~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 1~ - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
great work, can't wait til they meet in the office now
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Posted: 14 years ago
priya - me still waiting
shivangi783 - madhoshi..is the caption..so there will be passion
every time they meet...
desigurl953 - updating soon
princess_xaini - thanxs dear
kyphfanz - glad liked it
MaanEET_FAN - thanxs dear
Navpreet - thanxs ..why did'nt she tell him?? good question
Sakshi - nice na..geet working with maan...
afsha- just different
wajiha-1 - just working on that dear
Uzma - glad u liking this one too
19brutt - thanxs dear..I told u it is a short one...
sofna - thanxs dear..yah..geet & maan in office..with that madhoshi!!!
misbah92 - thanxs dear..thanxs for accepting the fd request
Muniza - updating dear
vinithaa - this is full of romance...madhoshi!!
simran - thanxs for the 7 stars
Fatima - me too
susana - pm list updated sweet heart
Shwetha - maan & geet madhosh..but still no hosh!!!
febinyusuff - thanxs
sonnal_17- ur welcome dear
Starry_night- just hatke
Tressa - this one is out & out romantic
Maania - glad u liked it ..thaxs so much
nihatri - thanxs dear
roopareddy - thanxs roopa
FIRESafiReFIRE - I know new concept...maan's child
Iqbal Neha1 - hamesha ki tarah
angelic shaz - thanxs alot..meeting each other in office
umm!!!!fire works it will be
Dhara_s - thanxs
charmed ones- yah!! abhi to bus wohi sab hoonghi
jennifer1993 - thanxs alot
sweet scorpio - yah me too wondering!!!
MeetPremeer - thanxs alot dear
sireesha. - glad u commented..deer hi sahi
shah10- thanxs
Amrutha - lets see how formally they meet
lallulal2010 - glad u like this one
MjhtFan_Mahima - umm!! lets see
reva - thanxs
sona-rai - thanxs dear
lakshmi- she did'nt tell him..because..they never spoke..they were
busy kissing!!!he he he
hermoini - cool brij na
ansah - thanxs glad u liked the difference
Sigma - hosh main aab rahoo kaise!!
thanxs guys for all ur support
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
~madhoshi~
part 4
next day pinky introduced geet to adhi ..pinky explained she wanted a job to keep
her happy & relaxed..please she really needs this..adi said I understand but I can't
do anything Maan sir is taking the interview himself..& he has rejected most of them today
I don't know wat is wrong with him..he is very restless & disturbed..she could probably try
geet was very scared & recluctant...adhi went in to Maans cabin & gave him geets file
maan spat in anger yeh sab kaise candidate short list kiya hain tumne..
adhi bend his head ..maan said send the next one in..

wahi ehsaas..dono main ajeeb se bechani..jaise kuch kash hain hawa main aaj
nazre jhukayee..darthe huwe she walked in to his cabin for interview
she was looking down..but she could feel his exocitic prefume..so masculine (jhali tu pagal
ho gayee hain...har jagah tujhe aab bus uske he khayal atha hain..interview main
concentrate kar..warna yeh Dust Dhanav tujhe khaa jaaye gha)
maan yeh tujhe kya ho raha hain..kyun use ke bare main soch raha ha..wat is wrong
with u...he opened her file without looking at her name..he asked her about her
previous expernice ..she heard those words & she knew it was him...
she frooze..that voice haunted her..is with in her now..she cluctced her dupata
(she looks at her tummy & mumers..yaar baby tera papa to bhuat ameer hain..tera koi chance nahi ..jungle main rahta to phir bhi kuch chance tha..yeh to koi shyazada lagtha hain)
& turned to leave..maan pulled her hand..& with a jerk into his embrace..unki
sansa jaise ek dosre ko pehchane laaghi hoon..unke nighahen..jaise ek dosre ke talash main thi
their gaze met..& they could'nt stop..looking at each other..his hand eased out on her
she almost had her mouth open..he asked softly tum teehk ho..uske kap kapthe honten..se bas ek halki se hain aur kuch to bol hi nahi payee woo...still lost in his eyes
he moved her curls very slowly aise kya deehk rahi hoo..she lost in him replied ..aap kapdoo main aache lag rahe hoo..she closed her mouth with her fingers and her eyes droped in shame..
he said kya in shock..nahi mera matlab hain in kapdoon main aache lag rahe hoo..
he left her & turned around & cleard his throat..he actually blushed a bit..
he was concious with wat she said..he knew all the time she has seen him earlier
he was either half naked or full..she turned to leave..he came infront of her &
stopped her ..interview nahi dena..nahi mujhe aap ke saath job hi nahi karna
he looked into her eyes..with his hands crossed over his chest kyun dar gayee..tumhe laghraha
hai tum aapne aap ko meri kareeb aane se rook nahi paavooghi
..(geet mumemers..jab rook na tha tab tu nahi rooka aab rooku na rooka kya farak padtha hain..) kya..kya khaha tumne..kuch nahi...aap itne bhi koi khash nahi hain..mera ddlj wala raj type to bilkul bhi nahi...
tum bhi meri type ki ...she cuts..aap ki type mujhe bana bhi nahi hain..
naghi panghi...choti choti mini skirt...wali..is liya ..mujhe yeh job nahi karni..
she clutches her duppatta & tries to leave..waise tum chaho to kal se job join kar sakthi hoo..
she smiles ...she walks out..& stands outside the door..catching up for all that missed breath
geet tu hasna band kar...she feels the butterflise again in her stomach..she pats the baby & says..yah I know papa ko dehk kar naach raha hain..lekin..he will never know u exsist
so just shut-up & sleep..waise bhi babies ko itna deer jaag na nahi chaiya..
baby snuggles back...

chandini raat thi chera par chamak thi..khushi thi ya..gumaan..kuch to tha
chand tum to use mile hoge...kya kaha usne...mera bare main poocha..
bina soche bina samjhay ..bina parkhey kiya tumne kaise fasila...kyun use
apne kareeb aane diya...yeh kya kar rahe the dono...
both at their respective places were looking at the moon & wondered...
it was the first time ..they spoke..& but realized they are not ment for each other
he thought she likes srk romantic type lover boy...she felt..unhe to koi choti kapde wali
pari he pasand aaygee..aacha hain..then why touch of her curls bothered him..
mujhe uske samne pata nahi kya hojata hain..kyun nahi kaboo rakpata aapne aap ko..

kyun main unhe deehk kar bas deehk thi rahethi hoon...kya soochengye mera bare main..
like i am despo type..chi chi...babaji..kuch karo na....

geet after so many days actually smiled..brij was happy..he insisted on her to join the
office ..she refused...pinky...DD ne khud tumhe interview main select kiya hain
then u might be really good...geet mujh se nahi hoga...she mumers to herself..
unhe subha shaam dehkoonghi to mera kya hoga..waise bhi geet woo srk type nahi hain
to tujhe kya ho sakta hain..mana ki he looked realy handsome today. in those clothes but...
its not that he looks bad without cloths either..baby snuggles again..baby tu aaj kal
bhuat naughty ho raha hain...mummy papa ke adult baathe nahe sunthe..challo apna kan band
karo..ek min..kya boltha papa ka office join karlein ..aur suno office jaa kar koi man maanee mat karna..

precap
wat say geet joins office!!!!😉
thanxs for all ur support..please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweeeet muskiiiii... tum isi tarah update karo aur hum padkar comment karenge !!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hit hai yaar.pls make it a bit long
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey.....................it was such a romantic update..... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yaar awesome..... loved it a looooooot........ yeh kya ho rahi hai mujhe.. i am falling with all the Maan's in your FF's..

update sooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aweet update muskan. loved it the baby is so naughty BTW tis MAANEET's so it wud tat way oly
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Such a sweettttt update.
Continue soon.
I hope geet joins the office soon.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz plzzzzzzzz update it sooooon muski plzz let make make the frist step

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