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Posted: 14 years ago
geet and baby are rocking
baby is soooo sweeet
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Posted: 14 years ago
9,10,11 three parts are lovely and awesum . and the most lovely is 10 part that night scene was gr8 👍🏼 and update the nxt sooonnn. always mkes the lovelyyyyyyyyyy FF's
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates muskan di!!!! waise i ve a doubt!!! y is geet not telling him abt her pregnancy???? afterall its maan's baby.........he has full right to know abt it!!!! when will she tell him!!!

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SakshiGarg - she does'nt know how will he react ...she herself does'nt want the child...😭not sure...scared..to lose him as wat ever she has between them now!!!
zubi123 - thaxs a lot..glad u liked that part..I was so scared to write that😃
rams - baby my fav too😳
Lakshmi - maan madhosh..he he hee😳
Jassi_preety - ok...trying my best to write in english😃
Rachana - don't worry...u will not know the wait!!!😉
reea88 - wow..I flattered..no no..I am just an fan of Maaneet😳😳😳
thanxs guys
love
muskan
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey,,,,,,plz update twice naaaa,,jus lyk u used 2 update Pyaar ka ehsaas,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,its vvvvvvvv cute n intrstng!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KavyaNaik123

hey,,,,,,plz update twice naaaa,,jus lyk u used 2 update Pyaar ka ehsaas,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,its vvvvvvvv cute n intrstng!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

not sure ...will try doing..as much as I can...
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~madhoshi~
part 12

geet sneaked into the house & managed to maintain her presence..
baby was impressed with momy for once!!!
maan bechain tha aapni aur geet ki badthi nasdeekiyon se..
samjh nahi paya ki kyun woo aapne aap ko us se alag nahi kar paa raha
kyun jab woo use dekh ke aksar Muskuraya karti hai...
jheel si gehri aankhon se kuch keh jaya karti hai...
hanste hanste jab woh jhooth mooth ka rooth jaya karti hai..
na jane kyun Maan ussay manane main laag jaya kartha hai...

maan got ready & went to see the sight...har pal..har lamha...har jagah
use sirf geet he nazar aathi...uska baat baat pur roothna...phir pal main man jana
uska sharmana...phir yun hi useki aankhoo main koo jaana.. uski maasoomiyat
uska kuch na kha kar bhi sab kuch kha jana...kyun uski har baat itni choo jaathi thi
uske dil ko...kyun dil uske ek nazar ke liya tadap uth tha..kyun itna bechain rahtha
use dekhna ke liya...kyun geet ka paas hona use khus kar detha...kyun woo
door rahe ke bhi itna kareeb thi uske..ek pal bhi usse door rehana..mano
koi saza se lagne laaghi thi...kyun aapne dil ko samjha nahi patha...

geet went to the office... adhi & pinky tried to explain her how to work
on the calls & maintain file & records..adhi helped her with computer documents
geet ghadi ghadi maan ke cabin ke taraf deehk thi.. kya baath thi jo uska dil
itna behcain tha.. yah fir woo bhi wohi tadap mahsoos kar rahi thi joo maan
mahsoos kar raha tha...she went into his cabin...touched the arms of the chair...
she felt tickled..like she was touching his arms...she moved her hand up to head rest ..
& shied..she slowly kissed the chair..aap yeh mera saath kya kar rahe hoo...
phelai to sirf aap ko deehk kar koo jaathi thi...lekin aabhi to aap ka ehsaas hi mujhe
madhosh kar raha hain
..geet snaps out..yeh to kya sochne laghi...
maan bhilkul bhi tera raj jaise nahi hain...humesha gussa karthe hain
yeh sab is baby ke karan ho raha hain..baby~aab maine kya kiya?😕

geet works little harder in understanding her work..it was past 7pm..geet was still
looking into the files..
pinky - yaar tu bhi ajeeb hain.... khabhi to tujhe job nahi kanei hoi
aur kabhi tu itni hard work karthi hain..
geet - nahi yaar pinky..I was just trying to learn the work faster...I will be hear only
for 2 months & I want to do it well for maan sir.
..baby ~sir nahi papa!!geet rolls her eyes
pinky - ghar challen?
geet - nahi u carry on ..its going to take some time for me...
phir mujhe mandhir bhi jana hain aaj
it was 8 pm..she completed her work & went to the temple..
she finished her pooja & sat near a pillar..
geet - baby I used to go to temple with my mama & papa...jab tu bada hoga..we will take u too
then she realized she won't be with the baby...tears rolled down her eyes...
she touched her stomach & felt close to the baby...pata nahi kab us se judne laaghi woo
mamta ka ehsaas ta ...pheli bar kuch khas laaga...baby smiled.😃.
oye jada khus mat ho...I am not changing my mind...baby turned his face..mmm..
suddenly some one fainted in the temple & the devotes crowded the elderly lady..
geet - why are u all not taking her to the hospital..
some one from the crowd..wat some thing happens to her on the way...
geet calls a taxi & makes her lie on her lap in back seat of the car...
geet - don't worry we will be in hospital any moment..rubbing her palm..
no no take me to my house..please.. it just BP..
geet - ok aapna address boliya...
khurana Mansion!!!
geet - aap daadi ho?
daadi - sorry...main savithi devi hoon
geet - nahi nahi..mera matlab hain aap maan sir ki daadi hoo?
daadi - umm!!
baby ~meri par daadi..wow.mauuh!!🤗
geet - maan sir bhi na..I had told him not to leave u alone
daadi - ji(wondering yah wohi pyari si ladki to nahi to us din maan ke kitchen main thi)
nakul calls the doctor & geet gets some water for her..
doc - nothing to worry just BP high hogaya tha..get these medicines
give this one every 4hr untill tomorrow afternoon & this one every 3 times

geet - ji..
after the doctor leaves ..geet sends nakul to get the medicines..
geet calls pinky & informs her about wat happened & where she was
daadi - thanxs beta!!
geet - nahi daadi aise mat boliya...
baby ~yeh to inka faraz bantha hain..😉
.geet ~baby u r talking too much now..
daadi - aap ka naam kya hain
geet - ji Geet
daadi - aap maan ko kaise jaanthi ho?
baby - mera papa hain na isliya..jan pehchan ho gayee thi..😳🤣.
geet - woo main unse HP...nahi nahi..main unke office main kaam karthi hoon
main unke temperoray secertary hoon.
.(baby - joot😈)
daadi - maan aap ko bhut gussa to nahi karthe..maine suna hain thode gharam mizaaz ke hain
geet - gussa to poocha mat daadi..unke naak pe rehatha hain...
pata nahi kya samjh the hain aapne aap ko...
(baby - superman..nahi batman..nahi nahi spiderman 👏geet -baby abse tera cartoon network dehkna band baby upset)
daadi smiles
geet - daadi...aap ko pata gussa main woh mujhe GEET aise boolthe hain jaise
koi aapne dogy ko bhoola tha hain...
daadi starts laughing loud..
maan walks in hearing them laugh...sees the time
lifts geet from holding her arms & drags her out
daadi - maan yeh kya kar rahe hain aap...
maan takes her out...& pushes her rudely.
maan - its 10pm now..wat r u doing here...sharam naam ki cheez hain tum main yah nahi
jab deehkoo mera ghar main chali aathi hoo.. aapna nahi to mera reputation to khayal karo
daadi kya sochange humare bare main? just leave now

geet turns to leave..
maan goes into daadi's room...
daadi - yeh kya kiya aapne..
maan - main thang aa gaya hoon iske bechakani harkatoo se
daadi - lekin aaj hum iske bechkani harkatoon ke wajah se teehk hain
maan - kya matlab?
daadi - I fainted in the temple today .. no body helped me..
she bought me home in the taxi & called the doctor..& is been here taking care of me...
maan closed his eyes in disgust..
geet - suniya..(she stood at the door)
maan rushed to her..(her eyes was moist..uske nazre jhuki hui thi..)
geet - ji yeh wali medicine u have to give every 4hrs & this one 3 times morning-afternoon-night she gave the medicine...maan held her hand...she pulled back softly..straighten her bag & left.... baby~hurt too

precap

quite obvious...he he ...maan pataofying!!!😆😆
thanxs for all ur love & support...please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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wow thats Awesome..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏......
Loved it sooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
U made me laugh so much with the baby talks....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣..
My stomach is paining yaar........
The Geet-Baby Talk is the best part of Ur FF⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
wow so finally Geet met Daadi.....😊..
Maan bhi na bina soche kuch bhi bol deta hain.....
Now he has to face a lot of trouble to manofy Geet🤣🤣
Loved these lines sooooooo much❤️❤️❤️
baby ~meri par daadi..wow.mauuh!!🤗🤣🤣🤣
baby ~yeh to inka faraz bantha hain..😉.geet ~baby u r talking too much now..🤣🤣🤣
baby - mera papa hain na isliya..jan pehchan ho gayee thi..😳🤣.🤣🤣🤣
baby - superman..nahi batman..nahi nahi spiderman 👏geet -baby abse tera cartoon network dehkna band baby upset🤣🤣🤣
Eagerly waiting for the next part😍😍😍
Pls Pls Pls Update Sooooooooon
Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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part 10-
wow
fantastic
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part 11-
romance
taht too in kitchen
wow

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