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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: --abha--


hope ishu is not con girl...who take raman and usko loot le...
or she is on some revenge thing...

tang...ohhh my god...u are serious...now i am not going to u...


Hihi 😆
I'm not serious 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Kutties...😊
Here goes the first part of my new TS.

FLASHBACK IN ITALICS

Not proofread
So ignore typos and other errors.

Enjoy reading 🤗


Chapter-1

TO-O-UCH...!!



"This was exhausting. If she was going to make this kind of emotional investment in someone, he should at least be a proper boyfriend. But for a casual fling? She could drive herself crazy."

____Lauren Weisberge


"You cannot satisfy any man Ishita...Being with you is like being with a nun. Some stolen kisses are not what a man need." Subbu shouted in frustration.


"What you mean Subbu? You want to have se* with me?" Her voice a mere whisper.


"Isn't that clear...!" He extended his hands as if asking her "is she such a fool."


"OK Subbu. If I should do it to make you believe that I'm a desirable woman who can satisfy a man...I'm ready to go to any extend." She said sternly.


Subbu smiled sheepishly and pulled her to him by her waist. She lightly pecked his lips which he deepened. Breaking the kiss she murmured while rubbing his chin, "You're so bitter today."



Raman constantly called Ishita and shook her out of the stupor. They were in the porch of his house.


"Ishita...What happened? We have reached..." He said pointing towards the doorway.


"Yep...Let's...let's go...inside Mr Bhalla..."She said laming everywhere.


He leaned over her while she pressed against the door. Her hands shivered while she mentally chided, "He is just a stranger Ishu.Be bold. Don't disappoint him."


"No formalities tonight. Call me Raman...and...more..." He huskily voiced near her lips which were torturously brushing by his. The smell of votka muddled with her breath which made her tilt her face.


"I hate drinking Raman..." She declared while travelling her hands from his chest to encircle around his neck.


"Ooopz...sorry...What should I do now?" He pouted his lips.


"Maybe you can taste me...I'm sweet enough." She said drawing the outline of his lips with her forefinger. She licked her lower lip seductively which made him look at her yummy pink petals. She sunk her upper raw of teeth into her lower lip making him keep on enjoying her enticing beauty. He took one of her hands from his shoulder and kissed her knuckles softly. She closed her eyes feeling shivers spreading her entire being.


"This man is wonderful. Subbu never made me feel like this. That means...he is not a man...! Eww...!!!"


His lips travelled to her slender shoulder and he threw off the shawl to the back seat. His generous lips showered thousands of hungry kisses on her neckline making her moan in pleasure. She couldn't control her cheeks deck up a happy curve owing to his ticklish caresses.


"We should go inside..." she whispered in his hair while he kept on kissing her neckline. He groaned in irritation for her interruption and broke the embrace. She chuckled seeing his puppy face and consoled patting his cheek, "Don't rush...I'm all yours tonight."


He opened the car door for her like a gentleman and forwarded his hand which she accepted smiling. Both of them walked inside hand in hand. A posh mansion where no life other than them was visible. Her jaw dropped to the floor watching the beautiful decor.


"So this is where you bring girls...?" She asked while running her finger on a french flowervase. He smiled cheekly and hugged her from behind. She leaned back resting her head on his left shoulder whilst he kept his chin over her right shoulder and replied, "Yep...lately."


She gurgled feeling him drawing patterns on her belly while smelling in the fragrance of her hair. Tugging her closer to his taut body he whispered in her ear, "Bedroom is in upstairs."


They were in a passionate back hug which she broke and moved forward. But he dragged her to him swirling her around making her crush to him. He took off the clip which pinned her long locks. Letting his fingers comb her loose strands for some time he muttered, "I love your hair...it's so smooth and silky...You looks more beautiful in loose hair. Any man will fall for you..."


"Oh please Ishita...just cut off your bloody hair. I hate it. Try some other styles other than loose hair and those plaiting stuffs." Subbu said making a "yuck face".


"I love my hair Subbu. I can't compromise that." She firmly declared.


"To hell with it. At least wear some modern dress if not modern hair styles. I can't believe you're such a boring woman when your entire family has so moved on." He expressed his disbelief.


"I'm different and please don't ever compare me with someone else." She glared at him.


"Why not? You should know what happens around you. Look at Mihika. How glamorous she is! You should learn something from her." He said looking at his mobile.


"Why don't you date her then?" Ishita roared snatching and throwing away his mobile.


"Because we are engaged." He pointed at his engagement ring.


"Wow Subbu...That's...just great ! You're engaged to me and drooling over other woman. You should tell me straightly about your wishes which I'll fulfill in private. I just can't show it off." She threw her hands backwards showing her disbelief.


"I'm sorry sweetheart...but...I do want you to be perfect in everything." He said while making her sit on his lap. She encircled her hands around his neck and kissed his forehead.


"You agitates me."



"You're so dreamy" Raman chuckled looking at her lost expression bringing her back from the past. She pouted her lips which he chewed making her beat his chest playfully.


"May I take you in my arms?" He asked for her permission which he gave in no time. Picking her up in his hands, he ascended the stairs aiming his bedroom.


TO BE CONTINUED...

PS. Tell me if I should continue it or end in the next part because this plot has a lot of possiblities 😳
It's up to you...


DO LIKE AND COMMENT

BUDDY ME FOR PMs


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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATED PART 1
Enjoy reading 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res.s...maine to update mangi hi nhi tune de bhi diii😲
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Chapter 1 To-o-uch

What was that gayu...
I get it Ishu is some innocent girl who was so fed up with Subbu's accusation that she choosed this path...
Okay fine i am ok till now but i really dont like It without love...
Hope this can be stop anyhow...

About subbu ishu doing🤢...I hate even sound of name and here the man is disgusting...🤢🤢...He is cheap...😡

Raman is so desperate😕...Cant he see she is not comfortable as her words sounds to be...

Well written...
Continue soon Baba...

Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do continue!another great one from you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ISHRARULZ

Do continue!another great one from you.


Big huggy for your support 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

Res.s...maine to update mangi hi nhi tune de bhi diii😲


That's me 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyy interesting story .. Loved it .. So very different . loved the prologue and part 1 ... Beautifully written ... They are strangers and flirting with each other .. And the raw passion they share is amazing... Please continue soon.. Take car ... Love aish :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishra1

Do continue..,. looks interesting...


Thanks for the support 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Heyyy interesting story .. Loved it .. So very different . loved the prologue and part 1 ... Beautifully written ... They are strangers and flirting with each other .. And the raw passion they share is amazing... Please continue soon.. Take car ... Love aish :)


Glad you liked it Aisha (I guess 😳)
Thanks for your support 😊

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