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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updated and love the mama and baby convo . update the nxt soooonnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey muskan di,

when u update dear I m waiting plz update soon
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskaan,

Well, this was a very nice update!
I loved it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The main reason coz Geet is shown more responsible here
and not crazy..........

Well, rahi baat Maan ki toh,
i suggest you that Geet should truly show him to respect her,
ofcourse, she act childish, but she is good....hai na...

Geet should not forgive Maan that easily,
ya, please punish him,
I will be more happy if she is normal and tries to be professional,
rather than getting attracted to that Arrogant Maan,
sach mein, he was so mean, "pna nahi toh mere reputation ke baare mein sochti"
i mean how can he say that............

Please punish him hard, iss baat ke liye usse kabhi maafi nahi milni chahiye,
i hated him for this,
It would have hurt Geet so badly,
please make Geet more stronger,

Aap samajh gayii na, mujhe kitna gussa aaya,
Maan ke dialogue pe, he is such a rude,
let now Geet show him the rudeness in a very decent way, like eeping quiet without giving up

Love
lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haaye jus too sweet update
Jus loved it to the core
Geet n Dadi's convo was fab
Loved their bonding
Geet was getting close to baby
Maan was rude sadu kahin ka
Suniye haaye marjawa is word par😳
Lets c how Maan pataofyies her
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 13

maan - geet suno..meri baat suno..please
she rushed down the steps ..maan kept his hand infront of her..


geet stood there...looking down..maan held his ears ...and said sorry
baby~its ok...mama dehko na papa kitne cute hagreha hain.bilkuil meri tarah .😳..kya kha thi woo..use deehk kar aise hi bus ek dam chup chap khadi rahi
uski maasoomiyat pe maan kurban ho chala tha..use aapne aaghosh main leetha..
aur aapne god mein utta liya..dono ko kuch hosh nahi rahtha...bus rahtha to ehsaas ek dosre ke betabhi ka .....he took her to the outhouse..she embraced him..her tears were weting his neck
he made her sit on the couch he wiped her tears..her tears did'nt seem to stop
kya baat thi joo geet roothi rahi..itna kyun use bura laagha ..maan ki
baathe use kyun choo jaathi...use rootha dehk maan aapne aap ko sambal nahi paya
he kissed her tears & his one hand cradled her head making it impossible
to twist..geet innocently looked at him..he sucked in a breath..in pain
she only got out a squeak before she was in his arms and his mouth covered hers..
his arms imprisoned her.. so struggle was pointless.. but he did not hurt her
he would never ...she helplessly gave in..like always...she closed her eyes
& tears rolled down..maan kissed her tears again..tum roya mat karoo
tumhare aasoon mujhe bebas kardethe hain..& aur yeh kayal ki inki wajah
main hoon..aur bhi mujhe pagal kar dethe ha hain...kyun har baat par roo dethi hoo tum

he hit is hand hard on the sofa's rim..
geet - aap itna na pasand kyun karthe hoo mujhe...hamesha mujhe gussa karthe hoo
suddenly he pushed her hands behind her, took her two slender wrists in one hand,
and held them there...fear shot through her at this bondage, and she turned wildly to get
out of it..geet was shocked ..she tried to break that grip she could'nt..
maan - don't even try..or I will have to hurt u
wo khabhi use chot nahi phuchatha..phir kya baat thi..jo maan is kadar use pakade huya tha
maan ki aankhoo main jo narazghi thi..use to woo dar hi gayee..uska dil bechain ho gaya
kya kha diya jo woo itna naraz hogaya tha..
her mouth was dry in fear...her body was trembling in fear..maan pressed himself
against her..her legs, her waist..her upper body...that was definitly not wat geet expected..
his hand momentarily tightened on her wrists so that she could not stifle a cry of pain...
pressure immediately lessened, but she could feel the intensity of his control and
the danger of its loss...geet wondered wat was maan upto...she fluttered her eyelashes
his eyes was burning in anger...he looked at her ..
maan - I hate u ..samjhi tum...
mujhe nafrat hain..tumse..tumhari baatoon se..tumhari bechkani harkathoon se..
mujhe nafrat hain is bebasi se...nafrat hain jise tarah tum mujhe dehk thi hoo...
main tumhara raj nahi hoon...

geet - ho bhi nahi sakthe...tears rolls down...
he released her at once ..she hugged him...
nahi aap mera raj ...nahi hoo...aap woo hoo hi nahi jise main pasand karoon..
aap main aise koi baath nahi jise main chahoon
phir kyun mujhe itna pareshan karthe hoo..kyun mujhe rullathe hoo
kyun aap ki baathe mujhe tadpathi hain..kyun aap pe gussa aatha hain..
kyun rooth thi hoon aap se ...kyun maan bhi jaathi hoon...
starts breaking down into his arms
they cuddle up complaining to each other...
maan - i hate u..
geet - I hate u too..actually hate u 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10...
baby confused..goes back to sleep.🥱.
maan kisses her forehead..& they sleep on the couch...cuddled up..feeling lighter at heart
nafrat main bhi unke itna pyar tha ..ki kya likoon main...
ek dosre ke aagosh mein chupa liya ho jaise ...ek dosre ki aankho mein bas gayein ho jaise
naa raha koi bhi armaan unki dil ke adhure jaise...kuch ish tarah se ek dosre main base hoon jaise...
around 2 am...geet - suniya na......
maan - umm!! hugs her back...
geet - suniya na..ji woo..
maan - kya huwa geet...I know u hate me 2, 3, 4, 5,..10
geet - nahi..woo nahi..
phir kya
...he looks at her with his drooping eyes
geet - woo..daadi ko medicine deena hain..4hrs wala
maan smiles at her & kisses her again...& says..I hate u..
she shies ...me too...2, 3,
baby ~ papa momy mujhe abhi se 1, 2, 3 pada rahe hain...uff! !
maan - main medicine dehkar aatha hoon...
geet - umm!!!
maan takes the medicine & gives to daadi maa
daadi - use mana liya
maan - umm!!!..nahi daadi jaise aap soch rahe hoo waise kuch nahi hain
daadi smiled..
maan comes back to the outhouse....she was sleeping cuddled up in the couch...
maan lifts her...geet hugs him ..kya kar rahe hoo...
maan - bedroom main leetha detha hoon
baby~i was so uncomfartable here..luv u papa🤗
geet - umm!!..
maan makes lay on the bed & tucks the spread ...
he slips in next to her & keeps looking at her...geet blushes with her eyes closed..
geet - aap aise mujhe deehko gaye to mujhe sharam aathi hain...
& cuddles into him...maan smiles & wonders wat on earth r they both doing...
kya kar guzar rahe the dono...na koi izhar na koi rishtha...phir kaise pagalpan
tha yeh!! nafrat ke izhar main itni tapez thi..to phir ..pyar ke izhar main
to mano intaha ho jayaghi...dar lagh raha hain..kaise dono..har rasmo riwaz ko
jhuklathe huwai...nafrat ka yah rishtha nibha rahe hain...

precap

morning sickness...😆😲
thanxs guys for all ur love & posts...sorry could not reply...definitly been reading it.like 100 times..😲👏👏.please please to comment...really motivates me..to write...better...
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome dear !!!,.. loved the "Hate you" part a looooot.. Raj Maan ka ek dum opposite character hai.. phir bhi Geet Maan se bahot pyar karti hai.. Izhar kab karegi???.. dear when will Maan know that she is pregnant????????.. awaitimg for next update.. pls update sooooooon

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Edited by febinyusuff - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI MUSKI 😊


LOVELY UPDATE AS ALWAYS , WAITING FOR THEIR CONFESSION ASAP ................ AND AGAIN A SOUND STRONG STORY FROM YOUR END ................ WAITING FOR NEXT TWIST MORNING SIKNESS .....................WILL HE COMES TO KNOW THE TRUTH OF THIER BABY ........
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update dear...waiting for the next one..!!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww baby convo is lovely wen r u going to reveal Geet's preggy to Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice, you have done it again, love the baby too, 3,4,5,6😉

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