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Posted: 14 years ago
4 madhoshi. this song i wanna dedicate
ya raat mastani madhosh kia jaye
koi dor mujha khijaye teri oar kia jaye...

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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 11

maan - aacha baba nahi dand raha hoon...
geet cuddles up back again...
maan - lekin tum utooghi nahi to main tumhare liya breakfast kaise banooga
geet makes a face & unwillingly moves away..
maan gets up & goes to the kitchen...she follows him with her sleepy eyes...
she pulls the chair & rests her head on the dining table..
maan - kya khana hain..
geet - kuch bhi ..baby - pasta😃
geet baby tu chup kar.. baby - .
maan - kya? geet - ji kuch bhi any thing is fine...
maan - ok I will make pasta for u...
baby dancing in joy
...geet - yehlo..baap beeta ki aachi jodi hain...bina kuch khahe
ek doosre ki baath samjhe jathe hain....meri hi baath koi nahi samjtha
maan comes close to geet lifts her chin..khoun tumhari baath nahi samjtha


geet ji..woo..kya kha pah aathi..maan ko aapne intnai nasdheek paathi to..sirf use hi
deehkne laag jaathi..kuch aisa nasha tha geet ke aankhoo main..khud maan nahi sambal
patha tha...aapne aap ko...geet ke dil ki dadhkan..teez ho chali thi...dar gaya tha shayad...
he moved back ..kabi lafz bhool jaata.. kabi baat bhol jaata ...usme main is qader
maan koo jaatha ki apne aap ko bhool jaatha.. uth ker kabi jo useke paas se chal de to..
jaate hue Khud ko uske paas bhool jaatha...woo tu abhi bhi..us dhadkan ki aagosh main koya tha
geet khud ko sambal te huai ...sharmathe huai..nazaren jhookathi..
khomshi si cha gayai..dono kuch kah nahi paye..aur dono shayad bhaut kuch samjh gaya...
maan cleared his throat
maan - spicy yah normal
geet - ji
maan - do u want it be more spicy
geet - spicy ..baby - normal
geet mumers meri tu aaj kal chalthi hi nahi hain.
.& then says...normal...
maan confused...tum kya bolthi rahthi hoo...
geet has a bite & says...jab se aap meri zindhaghi main aayee hoo...sab kuch
pheeka pheeka ho gaya hain...is pasta ki tarah...kuch bhi mera hisabha nahi hota


maan - GEET.... u asked me to make it bland & now u are complaining...
tum ladkiyoon ki problem hi yahi hain...always complaining!!!
baby yes..yes always complaining ...ask me
geet pushes the plate away mujhe nahi khaa na..baby mujhe to khana hain..
maan - teehk hain muth khaavoo...he takes her plate & starts eating..baby shocked😲!!!
geet turns her face away...baby papa mummy dono ko mera khayal nahi hain..weeping
maan - aacha baba kha loona..kitna gussa karthi ho tum..

baby- challoo..atleat papa ko to hain
maan feeds her...
geet - phir aap aise baathe kyun karthe hoo
she has it ...maan smiles
maan - tum itna pareshan kyun rahthi hoo..hamesha(feeding her)
geet - wat do u want me to do? I can't go to college, I can't stay with my parents
mujhe yanha aacha nahi laaghta..tears rolled down her eyes

uske aasoon jaise mano use chani karthe hoon..pegal sa jatha ..
he cups her face..wipes her tears with his thumb...tum wapas kyun nahi chali jathi
geet - how can I go back...in this situation..
maan - atleast complete ur studies...if u want I will help u get admission in a good college
geet - why don't u understand..when I can't go home..how can I go to college..in
this situation...

maan - wat situation geet...jab tum job kar sakthi ho to why not studies
geet - job is only for 2months na...tab tak to kisi ko kuch nahi pata..she stops
baby OOPS!!
maan - if u r not liking here then u should go back ...do wat makes u happy
geet - meri khushi ki kisi ko parva nahi...mera saath pata nahi kya kya ho raha hain
aaj kal..mera taste buds bhi mera hisasab se nahi chaltha...can u believe..I started
liking bland sea food..yucks!!!..who on the earth likes bland sea food and sushi..
baby angry😡

maan - wow...I love sushi..I love bland sea food..mujhe jada masale dar khana pasand nahi hain baby me too me too..
geet - no wonder...tabhi to..phela nahi bata sakthe the...
maan - kya? kab phele? kya bhoolthi rah thi hoo tum?
geet - mujhe aap se khabhi milna hi nahi chahiya tha..
maan - phir kyun aa jaathi ho hamesha mera samne..
geet - mera bus chaltha to khabhi bhi nahi aathi...
lekin uska bus chaltha khana tha...dono aapne madhoshi ke samne bebas jo ho jate the..
maan - challo finish karo...thoda hi hain...(continues feeding her)
geet - nahi aur nahi khana...
maan - btw wat arrangements have u done in ur house?
she smiles...I locked the room from inside..aur main peechai wale door se aayee hoon
maan - wat if some one knocks the door
geet - no body disturbs me when I am sleeping...except u
maan - kyun?
geet - everyone knows..there is no point...kyun ki main utt thi nahi hoon...
maan - probably i know that too..now
baby mujhe bhook lagtha hain phir bhi nahi utthi..baby complaining to papa

geet - aacha jaldi se mujhe ghar drop kareeya na
maan - mujhe tumne aapna driver samjh rakha hain..jaise aayee thi waise hi challe jaavoo
geet gets offended..ok bye..& turns to leave
maan pulls her back...she snaps her hand
maan - geet suno
geet - bye..
maan - geet I was just joking...
geet - well i did'nt like ur joke..
maan tries to stop her...
geet - please let me go...
maan - yaar tum baat baat pe gussa ho jathi hoo
geet - main aise hi hoon....aapki mini skirt wallon ki tarah nahi...

maan takes the keys & rushes out...geet walks away...
maan stops the car next to her & opens the door...
she closes the door & walks away....maan gets down..pulls her & makes her sit in the car...
maan - why are u creating a scene?
geet - maine aap ko drive samjh kar nahi bola tha...
maan - I just said that..I did'nt mean any thing...
geet - aap bhina socha samjhe kuch bhi bhol dethe ho...lekin aap ke batho se hamara
dil bhur aatha hain..waise bhi mujhe aap se kuch umeed rakhni bhi nahi chahiya..
maan stops the car..& turns to her...& holds her arms...tum aise kaise kha sakthi ho
kya kha diya geet ne ..jo maan itna tadap utta...kyum chatha tha ki geet us se
umeed rekhe..jab woo khud bhi umeed rakhne se dartha tha...yah phir woo khud us umeed
ki umeed laga betha tha..kuch to baath thi...jo maan use aapne se door nahi kar pa raha tha.
hugs her passionately...his hands holds her really close...his heart seem to ooz pain
mano maan uski ummeed ki tapish se zinda tha...varna jaise hawa to bahut sard thee
drmiyaa unkee vahi to shayad ik taar thee ...bina kuch kahe..bhut kuch kha gaya..
geet mano uske tadap samjh gayee...saamet liya uski bechani ko aapne bahoon me..
kuch deer takh yunhi sambal the rahe ek dosre ko...maan kissed her forehead...
khilsi jaathi woo.. sharmathe huwai boli.. jaldi aana...

precap

geet meeting daadi!!!😲
hope u all like this part...thanxs a lot for all ur replies & comments..I just love it...
please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey muskaan,

FABULOUS UPDATE👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........LOVED IT....UNKOWING ABT EACH OTHER FELLINGS ALSO THEY SHOW THEIR FEELINGS😊.............I LOVED THE WAY HOW MAAN TAKES CARE OF HIS GEET👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........BABY IS JUST AWESOME.........I THINK BABY IS A GIRL THAT IS WHY SHE IS MORE TOWARDS MAAN THAN GEET😛😉...........I LOVE THEM AS A FAMILY😊 ..............THEY R THE BEST.

with luv,
vinitha
Edited by vinithaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely even though they haven't said anything i mean they itself don't know they are in love... still they both show authority over each other.. Lovely muskan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan sweet update 😊
baby mujhe bhook lagtha hain phir bhi nahi utthi..baby complaining to papa
hey muskan baby complain to papa how lovely sweet baby
mujhe nahi khaa na..baby mujhe to khana hain..
baby sooo mean han hehehe lolzzz well muskan all in all its a cute,sweet and lovely waiting for next part 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey...that was awesome...really loved..

as fab as ever...really superb...

keep writing...waiting for

next update...update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Jus loved it

Geet gets angry more than Maan yaar n Maan always pataofies her
Liked the way she was open in frnt of him
I really want Geet to tell Maan abt her pregnancy yaar
Geet unknwingly hurted Maan
Loved their relation a lot
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Posted: 14 years ago
lol i luv d baby...hez hilarious!
juz lyk his father......!!!!
fab update
n hmmmmm........geet gnna meet dadi....cool!
waiting eagerly
update asap!

luv
Nacpreet
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan loved it. baby is so lovable. so nxt time geet dadi meeting is planned. looking fwd 2 it. Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome uppdate😉😉😉😉😉

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