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Posted: 14 years ago
muskiii...

.tum bus yunhi humesha mera nazroo ke saamne rahna.." that was the show stopper....

whenever I read Madhoshi.. it will take me to another world.. You have portrayed Geet with such innocence and love that no one can harm her or do anything that will hurt her. loved all the cute moments MANEET share ..

"she turns into his embrace looking down & says..mujhe dictation nahi aathi..
mujhe typing bhi nahi aathi..mujhe kuch bhi nahi aatha...
maan keeps his finger on her lips..chup ek dum chup..
main phir bhi tumhe job na chotne ko kahnoo to...
she looks at him in disbelive...blinks her eyes ..wow samjh nahi pathi..
uske choone ke ehsaas ko mahsoos karthi yah uske baatoo ko...dono hi
use pagal kardethe...kuch bhi nahi samjh aaya..darthe huye..sharmathe huye..boli
phir main kya karoonghe..maan was so lost in her ..almost said..tum bus yunhi
humesha mera nazroo ke saamne rahna
.."

Loved that one dear a loooot dear.....


dear a suggestion, can you add different font or colour to maneet convo?..
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update. plz update sooonn..
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Posted: 14 years ago

~madhoshi~
part 10

kuch deer tak koyai rahai bhula ke aaj duniyaa saara..
hosh kaise rehatha samya ka..ek dosare ke agosh main jo the...
maan(cuddled her hair) aab to gussa nahi hoo na...
geet just shook her head..still resting it on his chest..
maan - kal subha please office aajana..
geet - umm!!
suddenly they heard brij's voice...calling for geet
brij - geet kya huwa?? pinky said u left the job!!!
& he was coming to her room
geet - aap yanha se jaayee..veer ji ne dekh liya to problem hojaygee
maan - why should I leave..I am not scared of ur brother
he goes & stands next to the door crossing his arms
brij rushes in without noticing maan
brij - kya huwa..tumne job kyun chod diya? kisi ne kuch kaha kya?
geet - nahi..
brij - tum roo kyun rahee hoo..
geet keeps quite
maan - I shouted at her thats why she is crying
brij - aap? yanha?(he was confused bit angry)
baby tera papa ki to aaj band bajne waali hain...kya zaroorath thi bechmain bolne ki..
baby worried for papa

maan - I gave her work she could'nt do..so I got shouted at her..but I never wanted her to
leave the job
...
brij - she is still a kid...does'nt know wat she is doing half of the time
baby laughed 🤣 ...geet chup varna kar mar khaya gha
maan - I came here to make her understand that..aise choti choti baathoo
pe saath nahi choodh the..

brji - thanxs ji...
maan - come to office on time tomorrow & leaves...
brij - geet aab to stop being kiddish!!
geet yeh loo..haat mera papa ne moodaa aur veerji mujhe suna rahe hain...
baby not concerned ..happy for papa...😃

latter while having dinner...
pinky - geet tomorrow will be a cool day in office
geet - why
pinky - DD merrut sight dehkne jaa rahe hain..so we will be free in the office
geet got upset & left to her room..kya baat thi jo geet ko pareshan kar rahi thi..itne ki khana bhi nahi khaya teekh se... uska dil mano pareshan hoo gaya..lekin aakir kyu?

2am maan walked into his room changed & went to sleep..
raath jaise haaseen thi...chandini..aaj uspe maherbaan thi jaise..
kuch ajab si baath thi uske kamre main...mano fiza main uski kushboo hoo
muskara aayee aapne khayal pe...he pulled the blanket & cuddled up...she rolled into him
her touch was his desire...he could'nt believe wat he was feeling...
kuch samjh nahi paya..yeh sach hain yah sapna...itna haseen khwaab tha
ki ..use jeena koo dil machal gaya...he turned to see her....moved her curls
still not sure if he was dreaming..or she was actually there...
geet in sleep..yeh koi waqt hota hain ghar aane ka?
maan blinked his eyes...touched her nose..the her lips..she smiled & blushed
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho..soona doona..
maan got up in shock...
maan - GEEET....tum yanha kya kar rahe hoo?
geet gets up in half sleep cuddling up the blanket in her hand
geet - aap mujh pe gussa nahe kar sakthe


maan - KYUN?
geet - 1. aapne subha promise kiya tha
2. main aap pe gussa hoon
...(she lies down again)
maan - tum kyun gussa hoo? (maan pulls her back up)
geet - woo main subha teehk se gussa karoonghi..abhi mujhe sona do..please
I have been waiting since 10 clock for u ..kaise ghar hain aap ka
kuch khane ke liya bhi nahi hain..(
she lies down again)
maan - go to ur home now...(pulls her up)in stirn voice
please let me sleep for 5mins more..please..(pulls the spread on her
head & sleeps again)
maan - tumhare veer ji pata hain tum yanha ho?
geet - nahi
maan - leave now...wat if they come to know ?.
geet - they won't know...I have made arrangements ..(baby making notes for future tracks)
maan - GEET...leave now (pulls her back up)
geet makes a baby face...please mujhe sirf 5mins aur soona do...only 5 mins more
& takes the spread over her head again
kya kartha bechara...khud bhi use khana use se door jana chahtha tha...
kuch deer thak use dekhtha raha...chaha ki yah pal yunhi tumjaya..
aur woo hamesha yunhi useke paas rahe hain... he lied down next to her..admiring her..
kab aankh laaghi kab use aapne bahoon main liya kuch khabhar nahi...
kuch is kadar saath tha unka..dono..ek dose re ka bahon main
simat se jathe the..do jism ek jaan ho jaise...ek doosre ka saath jaise unke kismat ho
subha jab geet ki aakh koli to aapne aap ko..uske bahon main pathi...
kuch deer tak use dehkthi rahthi..phir use shayad aapna gussa yaad aagaya !!
she moved away & sat up making a face...
uske aahat se mano machal sa gaya.....maan rubbing his eyes mano bus yahi ek kwahish ho jaise...ankh kulai to usi ka chahra samne ho...before he could say anything...
geet - aap out of station jaa rahe hoo aur mujhe bataya bhi nahi...(turned her face)
maan rolled his eyes
maan - tum uske liya raat ko yanha aayee thi?
geet - aap baath mat badloo...ur going out of station..han yanh nah?
maan - haan lekin
geet - lekin kya? why did'nt u tell me?
maan - why should I tell (he snapped back)..
geet - woh..woh..hain!!..woh main aap ki secratry hoon..to aap ko mujhe batna chahiya
mujhe pinky ne bataya...maine teehk se dinner bhi nahi kiya...how can u leave me like
this...without telling me..
aab kya kha tha woo... khabi uske masoomiyat nahi samjh pata to khabhi aapni bebasi ko
maan - geet meri baath sunoo..
geet - mujhe aap se baath nahi karni hain..(she tries to walk away from the bed)
maan pulls her back into him..she fell on his chest...dono ka dil tham sa gaya


sansa ek hogaye...aab to ek doosre ki aadat se pad gayee thi shayad..he moves her curls..
geet main merrut jaa rahoon...which is only couple of hrs from here
& i will be back today evening itself
... geet turns her head away
tum aise rootho ghi to main jaa nahi paavoongha...
geet - aacha hain..main yahi to chahthi hoon...(she closes her mouth)
maan hugs her...tumhare problem kya hain...
why are u angry..I am going to merrut or me not telling u abt it?
geet - mujhe nahi pata...mujhe nahi aacha laga bas...(baby gurmbles )
she makes a baby face..& says hume bhook laaghi hain...
maan - ok I will make some thing for u ..
geet - umm!!!
maan -geet
geet - umm!!
maan - GEET..UTTOOO
geet - aap ne promise kiya tha ki gussa nahi karo gayee..
maan rolls his eyes..kya karon main ise ladhki ka...yeh to mujhe pagal kar deghi..

precap

breakfast!!!!
thanxs for all ur responses...lovd it all...hope u like this part...please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Di

1st one to comment😆😆😆😆
update was awesome,fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.....................soooooooooooo sweet😊😊😊😊😊
Loved it sooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Loved Geet n Baby talks so much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️................baby always support his father😆😆😆😆😆😆
can't believed she went to his house😆😆😆😆
eagerly w8ng for next part
plssss cont soon

Luv
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb yr... ur updates make me MADHOSH... terrific and killing ones..the selection of ur words are parise-worthy... tell me ARE U REALLY SCRIPT WRITER ?
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Posted: 14 years ago

i comment before u pm me....😊

awesome one dear....
i like the baby most...she/he is very sweet..😊😃..
update soon....
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG thats Lovely...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️..................
Thats Fabulous........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.........
Loved it soooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I just Loved the way Maan answered Brijj with confidence...❤️❤️❤️........
I Love Geet-Baby talk soooooooooooooooo much........❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......
OMG I did'nt expect that Geet will go to Maan's house......😲😲😲......OMG how is she going to manage......😆😆😆.....
Geet is really sooooooooooo Cute...😊..She is just like a Kid..............
Loved these lines sooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️
baby tera papa ki to aaj band bajne waali hain...kya zaroorath thi bechmain bolne ki..🤣🤣🤣
baby worried for papa

baby laughed 🤣 ...geet chup varna kar mar khaya gha🤣🤣🤣

geet yeh loo..haat mera papa ne moodaa aur veerji mujhe suna rahe hain...
baby not concerned
..happy for papa...😃🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
baby making notes for future tracks🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣OMG Baby making notes.....................🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Eagerly waiting for the next part..................

Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant believe she went to his house
cant wait for the next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
di i luv ur update and ur e icons im still laughing wat the baby was doing i can't stop laughing. WAT a MUMMY AND PAPA he/she has got MOM is already like a kid in front of papa luv the baby ignoring Geet and going to sleep
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Posted: 14 years ago

baby tera papa ki to aaj band bajne waali hain...kya zaroorath thi bechmain bolne ki..baby worried for papa 😆


so cute update .....👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

i loved it awesum awesum 👏👏👏👏

this was so sweet

maan is gng to cook for geet ........for his secretary...... lovely 👏👏👏

u knw geet nd maan both shud sing "ye rishta kya kehlata hai "😆

they themselves dnt knw why they are so much worreid for each other this is interesting

i love there cute cute fight ........it is fabulous ........👏👏👏👏


love you 🤗🤗🤗🤗






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