FF || My First Fling || #Mature || Completed on Page-107!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi kutties... 😃

Back with another TS [TWO or THREE shots]

If I'll get a good response from you readers I don't mind making it a TEN shot 😆

But can't promise regular updates 🤔

It's not that usual Romedy that I write but somewhat mature and gray 😳

I'm hoping to get a good response 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Kutties...
Not proofread
So please ignore typos and other errors.
Enjoy reading 🤗


PROLOGUE


"Hmm...new to the pub...?" Raman queried while sipping the soft drink standing near the bar counter and heard her saying a "not really" as reply.


"Well...I thought so because of..." He couldn't complete but she cut in saying, "My dress"


He smiled slyly and looked at her closely. A pretty normally dressed girl with a sword tongue. He defined her. The cyan anarkali which seemed out of place for most of the poeple felt out of the world for him. He couldn't help but initiate further talk with her.


"Your name?" He asked whilst drinking.


"Ishita...Ishita Iyer." She replied.


"Oh...Iyer...!" He rolled his eyes as if watching a museum piece.


"What happened?" She asked checking herself out to find if there is any problem.


"I...I mean...I...I thought Iyers are conservatives...Please don't get offended." He stated smiling cheekly.


"No...It's OK. Hmm...well...can I ask you out for the night Mr..." She asked casually.


Raman choked on the drink and completed, "Bhalla...Raman Kumar Bhalla..."


"Oh Mr Bhalla...If you don't mind...we can share the night..." She proposed.


"Well...yeah...it's...it's kinda...great...but...are you sure?" He asked not being able to believe that bold step from a nave and innocent looking girl.


"Of course sure..." She gave him her hand which he accepted gratefully. Mouthing "I got a girl" to Mihir, he walked out with her aiming his house.

TO BE CONTINUED...

DO LIKE AND COMMENT... 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishu itni bold??? Continue soon very intresting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting flirt Ishu ask Raman out for the night.😉 Continue soon.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting concept,ishu is bold..
She asked raman to spend n8 with her..
i dnt know y,im just feeling ,is they are already married..i mean mr & mrs.bhalla..
If not ,i will wait for next part..

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like this story😳
Bold ishu flirty Raman...this is gonna so much fun...
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh teri...
New by u...tum pehle hi purano ke liye bahut tang karti ho...
But I am not complaining

MY FIRST FLING...
Yeah...I love the starting...
But girl in anarkli dress asking for night...kuch to locha hai baba...
Gayu I know u ...sabkuch itna simple thodi hota h... 😆

Tu next update mein sabko shock karegi...

Chotii btayegi tere dimag mein kya chal raha h... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting it's gonna be fun Bold JKR and Shy Ravan😆
twist queen se normal things expect nahi kar sakte apne devilish mind me koi na koi khichadi pakka rakhi hogi😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg...how u have made ishu so bold... sounds interesting... continue soon

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