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Posted: 14 years ago
Any chance of an update? 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
any chance of update muskaan.....cant wait long for mommy and baby conversation😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
update😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi ~
part 6

every one was leaving for the day...geet packed her bag & came to pinky
geet - challain
pinky - geet tu ne sir se kaha
geet - kyun?
pinky - yaar tu unke seceratry hain..
geet - to!!
pinky - u can't leave unless he says so..looks like he has some work
u stay back & leave only when he says..
geet - wat will I do...alone..& how will I come back home
pinky - aacha u call up when u r finished then I will ask brij veer ji to pick u
geet makes a horriable face & goes to her cabin..
she waits for him for few mins..then gets scared sitting alone in the cabin..
geet - baby baby!..oye uttah nah..mujhe dar lagh raha hain..waise to pura pura din utta rehatha hain...🥱 ....she looks outside it was dark & not even a single sole around
she peeps into his cabin...she does'nt knock...she just comes in..
fiza main aapna pan tha..uske bechani jaise ko gayee..woh kuch nahi boli
maan jaantha tha uske aahat ko....mehsoos jo karne laga tha uske har ek aah ko..
maan was lookig into some blueprints.. she slowly pulls the chair & sits in front of him
she bends her head on the table & sleeps...maan looked at her couple of time
& continues his work..
kyun nahi kaha use ghar jaane ko..kyun chatha tha ke wonhi rahe..uske samne..
har pal har samay..khud bhi nahi samjh paya...bus use hi nihartha rahetha..ghadi ghadi..
uske pass hone se bhut sukoon tha jaise...chain tha jaise
his phone rang..he cut it immediatly..he did'nt want the ring to disturb her..
she moved a bit turning her head in discomfort he softly patted her head..
neiend main bhi use ke sparsh ko pechan ne laaghi thi shayad..halki si muskurahat
chahi uske laboo par..maan bhi muskara utha..she dossed again...
dono main ek ajeeb sa aapna pan tha...na khabhi kuch kaha..nahi kuch suna..
lekin phir bhi ek doseri ki bechani mahsoos kar ne laaghe the..samjhne laaghe the
he put his phone on silent mode..& checked whose call it was...
he replied with a sms ..saying he will call back latter..he completed his work
& checked the time..it was 10pm...
he tries to wake her up..that was the last thing he wanted to do...
she looked so happy & cute...bhooli masoom...har chal se pare..nahi chahtha tha
use uthana..lekin kyun...use se door jane ke bechani thi yah..use neiend se jaga ne
ka kata..kya tha jo use rookh raha tha..deere se uske kareeb aaya aur uske galoo
to sahlaaya..she blushed..her cheeks were pink..he moved closer..he sat down next
to her on his knees...he moved her curls & she snuggled ..with his touch..
geet - sona dona please...
maan smiled..he probably just wanted to hug her right then.....
maan - its 10..don't u have to go home..
geet - aap kitna kaam karthe hoo...mujhe sona bhi nahi dethe..
maan - aacha ghar jaake soo lena..
she turns her face other side..his hand that was resting on her locks..now slips under her cheeks
she comfartably sleeps on it..maan waits for few mins..& tries to call her again
he gets up & bends over to the other side..his right hand was under her cheeks..
so slowly patts her on the left side..and wispers in her ears..utto geet...
she snaps up ..almost kissing his lips..she holds her lips in fear & closes her eyes....
maan lifts her with his right hand supporting her back & makes her stand up...he brings her closer uske saanse jaise chalna bhool gayee thi... dil dhadhkna...maan useke
latoo se khelna lagha...geet still had her eyes closed..ankhee sharma rahi thi yah
dar rahee thi ..ki uske dil kal haal usme dikhayee na dethe..
geet - mujhe ghar jaana hain
maan firmed his grip on her back & said..jaavoo
her hands rested on his chest & she burried her head into them..
maan locked her into his embrace...his lips feathering near her ears & wispered
maan - tum ne to khaha tha ki main khas nahi hoon...
she snaps out & cluctches her duppata..& says bilkul khas nahi ho..
maan - challoo ghar drop kar detha hoon..(maan smiled)
geet - ji ..(she did'nt dare to look at him..)
when they reach the parking lot..the driver was not around..so they had to wait for few mins..
maan called the driver...& asked him to come soon...
while they were waiting..few guys..4 of them.. come out with knife & asks them to hand over wat ever they have....maan pulls out his vallet watch & hands over..then they turn to geet for her belongings..she hides behind maan..
maan - leave her alone..she does'nt have anything on her..
one of the gundas pull her bag maan hold his hand & they have a bloody fight
maan almost got over all of them..then one of the guy pulls out a gun on geet
three of them starts bashing up maan..geets eyes gets filled up in tears..
seeing him like that state...maan looked into her eyes..she was crying seeing him get hit..mar use pad rahe the..aah uske zooban pe tha...har ek dard uske aankoo se chalkraha tha...maan samjh nahi paya..ki use dard kyon ho raha hain....uske aansoon ko deehk kar yah ..mar khaa kar!! ...brij came & kicked the hell out of the guy..who had the gun on Geet..
maan took care of the rest of them...maan turned to geet & asked tum teehk ho..
she fainted into his arms...he lifted her & put her in the car's back seat

maan blasted the driver - tumhe salary main ghadi challeni detha hoon
duty ka waqt chai peena ki nahi...take us to the hospital now
brij - thanxs ji...aap bar bar meri bhahen ko bacha the aaye hain..
really greatful to u..but hospital is not required..just drop us near the next taxi stand
she will be fine...darr gayee hogi shayad..
maan - are u sure u don't want to go to the hospital
brij - yah I am sure
maan - then I will drop u guys home..
when they reach home..maan opens the door & goes to lift her..
brij interupts..nahi ji..I will manage ..thanxs for the help...
pinky rushes out & enquires wat happened
brij - kuch nahi..bus darr gaye hainn..tu uska bag lekar aana
pinky - maan sir ..aap..
brij - kya huwa pinky?
pinky - yeh hamare boss hain
maan gives her bag to pinky and leaves...
nahi jaana chahtha tha shayad...uska dil tho..uske aankhe kol ne ke intzaar main dhadkana bhool gaya ...kartha bhi kya..kuch kah nahi paya..na rukh paya..na jaa paya..uske rooh mano..
pheechai chooti jaa rahee thi

precap
jo haal dil ka idhar ho raha hain..woo haal dil ka udhar hoo raha hain

thanxs for all ur responds..hope u like this part too...please do comment..since night shot...baby sleeping already😆😆😆
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cute update.....loved the way she went to his room.... slept on his desk.....want more romantic scenes.....when will maan come to know its his baby........and i am sad that there is no conversation between mommy and baby😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. Muskann in next update i want their conversation....anyways lovely update. plzzzzzzz update soon


luv you,
vinitha
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
fab update!!
i really liked it....
she went n slept in his cabin...awwww....how sweet!!
lurved it.....n ven he hugged her.......how sweet...
tumne toh kaha tha ki mai khaas nahi hu.....n she juz moves away.....tat wz soooo cute.....
n maan saves d day again....but wid d help of brij.......
he shud hav taken her to d hospital naa.........he wud hav cum to noe tat she is pregnent......tat to wid his child......
god noez wt will happen once he cumz to noe........
geez m already excited!!!
do update soon sweetie!!

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont have words muskan 4 u ,sometimes the depth of ur write ups leaves me speechless .jab ki koi mujhe words mein jeet nahi sakta, aaj tak sabhi yahi kehta hai
very different story and concept though leads r our loving geet and maan.pls update soon
lov ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
another fab delivery from your side.....yaar reading your this FF is like listening to a song.. will take us to another world ../ loved it a looot yaar.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
really great yaar one u give us Big twist in PKE and the other u make us lite at heart thank uj so much. and y dint u PM me is the Pm not working for u also
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Liked their convo
Geet is so shweet she jus went in his cabin n slept haaye
That was the fabbes part in this update
She talkig to baby was lil funny but sweet
Thank God Brij came warna hamar Maan Geet ko dekhne me aur pit jata

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