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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
loved the caring maan
can't wait to see geet jealous
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwww that was amazing!!!!!
loved it!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
woow muskaan loveeeeeed it , loved it when they both say to eachother hate u 2, 3, 10 😉, adored the way they get together, the love in their hearts doesnt let them think anything else like thier fights or someone might think bad etc.... woow awsome ya , look forward to read more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwww.... GEET!
so cute............
so sweet of maan.
great update!
u rock!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muski ! ...Dear Big 🤗to u...!!!
Update is rocking as always...!!!👍🏼
Dont u think Maan should cme 2 know abt Geet...!!!??😳
IDK Y ...I just like Maneet in each n every part of update....!!! 😃😃😃😃
I can bear Dadi....bt u know Maneet is best...!!!!!😉
I luv this one....just Maneet u know...!!! hhehehe😆😆😆😆
Aur Baby unborn ho ker bhut baat kerta hai...😆😆😆😆 tou born hone ki baat tou chup hi nahi hoga...!!!! ha ha ha ha....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
waiting 4 more...!!!!😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,

Nice updates!
but i am not happy that Geet ne Maan ko itni jaldi, maaf kar diya,
Very sad...................

Anyways, Maan ka manaane ka tarika acha tha,

Well, update soon,

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 15

maan reached office but he was lost in that act of passion...
why do I ever go near her at all...why do i lose my self control
infront of her...mujhe yeh kya ho raha hain...maan closes the blinds of
his cabin & sits on his chair..resting his head backward...
he closes his eyes...all he could think was of geets lips..how they
felt on his ...yah jo madhoshi ka allam tha use pagal kar raha tha
itni beckarari thi ..ki samble nahi sambaltha...woo kuch kahthi bhi
to nahi thi...chup chap aapne neghahoon se uski bechani aur badadethi
samjh ne ki koshish main ...mano sare sudh bhud khona laghe hoon...
jitna samjhne ki koshish kartha..uthna hi uljhatha jaatha..
uthna hi aur madhoshi ka allam chaatha...

he tries to concentrate on his work...sasha walks in with a big smile
sasha - lonawala deal is ours MK
maan - thats a grt show..thanxs sahsa
sasha - so how have u been...?
maan - u should be telling me...u have been touring for nearlly a month now
sasha - I am seriously tired ..but glad it paid off
maan - i was looking into this chopra's site..wat do u have to say about it
sasha tries to look in from the other side & then comes & stands next to maan
she bends forward & looking at the plan...
geet walks in & looks at them...she looks at the blinds closed..
baby~whistles🥳..geet~close ur eyes at once...
baby~mera eyes band kar ke kya fayad aap papa pe dyaan do na...😍
uske aankhee mano khafa hogayee ho khud se...unki nasdeehkiyan bardash nahi
kar payee shayad..yah phir kuch samjh nahi payee..ke samjhna nahi chahthi thi
maan moved back suddenly...mano samjh gaya ho uske narazghi ko...
mano dar gaya khanhi khafa na ho jayaee phirse..
kuch khaa bhi nahi wonhi khadi rahi...aapne dupptta se ladthe...
maan - kuch kaam tha?
geet - ji yeh file...
she gives the file & leaves...
when she turned tear that was resting on her eyelids just rolled down...
maan closed his eyes..he knew it was impossible to explain her anything..

sasha - MK I have not been for a month & wat is happening
maan - wat?
sasha - I can see the chemistry between u both
maan - aise kuch nahi hain..u know me
sasha - I know ..after sameera...u don't believe in Love or girls...but I definitly see sparks here
maan - seriously aise kuch nahi hain..
sasha - tumhare saath hi kyun hota hain?
maan - kya hota hain?
sasha - all ur secratries just fall for u...first it was pari & now..she...
maan - geet is different
sasha - see ...
maan - sasha can we look into the project please...
sasha - sure sure..that is if u can concentrate now..

geet goes to pinky & asks
geet - woo khun hain?
pinky - woo !! khun woo?
geet - chotey chotey kapde wali..nungy pungy..chi chi babaji..unke cabin main
pinky - oh!!! sasha maam.. humari head architect & DD ki close friend bhi hain & winked😉
geet mano dil doob hi gaya ho..
baby~papa ki friend!!! girl...friend🤣!!!! geet~tu chup kar!!!
geet goes to her cabin...& closes her blinds...
she sat & cried...for a while..mujhe kyun bura lagh raha hain...I always knew he likes such girls..
waise bhi humre bech aise kuch to nahi hain...he told me he hates me in clear
words then...why I am feeling bad...she starts crying again...
wat are they doing ...how can he do all that...in the office..
sharam varam hain bhi yah nahi..mujhe nahi rehna yanha...
pata nahi aur kya kya dehkna bhaki tere chakar main...

baby~har bar mujhe kyun danthe ho?
geet~chup kar varna tu mujh se mar khayaega..
baby~this is not fair papa ka gussa mujhe pe nikal rahe ho..
geet pats her stomach slowly..baby~aaa..

after maan finished with his clients came back to his cabin..
opened the blinds...probably knew how angry she was ...seeing her
blinds closed...itna tadap uttah...ki..he just walked into her cabin...she stood up looking down
sine mein jalan aankhon mein tufaan saa kyun tha
ye dard tha kaisa ye kaisi chubhan thi..jo geet ke dil se maan ko choo rahee thi...
maan - geet suno..woo..
geet - aap ko kuch kaam tha?
maan - mujhe coffee chahiya thi
geet - ji...
she walks out to the pantry...she did'nt look at him..
uske behrukki deekhi nahi gayee maan se...uske peechai peechai
pantry chala gaya...he went really close to her..
maan - geet meri baat suno..tum jaise
geet smashes the coffee mug on the floor...(she did'nt look at him)
maan jumps back in shock...baby~scared..hides himself
maan - geet please
she smashes another coffee mug...
maan - GEET!!
she picks up 2 mugs & smashes them...one after the other
the noice was becoming louder...maan walks to his cabin to avoid creating a scene
pinky comes running to the pantry
pinky - kya huwa?
geet - I was feeling dizzy aur mera haat se cups ghir gaya
pinky - tu relax kar..I will get it cleaned..
geet - can u give this to maan sir..I am not feeling that well


pinky gives the coffee to maan...
maan - geet khanha hain?
pinky - she is not feeling that well..
maan got worried & but did'nt know how to see her..or go near her
don't know wat will be flying next in the office..
kyun uska roothna itna pareshan kar raha tha maan ko..
kyun use rah rah kar uska yun khafa hono tadpa raha tha...
kyun itna bebas tha maan aapne is nafrat ke risthe se..

precap
geets fury..yet again!!!

thanxs a lot for all ur comments...glad u liked it....read it like 10 times....hope u like geet in this mode!!! he he he😆😆😆...please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

haha! amazing updt! ;) I love when geet is angry/fury..

I really want maan to know tht geet is preg with his child pleasee...I want the truth come out sooonn..and waiting for their baby to come..lols..
Thankyou! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww i luv them too! Haha geets anger is funny, cnt wait to c hw pataofication cums along
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Posted: 14 years ago
amzming!
lol geet is lyk SOOO jealous!
geez........real different geet
beautifully written
u noe ur hindi is great.........u write it really nicely
update soon....geet furious yet again!
hehee

luv
Navpreet

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