~Madhoshi Maaneet thread 1~ - Page 37

Originally posted by: sparikh

Part 4 was awesome...job interview! I wish I can get job this easily....Lucky Geet! 😉

I love her talks with Baby...kinda confused though. She was going to commit suicide & next ch, she is talking with her baby?😕

-Sona

Iqbal Neha1 - cute na...me too like it
angelic shaz - glad u likd it..thanxs dear
susana - thanxs dear
Chotii - thanxs choti...song was just thought at the
last moment...mujhe bhi becheni hoo rahi hain..roop tera mastana!!
sonnal_17 - thanxs dear..working on it..
naina - I know maan..to pit hi jata!!!
asmi123 - thanxs..u made me smile..saying that
charmed ones - thanxs dear...maan fighting yet again for geet!!!
desigurl953 - glad u liked it sweety...
shah10 - working on it dear...thanxs a lot
Sofna - shall baby!!!
19rbutt - thanxs a lot dear
Fatima - glad u liked the maaneet scenes...
I really try to make it new & different
Soni-Sanraj - thanxs alot
ginny_2 - thanxs a lot
misbah92 - mama baby ..convo...promise..next update!!
sireesha - thanxs yaar...I did send u the Pm darling..sapat!!!
hermoini - maan will know it soon!!!
SakshiGarg - thats the seceret darling..just hang on!!
-Sona - not bad ..bro..na..so sweeeet
sweet scorpio - thanxs dear
dhrashtee - yah!!! hospital jate to sab raaz kul jata
multiple updates..yes darling..shall work on it..

~madhoshi ~
part 7

is kadhar bechain dil tha ki kya khahen..
uske khayal main yun tadap ne lagha..ke kya khahen
chandhini bhi dhalne laghi ..iska illm nahi tha ..kya khahen..
maan changed into his tracks & vest.. & sat on the chair..he was worried
he kept rocking his chair..just wanted to know how she was..

geet jab hosh main aayee to maan khakar chillayee..
brij - he fine..don't worry...every thing is fine..
she got scared..khanhi brij ne us ke dil ka haal to nahi jaan liya...
pinky walked in with milk..
pinky - maan sir kaise tumhare saath?
geet explianed..maan was about to drop her home & some gundas came
& all the fight happened..
brij - this guy is an angel..he always saved u
she gave a fake smile & mumered
(veer ji ko pata challega ki yeh angel hi is devil ka baap hain..to bus..
baby hurt -mujhe devil bola)

after pinky & brij leaves geet was alone in the room...she felt little restless..
aare baby tere papa to bhaut fight shight bhi karthe hain
kya punch mara tunhe dekha..baby snuggles😊..pata nahi unhe gussa kyun aagya..
phele to sab kuch chup chap dee rahethe..pata hain jab usne meri bag cheena na papa
ne kya mara ...wow!! 👏lekin jab meri uppar baby moves 😡ok ok..humare 😃uppar gun rakhi..
to papa ne kuch nahi kiya..chup chap mar khathe rahe..her voice faded & tears rolled
down her eyes...she ran to pinky's room..
geet - maan sir bhaut choot laaghi thi kya
pinky - hain..bhaut khoon bhi bhe raha tha..
geet - unka address kya hain
pinky blabbers the address in her sleep..

geet takes the cab & reaches his khurana mansion...she sneaks inside the mansion..
baby deehkle papa ka ghar hain..khaha tha na koi shyazada hain😳...yanha to mushkil
hain inha doond na...chal ghar chathe hain...baby refuses😒...baby..abhi tu naughty
kar raha hain..where will I search for him hear...there are so many rooms..
she turns & walks into him...he stood there with his hand crossed over his chest..
she immediately moved her hand on to his wounds..she kept checking every scar &
bruce..uske dil ka haal uske aankhoo main tha...uske bechani..uska dard..
he dragged her to the outhouse & asked
maan - wat are u doing here?
geet - woo woo..main..!!! hain..!! main kal ke liya chuti manghne aayee thi
maan - raat ke 12 bajai (he had that indimidating look)
geet - woo..main chalthi hoon..(she turns & leaves)
maan grabs her hand from behind she snaps & hurts him on his wound..
he leaves at once & screams...aahhh in pain..
she runs..to him..mujhe pata tha..aap ne kuch medicine nahi laagya hoga
iseliya main deehkna aayee thi..she pulls his hand..& carses..with mild blow
geet - medicine khanha rakha hain
(is haaq se sahla rahi thi...kya keh pata uske maasoomiyat ke samne)
maan - uppar dressing table ke drawer main..
geet runs up the steps..maan just follows her...
she looks around & opens the first drawer....
maan - wooh wali nahi..nechi wali drawer..
she pulls out the medicines & makes him sit on the bed...
she applies the medicine & softly blows it ..her touch was burning him..
uska dil khabhoo main naa tha....he held her hand..
maan - geet yeh tum kya kar rahi ho..
geet - medicine laaga rahi hoon..innocently..she replied
maan - raat ke 12 bajai..mera bed room main..mera bed pur...kyun kar rahe ho..?
geet - main to jaa hi rahi thi..aap ne hi mujhe rookha tha..
she turns & weeps..kyun roo padi...shayad uska yun sawal karna aacha nahi laga
yah uska dard nahi deehk payee woo...
maan cups her face...main to bikul bhi khas nahi hoon ..phir kyun...
geet - aap ko mazak soojh raha hain..I was so worried for u..
I have sneaked out of my house to see u...
maan - phir kyun...?
geet - mana ke u r not my type..but u have always been nice to me..taken care of me
so I am just concerned about u...pata nahi kyun..I get worried...
maan - tumhe mujh se darr nahi lagtha...use din..he paused
she was shy nervous...she bend her head & clucthed her duppata..
her face was red..kuch aise baath kahdi..jo shayad wo dono yaad nahi karna chathi they
yah bhoola na paa rahai they...
maan - bholo na geet...his hand held her capative..looking into her eyes..
she felt her knees were already giving way...she hugs him..resting her cheeks on
his bare chest..& hands slipping slowly delicatly..conciously not to hurt him
geet - nahi mujhe aap se darr nahi laagtha...aapne aap se darr laagtha hain
ohh geet...he moans & hugs her tighter..tum kyun itni bhooli hoo..
his hands snakes her back & her hair...geet ke bebassi ko main kaise
bayan karoon!!! use to khud he hosh nahi !!!uske sasoon ke kushboo main
is khadhar ko gayee the...aapne sasns tak lena bhool rahi thi...shayad!!!
maan(wispered) - I wanted to always say this to u...I am really very sorry about that ..
geet - moves away knotting her duppatta..I know we got carried away...it will be lot
easier if we don't talk about it...please
(kitne aasne se baath ko suljha diya ..na koi gila no koi shikva..
maan to use ek pal main uska ho challa tha shayad...!! kya keh tha..bus uski..baath
pur hammi burtha raha!!!)
maan - umm!!

kha to diya ..lekin us madhoshi ka allam jo unhe ghare rahtha har pal us se kaise
baach paathe..kaise us ehsaas ko jukla pathe jo unhe joode jaa rahee thi..

maan - challo main tumhe drop kar detha hoon
geet - umm ..ek min..kitchen kanha hain?
maan - kyun?
geet she rolls her eyes..
maan - udhar hain
geet - mujhe haldi wala doodh banana hain
maan - tum aapne ghar ja ke peelee na
geet - mera liya nahi..aap ke liya
maan - rubs his head...& takes her to the kitchen

use khabhi kyun nahi kuch kha pata...bas har baat man jaatha...
dil main koyee darr tha..yah aapne gunah ka ehsaas...phir har baari
wohi madhoshi kyun cha jaathi..kya tha joo Maan Singh Khurana har bar
uske samne ithna bebas sa mehsoos kartha....??

precap
daadi seeing Geet with maan in outhouse!!OOPS!!!!😲