yah shayad zindhagi ke maine badal rahe the...dono kuch nahi samjh payee..naa hi kuch bhoola payee...
yaad tha too sirf madhoshi ka woo saath..woo lamha..jis ek ehsaas main mahne nikal gaya...

it was almost 2 months after that night...they still could'nt get over the spell it led on them
there life was prity much normal..except that she was not herself any more..
& he was not himself...they knew there was nothing between them..except that one night..they probably won't see each other again...did they want to???

every thing seemed fine until when geet fainted after having her dinner..everyone got scared and called the doctor..and he declared her pregnant to brij veer ji..he held the doc by his collar and told him to abort the child right away....geet was too shocked to react...the incident that she fantacised ..never wanted to reveal it to any one has become the worst nightmare of her life..brij veerji..took her into the room & asked her about him..all she could think of him as some guys camping in the jungle..homeless..probably
jobless..maybe..nahi shayad mechanic tha..brij veer ji..do u love that guy..will he marry u...do u want me to talk to him geet ..nahi nahi..aise kuch nahi hain..she broke down...
phir yeh sab kya hain geet...geet mujh se galthi hogayee...brij veerji..took a long breath
& said I have arranged for ur abortion..take off from college for couple of days...she silently accepted..she knew her family loved her dearly they went to the doctor the hospital in amritsar doctor declared that her abortion at this time could prove fatel to her..they tried every possible medical options..did'nt seem to work..they went to the golden temple to feel better & think of a solution...brij was really scared for his sister

there was something in this air..she could feel his presence..that was strange..how
she remembered his scent even after 2 months..she looked around restlessly
fiza mein uski mehek tha, katre katre mein samya ho jaise..kabhi aah lab par machal gaye.. kabhi ashk aankh se dhal gaye..uske talash main..

maan felt her embrace in the temple..his senses frooze to take in more of that feeling..
kaise kashish thi..unme..jo unhe jood rahi thi..maan wanted to move away from all this
thoughts..khud ko chunte hue din sara guzar jata tha...phir hawa shaam ki chalti aur woo bikhar sa jata ..is khadar bechani badgayee..ki aab sanas leena bhi gunah lagtha tha...
he just decided to get back to delhi..never ever to come back to this place..
hope u all like the update...please do comment & let me know..
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Yeah!I am the first one to comment.

btw lovely update,continue sooooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read it before your PM 😊

Amazing, Muskan 😊
It was so nice, serene, beautiful. Wordings are soo captivating!!!
Felt like as if I am reading a story written by famous Hindi writers like Munshi PremChandJi 😊 👏

You're really very creative in your thought-process and have a brilliant talent to penn your thoughts into words😊

Loved it to the core 😊 😊

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Fabulous👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved Every Single Line
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
wow dear
congrats on starting a new FF ..i will not miss this
interesting story ..
kya Madhoshi ha.. i love their feeling for each other.

BEST OF LUCK
sorry dear i promise i will read you old FF .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
hi
wow great update very emotional
loved it very much thnx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Thats Fabulous👏
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️
Loved Every Single Line
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooon

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