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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: teetiana


Hahaha😆
I just love your humour @ABHA
🤣

thank u😳...,
but seriously its time for next😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha



😆 😆
U r too much..
Tedha Medha chota badha jaisa b Ho update ho 😉

i know i am😆...sukku bahut greedy hun...
author knows this...
u cant guess how she bears with me😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--


i know i am😆...sukku bahut greedy hun...
author knows this...
u cant guess how she bears with me😆


Yep right.
I can't handle you when you becomes crybaby 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Yep right.
I can't handle you when you becomes crybaby 🤣

ab to fass gyi...now no escape😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Strange is the word . During dinner and car ride was angry mode.but when reach the destination mthe behavior change . So I much say the place that change her or not or something else to pmade her switch the Mode. Now RAM word feel like music of passion for me.😉Update soon.


Ram... 😳
Hihi
Glad you said liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_kartik

Intrigued !!! Is Ishita suffering a split personality here??? Omg. U left it in a cliffhanger


Thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Gayu... Is she possessed by someone :P ... Behaviour bada weird hai yaar
Pal me shola pal me shabnam
Dhanay hai Raman...
I want to say the same thing that Raman said... U know hahaha...


Ghost... 😉
Maybe yes 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

U asked in last update I m replying now.
I m missing dialogues... Unka alag hi charm hai


Yep... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi kutties...😊
FLASHBACK IN ITALICS
Not proofread
Enjoy reading 🤗


Chapter-6

IN-TO-O-O-XICATION



Raman came to Ishita's home with an unconscious Ishita in his arms. An all worried Mr and Mrs Iyer accompanied him to Ishita's room. Raman was trapped. He doesn't know what to say. In fact he really doesn't know what had gone wrong. Everything was perfect until she fainted mumbling his name. What will he inform her parents? That she fainted when they were about to make love? No way!

"Ram...don't...leave me..." She whispered faintly but clear enough for him to hear. He wanted to kiss her. Hug her to console that he will not leave her. But the presence of her parents made him feign ignorance. Mrs Iyer asking who is Ram was the last thing he wanted. He was ran out of words.

"Voh...aunty...I don't...don't know..." He lied through his teeth.

Ishita woke up with a start in the morning. She was lying alone in her bed. After running her hands over beside her to find someone she got up to freshen up. She herself doesn't know whom she expected. Feeling pukey she ran towards the bathroom. Before she could enter she threw up. Feeling disgusted she walked into the bathroom. Her head spinning like a fan.

"Ayyo Murugan...what's happening to me?" She prayed in her mind because her voice was long lost.

She came out to the room wearing a bathrobe to find Mihika sitting on the bed reading some random fashion magazine. Peeping at Ishita's lost face she resumed reading.

"Akka...are you alright?" Mihika couldn't help ask it.

"Nothing Miku...I was...just thinking...of something..." Ishita said checking her wardrobe.

"What's it...?" Mihika put aside the magazine showing her curiosity to listen to her akka.

"Voh...kuch aisi baat hai...maine kuch novel mein pada...it's like...a girl is...dreaming something...about a man...and then...meets the same man and he acts as if ths dream is real...she is confused...is that a dream...or is that real...why she can't just find it out?" Ishita sat beside Mihika hugging her clothes.

[The matter is...I've read a novel...]


"You didn't read it completely?" Mihika crinkled her eyebrows.

"I read it in some site in the net...and forgot the title. I can't wait until I check it out. It...was a cliffhanger...!" Ishita reasoned.

"Is it...hmm...for me...I think...she is mad...aur kuch nahin..." Mihika said casually resuming her fashion reading session.

[Nothing else]

"How can you just say that...?" Ishita got agitated.

"Oh cool down akka...she should consult a psychiartist. I'm sure the writer would make her do so." Mihika pacified her.

Ishita looked at Mihika faking a smile and asked herself, "Should I go meet a doc...a psychiartist?"

It was about 10:30 when Raman came to the Iyer's along with Mihir. He terribly wanted to check on Ishita. Mihir on the other hand wanted to check on his bhai. He was confused!

Ishita came out dressed up. She was in a hurry to go somewhere. Her ignorance affected Raman so badly that he was finding it impossible to suppress his anger towards her.

"How can she just do it? Is she using me? How the hell a woman can use...? But still...she comes to me only at night...and stays Close to that Subbu in day time. Crap...!!" He thought

"Ishita...if you don't mind...may I drop you?" Raman asked making the crowd there stop their breathing pause for some time. Subbu's entry at the very moment was unexpected.

"Kyun...? I'm here no Ishita...Common...I'll come with you." Subbu said taking her in a side hug. His hand circled around her waist. Raman looked at the spot making her uncomfortable with her fiance. She shrugged Subbu's hand politely and kissed his cheek softly saying, "I'd like to prefer Raman today...as my driver."

Subbu fisted his hands in anger still smiling cheekily supporting her decision while Raman has a hearty smile making Mihir touch his heart in tension. In no time Ishita walked out with Raman to meet their destination.

"You know where I'm going?" Ishita asked making a straight face.

"No...I don't..." Raman replied.

"I'm going to meet a psychiartist." Ishita said making Raman put a sudden break. He stared at her in shock while she continued.

"Yes Mr Bhalla...I mean it. I don't think that I'm normal. If...only if you didn't come in my life...I would have been so happy as always...You changed everything. I don't know if you're real or just my hallucianation...!" She explained.

"I'm real Ish...and whatever I told you is real as you and me..." He took her hands in his.

"Ap aur mein...? Mujhe kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aaraha hai Mr Bhalla..." She cried making him angry.

[You and me? I can't understand anything Mr Bhalla]

"Pehale Mr Bhalla bulana band karo...I never did hate my name this much from someone's mouth!" He bursted out in frustration.

[First stop calling me Mr Bhalla]

"Ap kya chahte ho?" Her voice throbbing because of his anger.

[What you want?]

"Tum...I want you for myself. Just for me...because you are...you are mine...just mine...You should accept this fact...drill your head woman..." Raman smacked his own head.

[You]

"I don't remember you..." She began to cry throwing herself in his arms. "I really don't remember you. Mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahin...sach main..." She mumbled in between her hiccups.

[I don't remember anything. Truly]

He caressed her back finally finding peace to have his precious thing. That was she! She captured his mind and soul in her mercy at the very first time they met. She made him hers within a blink of a second.

"Tu hai ab jo baahon mein, Qarar hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Hai nasha, Khumar hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Tu hi ab mera deen hai, imaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Mera kalma hai tu, Azaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Rab Ka... ...Shukrana"


[Now that you're in my arms, I have peace,
Thanks to God
There is intoxication 'n I am intoxicated
Thanks to God
You only are my religion, my faith
Thanks to God
you're my holy words, my prayer,
Thanks to God]


"Ish...still...I think we should go home..." Raman muttered while raining kisses.

"You should do what your heart says Ram..." She hissed against his ear making him smile feeling ticklish.

Taking her in his arms he walked in to the guesthouse. She clung on to him comfortably all the while kissing him.

"Tum is saree main aur khoobsoorat lag rahi hai...!"

[You look more beautiful in this saree]

Raman threw away his shirt while she crawled on her back in a sitting position backwards to the headrest of the bed. Moving towards her he pinned her under him.

"Phirphi...I can't let this saree stay this close to you...!" His voice thickened while he unpinned it with his mouth.

"Tu mila toh sab mila
Ab kisi se kya gila
Tujhme simtu, aa main bikhru
Teri baahon mein fanaa ho jaaun main
Tu hi ab duniya meri, Jahaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Khabon ki khayalon ki udaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana"


[When I found you, I got everything
What problem could I have with anyone now
I would wind up into you,
Would scatter,in your arms,
and be destroyed
Now you only are my world, my universe
Thanks to God
You are light of my dream and thoughts
Thanks to God]

Digging nails...raining lips with sweets of passion resonating the roof like a thunder rhythm they worshiped each other for their heart's content. Guilt of doing wrong pricked his heart everytime he tried to mingle him with her. Backing off for the nth time he rammed her lips. She was lost. Lost in the ecstacy of having him. But he was guilty of making her his. Owning her in a way that no one did.

This is not the first time. When he realised that he is the first to go this deeper in her everything was out of control. But now some unknown force stopped him from doing it again. Still...he wanted her for himself for the rest of his life. She was the "Angel in the night" who made him head over heel fall clfor her!


She tried to part from him only to get yanked closer saying, "Stay..." She was lost. Again. In his arms. They stayed like that God know how long. When Raman composed himself to break the affectionate embrace he found her still. He lightly patted her back only to realise that she is asleep. Asleep in his arms. He waited for her to wake up.

"Sab se ho jaaun pare jo ishara tu kare
Abb toh rehna hai tujhi mein,
Gumshuda hoon main
Ho teri baahon mein...
Jazbo ka toh naya bayaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana
Naya rutba nayi shaan hai
Rab Ka Shukrana"


[I could stay away from all, if you merely give a sign,
Now I have to live in you only
I am lost,
in your arms
Now there is a new depiction of emotions,
Thanks to God
There is a new stature, a new grandeur,
Thanks to God]

Ishita opened her eyes murmuring a sorry for sleeping in such an odd hour that too in his arms making him chuckle. She asked him to concentrate on driving in a straight face indirectly letting him know that she really did forgot about whatever took place a few minutes ago!

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Posted: 10 years ago
concidence...i am first again...res...
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I loved it...
Whats happening with her...its so going on and off...
I loved her saying ram from her mouth...
Phsychiatrst for herself...she doesn't like subbu touch...

Raman finally realised he never felt like this for anyonr...lovely...
She told atleast something to him...

Waiting for more to unfold...
Update whenever you want...
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago

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