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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Muskan, seriously girl lovely written....

Waiting for the next part....



Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
waoooooo.......lovely update.....
i hate u part was really gr88....👏
i really think,if dere is so much passion in their confession of hate,den wat will happen wen dey will confess their love????😍😳
but i feel bad 4 baby yaar......abhi se padhana start kar diya geet ne????😕bechara......i really feel sorry 4 baby😭....
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Posted: 14 years ago
o o very very cute...this is the best FF i ever read..thanks..and update sooonnnnnnnnnnnnn..PLSSSSSSSSS
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Posted: 14 years ago

nisha_bh - i know poor baby...
Iqbal Neha1, Muniza, susana,huntor,anufa, premspadhu
jennifer1993, reea88 , sweet cherry, shreya satish ----thanxs guys
angelic shaz - i hate u..umm..cute na
nidhi - umm..thanxs..luv u 1, 2 3
desigurl953 - cuddling is cute na
wajiha-1 - glad u like the feelings part..
sonnal_17 - welcome darling
Starry_night - i know the baby is going to really make them go nuts!!
Shwetha - lots more to come
kooliio - darling thats going to take time
annu - glad u liking it..
sona-rai - working on it
charmed ones- so u get more!!!
fijianbabe - baby my fav too
Soni-Sanraj - thanxs
Firegurl - thanxs...yah emotional!!
vinitha - glad u liked that part...& i know poor baby!!!
now u will have two updates...madhoshi & pyar ka ehsaas
MaanEET_FAN - glad it did!!!
MyInfatuationz - but i love u....
cute-aly - thanxs darling!!!!finally u wrote...missed u
Tressa - naughty baby!!
.sireesha - OMG OMG...wow that was cool..thanxs for so much of luv
shivangi783 - glad u liked the hindi lines...i really work hard on them!!!
that gives the madhoshi effect
dhrashtee - lets see wat clue maan gets..or not!!!
Tishuu - thanxs dear...baby part will take some time
rachna- sorry yaar....got held up with pyar ka ehsaas
rama6 - baby is cute na...poor baby 1, 2 3
tanya_vi - finally ur back...thanxs....
oye..continue!!!
PrithviSanyo1 - thanxs u liked that
shimontini - glad u liking it now....it is just setting in...
Soumya - yaar u always get to the crust of it..love u...
ginny_2 - glad u could see that
uzmam1 , nihatri, aarthirajendran - that will take few more parts
MjhtFan_Mahima - wow thanxs for that
shah10, neshwar - thanxs..welcome darling
hermoini- morning sickness...bechara maan
navpreet - yes darling...thats madhoshi!!!
afsha-wow darling i luved u noticed that...geets maturity!!!!
ramyayuppy - maan knowing will need some time..lots of confusion need to be sorted first
SakshiGarg - best papa na...sochu to...without any relation..they are like this
ansah - thanxs...hate u ...cute & best confession
love_lavnya - thanxs dear...sorry to have kept u waiting
jaya - finally aap ko time mil gaya...missed u so very much
kirti_fiji - me to luv the baby!!!
shaaranya - lets see
Maania - yaar 2 2 not possible!!!
taanni - oye oye..naughty...aur kya karvana hain..bechari already pregnant hain
kyphfanz - thanxs..i luv u 1,2,3,..10
sweet scorpio - typical maan stlye
febinyusuff - i know..poor maan...aab raj kaise bane!!
seema - glad u could feel the story was strong!!!

thanxs a lot for all ur support

love

muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 14

geet wakes up..to see maan sleeping peacefully next to her
sapna sa lagtha.. maan ka chehra maasooms laagtha..muskarthi
phir khud hi sharma jathi..kuch dare yunhi aahain bharthi rahthi..
baby tu bhi aise he dikhna teehk hain..baby smiles😃
she checks the time...6.30...
she moves his the strands on the forehead..behind & kisses him on his forehead...he hugs her
she snakes his hair & moving the finger along side his jaw line
maan - are u hungry?
geet - umm!!
maan gets up at once & goes to the kitchen...
geet - suniya...
maan - khaiya.. (she blushes)
geet - nahi ..woo daadi ka medicine ka time ho raha tha..
main ghar jaa kar breakfast karloonghi...I will leave now..
maan stares at her...chup chap yanha bethoo...
I will give daadi the medicine & come...then I will make u breakfast &
then drop u home...umm!!
geet looks at maan & flutters her eye lashes ..
geet - umm!!
maan goes to meet daadi gives her the medicine & comes back
he makes her a sandwiches & milk ...looks for her...
maan - pata nahi kanha chali jathi hain..GEET!!! GEET!!!
geet - main yanha hoon....
maan - yanha khanha??
geet - washroom!!!
maan waits for her ...gets restless hearing her vomiting...
she continues vomiting...for some times & starts crying...
maan rushes in...& pats her back....she still does'nt seem to stop
maan - kya huwa tumhe?
geet - mujhe mujhe woo...
maan - challoo doc ke paas chalthe hain...
geet - nahi..nahi..woo actually..kal dinner nahi kiya tha is liya..
baby ~ mujhe book laghi hain..geet tu chup kar..ek to main vomiting se pareshan hoon
aur tujhe bhook laghi hain..
maan helps her wash up & wipes her
she again feels like throwing up!!! she goes back again & starts vomiting.again..
maan - tumne kal dinner kyun nahi kiya...
geet makes a baby face....& throws up again...
he cleans her up again & makes her sit on bed...she feels like throwing up again
geet - I can't walk any more...mujhe se nahi hota...
she throws up & maan extends his hand...
maan - hogaya...???
geet starts crying again...
maan - why r u crying...now..(he washes his hands & gets a tub for her & keeps it
next to the bed..)gets a wet towel & wipes her
he makes her drink some water & wipes her tears...
geet - mujhe ghar jana hain
maan - I won't let u go any where like this..
he feeds her the sandwich..baby uff!! finally something to eat..yummy yummy😃

after she finishes he gives the milk & tells her to finish that...
I have put 3 spoons sugar ...geet smiled...
maan - challoo aab soo javoo...
geet - aap mera itna khaiyal kyun rak rahe ho
maan - because I hate u...
geet - hate u 2, 3 maan cuts her..chup..ek dum chup...soo jaavoo abhi
(baby rolls his eyes for 2,3,..not again!!!)
kaise yeh rishtha tha...jo nadhani se aapne sare rishthe nibha rahe the
kaise door thi jo unhe jodhi ja rahi thi...kitna bechain hogaya tha maan
use aise dehkar...

maan calls pinky
maan - geet is not well ...she thrown up like 20 times since morning
pinky - wat ?? how is she now....I will send veerji to pick her..
maan - I don't think it is reqired...she is sleeping now...when she gets up
I will drop her home...do'nt worry ..she is fine now

pinky - yes sir

geet wakes up after couple of hrs & looks for maan...
use aapne saraane na paka kar machal se gayee woo..jaise ki use to aadat se
pat gayee hoo...jaag kar usee ka chahera dehknai ki..
har pal unke deedar ko mano tarasne laagha tha dil...
unse milne Ke liye har waqt kyun tadapne laagha tha dil ...
us tadapne ke aanch mano aankhoo se boonde ban kar barsene laaghi thi...
maan walked in with juice ...
geet ran into him & hugged him tightly...
maan - kya huwa geet?
geet - where were u? why were u not there when I woke up?
aap bhut bure hoo....I hate u...hamesha mujhe pareshan karthe ho..
his one hand cradled her head & other held the juice..
kuch khana chatha tha lekin kha nahi paya.. darne laagha tha aapne
is nafrat ke rishthe se...samjh nahi paya ki ..yah nafrat hain..
yah kuch aur ??? uske khayal se bhi mano jaise dartha hoo aakhir kyun nahi
samjhe pare the dono ki yeh madhoshi unhe kis mode pe le aayee hain...

maan - juice pee loo
she moves her head for a no...
maan - see ur looking really weak..just have little bit
geet - nahi...
maan - kitna zid karthi ho tum? (baby~ask me...)
have it now(stirn voice)
she makes a face & has half glass..
it was around 9.45am..
maan - how are u feeling now..
geet - i am better now...
maan - I am going to office now..on the way shall drop u home challoo..
geet nodes her head...
uske haan main mano naa chupa hoo...uske jhuki palke mano
aasoon ko samthe huai khadhi hoon..uska yun naa khana bhi maan ke dil ko
choo jaatha...kaise bechara use aapne se door kartha...lekin
dasthoor tha...jaise ki sare dasthoor nibhathe challein hoon...!!!!

ajaab se khamoshi se thi car mein...dono kuch nahi kah pareha the..yah phir kah rahe the..
geet - daadi ne subha waali medicine lee?
maan - umm!!
maan - if ur not feeling well take off today
geet - i am fine now...(that was immediate...like how could she miss a day of work..
or was it how could she miss a day of closeness!!!)
maan stops the car infront of her house...
dono main ek dosare se door jane ka gham tha mano...
kya pagal pan tha yeh...aise machal rahein the jaise judai nahi chathe the
she opens the door & walks out..
maan - tum office aa rahii hoona?
geet smiled - umm (she turned to leave)
maan - kab tak aavoo ghi (turns to see him)
geet - ji woo...1hr(she turns again)
maan - jaldhi aana (turns to see him)
geet - umm(she turns back again)
she walked reluctantly like he was going to call her again...
geet - suniya..(turns to see him)
maan - umm
geet - thanxs for every thing..
maan smiled..
she turned to leave...she walked few steps..& turned..before she could
maan pulled her into his strong arms his mouth covered hers..she did'nt
a sec to react she was drawn into his passion...judai ka gum tha ..jo is tharah se izahar kar rahe the...kuch to tha..jo humesha ek dosre ke agosh mein kho jathe..pass hote to dore jaa nahi paathe..dor hote tho har pal pas rehne ki madhoshi mein khoya rehathe...
geet - I hate u...
maan - hate u 2, 3, ..10
baby ~ not aagain!!

precap
geet Jealous with 'J'😲😲

thanxs for all ur lovely comments...hope u like this update too..please please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

SO SWEET....NOWADAYS I AM ADDICATED TO THIS THINGS.....

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update. Will comment later as I have leave for the day. Before the judgement is out, I will have to reach home, can't take the risk of stranding on the roads with agitators.

love you dear,
Jaya
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Posted: 14 years ago
this was superb update 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

geet's baby is really bad always takes maan's side mom ki toh fikra hi nahi ......😆

i love geet's baby nd his BG dialogues its too hilarious 🤣

hate you1,2,3,.n baby will go crazy

part is awesum nd OMG i loved the last part wer they both wr nt ready to leave eacH other

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

this was so beautiful nd awesum


🤗 love

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Posted: 14 years ago
omg...so cute....i really love all the baby bits di...love it
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Posted: 14 years ago

haiiiiii what a cute baby....i love those smileys u use for baby...........adorable and cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

fabulous update
plzzzz ipdate soon
reva

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