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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">Ishiram i love the two....(you is ishiram not u) ...They love each other cant see each other with someone else and cant live without each other...</font>



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">On the other side too fools Ishita and Raman...Ruthless and cruel human being...Committed to somebody else🥱...</font>



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">New character dristi...</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">Subbu is with stranger😲😲🤣are u expecting i am shocked i am not...i new chashni has namak in it......</font>



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">But stranger plan is dangerous...killing raman and ishu memory loss...Raman save ur lady love...Why i feel u will go with ishu memory losss...</font>



<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">Last not much in love coupleare so comfortable with each other...</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">Main to abhi tak Raman ko samajh nhiii payi yar...</font>


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#990000">Chal all the best for exam...</font>



Oh Devil kitty... 😡
I'm gonna kill IshRam forever
I won't bring them from now onwards 😈
Haan...
Raman will die soon and Ishu will lose her memory...
Story will end...Everyone will be happy 🤣
Wow...that's a great plan 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
they love each other
now who is this villan n from past 15 years
that so tough
raman should knw this soon


Villain will enter soon 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awesome update...

There is so much confusion...and I'm enjoying it...
Ishu's behavior is side effects of drugs...and Raman is still confuse whether he loves ishu or not...he still think it's just lust...
But unknowingly he is saving ishu from that creepy subbu... That stranger.. Is he Mani?? Who is hell bent to destroy ishu???
Really want to know ishu's past which is leading her present...


Glad you're enjoying it 😳
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Yeah update ko romantic kahu? yeh suspense badne wala update?

What a evil raman,yaar bath room scenes are damaka dar kanna.he used correct weapon .ishu promised raman,she will not met subbu.

Ishu will do same thing with raman and she will also trap raman but in other sense ?ishu be nahi chodega raman ko itna asanise.

Criminals are planning against ishu.romi got little bit infromation about subbu and raman.

yeh drushti gupta ,kaise deal karega amma uske sath,she will buy her.raman already said ishu about his and drushti relationship,but at that time she drugged,so now ishu not remember it.

Kanna i have a question for u clear it.
Is mr.iyer ishu's real father?

Mihika and ishu are siblings or cousins?

Mrs.iyer and mr.iyer ka beti mihika? not ishu?

One thing is very clear,the culprit is belongs to iyers family or related to them ,very close to them.

Jeldi suspense clear kardho,im waiting for another update.

continue soon.
thanks for pm kanna.


Who's speaking 😳
Okey...coming to your comment
I'm yet to decide on your doubts
As confused as you 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: heemasomani

superb part

someone is drugging ishu


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Drishti???? Raman has a gf... Mujhe Ni bataya :P
Subbu - donkey hehehe ek Dum perfect ;)

And please don't expect me to stay away from my wife" -- you line italics me likh k saabit kya karna chahti ho ???
Drishti ka patta cut karne Ki b tayyari.
Sharvan bhi subbu ka saathi

Mr. Stranger mere iss fic k innocent lust Kumar k peeche b padha hai

bathroom romance <3

I will never come close to you Miss Ishita Iyer. Is it a deal?" Raman forwarded a hand.-- what a plan bravo girl
Aage aage toh yeh dono or vmb blast karenge
Best of luck for your exams
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Kutties...
As my exam postponed today... I thought of updating this part.
Don't mistake it to be a comeback 😉
FLASHBACK IN ITALICS
The update is not proofread so please ignore the funny typos 😛


Chapter-11

PRA-A-ANK



"It's breakfast time..."

Simmi chirped in taking a place across Mr Bhalla. She was the little angel of the house who was allowed to act as she wishes. She didn't forget to call her sisters in law to join the breakfast table. For the entire family's surprise Raman came out wearing his ironed suit for office.


"Yeh kya tareeka hai Raman?" Mr Bhalla shouted when he pulled a chair to join them.

[What's this?]


He looked at the chair and his papa to see whether there is something wrong with the chair or his papa.


"Sab tikh hai nah papa...?" He looked quizzically.

[Everything's alright?]


"Bhallaji...ap shant rahiye. Main baat karti hun." Mrs Bhalla intervened to save Raman from his papa's wrath.

[You calm down Bhallaji. I'll talk to him]


"Dekhona mummiji...yeh Raman kya kar rahe hai...!" Ishita faked a sob and sat next to Mihika.

[See mummiji what's Raman doing!]


Mihika elbowed her asking about her fake tears for which Ishita winked at her and continued with her acting session.


"Yeh toh aajse hi office jaana shuru kiya. Agar shaadi ke baad pehale din hi aise hai toh pata nahin aage jaake kya hoga! Such a workaholic man. Auntiji...uncleji...ask him to stay. It won't look good nah..." Ishita pouted at Mr and Mrs Bhalla.

[He is going office from today. If he is doing this in the first day after marriage what'll happen afterwards!]


"Oh teri...! Yeh madrasan mujhe sachmuch bhasadiya!!!" Raman thought in shock.

[This madrasan really trapped me!]


Ishita came out of the bathroom wrapped in the towel fresh and glowing. Her wet hair made a tiny pool near the wardrobe wherein she was looking for clothes. Raman was dying his hair in front of the mirror. He peeped at her reflection and smiled sheepishly. She was oblivious of his arow sight.


"You know what madrasan...I really hate you. You're not the girl whom I love! You're someone else. I want the one whom I love. I want the one who knows me inside out. That one with whom I fell in love so easily. You're far away from my perceptions. I'm bearing you because you and her are one and the same!" Raman muttered while combing his hair.


"Kuch kaha apne?" Ishita turned and asked him.

[Did you say something?]


"Voh...nothing at all..." He said walking up to the wardrobe to take a shirt.

He was looking at her who was standing there clutching on to a cream colour skirt and black top. His eyes were all over her that he didn't notice the water pool she had made unknowingly, hence making him slip off his balance. The unexpected fall made him shriek out a bit while trying not to fall by griping on to Ishita's shoulder. Ishita who was horrified jumped back a bit making Raman loose his grasp but unknowingly pulled off her towel and clothes along with him.


"Aaahhh..." Both of them screamed looking at each other.


"Sorry...sorry...sorrryyy...!!!" Raman shrieked closing his face with the clothes while Ishita managed to wear Raman's shirt.


"It's...it's ok...ok..." Ishita stuttered to complete.


It was awkward. Even after knowing each other in all sense, they were nothing but strangers. They couldn't get along with the fact that they are the same persons with whom they spend the passionate nights. Raman was pissed of at himself for not being able to accept Ishita as the Ishita with whom he ride some desirable nights. On the other hand Ishita was still confused. She couldn't feel a familiarity in his touch. His touch didn't made her remember something. He and his touches are still alien to her. But she felt comfortable. Though she couldn't open up.


"You're not going to office...?" Ishita asked softly while applying the balm on his back.


"It will be odd. We're newly married.Kuch dikhava toh karna hoga nah. So thought of taking a week leave." He said nuzzling the pillow.

[Should show off]


"Haan...phirphi...You don't need to show off for me. Everyone knows that we cannot get along. The situations and all...So please focus on yourself. I know you don't want to be a family man soon." Ishita convinced him.


"OMG...you're sensible! Thank you so much for understanding me..." He said hugging her.


"Yeah...it's my pleasure..." She patted his back.


He got out of the bed and was about to walk up to the wardrobe but turned to her fyriously.


"Oh hello Dirty Picture...Make sure that you wash that shirt and iron it perfectly." He gritted for which she just smiled cheekily muttering, "I'll wash you also my dear Ravan Kumar."



"Where is your mind you idiot. Main kabse baat kar raha hun tujhse..." Mr Bhalla said angrily and shifted his gaze to his wife, "See Toshiji...he is not listening to me. What kind of a manners you've taught him?" He got agitated while Mihika, Mihir, Ishita and Simmi looked on.

[I'm talking to you]


Ishita felt that the problem is going overboard. So she tried to lighten the moment.


"Leave it uncleji...I don't mind my husband being a hardworking fella." She smiled earning a glare from Mr Bhalla saying, "Don't support his mistakes Ishu puttar. And call me papaji..."


"Ji...papaji..."She said shivering.


"Papa...main...voh...Ish..." Raman tried to say something but cut short by Mr Bhalla.


"Learn something from Mihir. Kitna acha bacha hai. Tum toh bigad gaya. It's your mummiji's fault. I told her..." Mr Bhalla started to say something but Mrs Bhalla's unexpected scream stopped him.

[How good is he. You're ruined]


"BHALLAJI...Ap kya kehnewale the...? Ap...aise kaise...?" She cried gripping on to his collar.

[What's you're about to day? How could you?]


"Let him say mummiji...it's the fact. I'm not like him because I'm not his son. Everyone knows it. Baar baar sunke tired ho chuka hun main." Raman said hiding a lone tear from his eyes.

[I'm tired of hearing it again and again]


Ishita was the only one who wore a shocked expression. Within a blink of second he flew to his bedroom followed by Ishita. Mihika stopped Ishita when she was about to get in.


"Akka...jiju se ab kuch mat poochna...You know nah...] Mihika asked touching Ishita's shoulder.

[Don't ask him anything.]


"Tujhe sab pata tha?" Ishita's eyes rolled in shock.

[You knew it?]


"What a question akka...everyone knows it. Mummiji ke first marriage ek Rajnath Sharma ke saath hue the. He died because of cancer when mummiji was pregnant with jiju. Her parents forced her to marry papaji whose marriage was broken with a woman...uska naam kya tha...haan...Nirupam...Nirupam Om Prekash Bhalla! Papaji wanted mummiji to abort jiju. But she didn't do it. He somewhat doesn't like him. That's why he never scolds jiju thinking that he is no one to him. It is because of you that papaji is scolding him. You know why...papaji loves you and thinks that he has some responsibility over you. It is the reason why papaji is behaving weirdly. Pavam jiju..." Mihika said in one go.

[Mummiji was first married to one Mr Rajnath Dharma.]


"Ayyo...yeh maine kya kiya?" Ishita closed her mouth with her hand and ran inside the room closing the door behind her leaving an astounded Mihika.

[What have I done?]


"Yeh akka ko kya hua? Ise toh yeh sab pata tha nah...? I told her one night. Ayyo...is she really amnesiac?

[What happened to akka? I told her everything one night.]


"I'm sorry...meri vajhase hua nah yeh sab..." Ishita said knelting in front of Raman who was sitting numply on the bed hugging a pillow.

[It's all because of me]


He didn't utter a word but ignored her completely by laying down on the bed.


"Raman...suno nah..." She pulled him but he was like an unmoveable stone.

[Listen]


"Leave me alone." He said on top of his voice making Ishita retreat her hands from him all scared. She walked out silently crying while he drift into a sleepless slumber slowly.

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"Hello...Romi Verma here. Ma'am...there is a news."Romi said with a tint of tension.


"Haan...bolo...kya hua?" Mrs Iyer asked curiously.


"Ma'am...It's about him...He is planning to kill Raman Kumar Bhalla. And I got to know that Dr Steve Raynold is working for him." Romi informed.


"Dr Steve Raynold...!!! Matlab Ishu...ko...kuch..." Mrs Iyer dropped herself on the sofa.


"You're right ma'am. He is drugging Ishita which is the reason why she is not remembering her past. Someone is helping him who is close to you." Romi said suspiciously.


"OK. I'll deal with it. You let me know if you come to know more." Mrs Iyer said nervously and disconnected the call.


"Viswa...where is Neelu?" Mrs Iyer roared at her husband.


"You know Ishu is addicted to her tasty foods. So I asked her to work in Bhalla's. She left this morning. Maybe aaj Bhalla's dinner will be delicacies of Neelambari Devi." Mr Iyer said happily while Mrs Iyer looked on thinking something.

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Raman woke up irrirated by the constant ringing of his mobile. He sat up straight and cleared his throat like a disciplined student seeing Mrs Iyer's name flashing. [I do the same when my teachers call me when I will be asleep in forenoon 😆]


"Hello amma..." He asked softly.


Mrs Iyer: "Hello...Neelu agayi kya?"

[Neelu came?]


Raman: "I don't know...voh...I was sleeping all day."


Mrs Iyer: "Oh...well...call me if you want anything. Don't...don't be so shy to share anything with me Raman. I'm your amma. And don't try to hide anything if...it is about Ishu."


Raman: "Why are you talking like this? Anything wrong?"


Mrs Iyer stuttered, "Just like that. Do call me when...Ishu...or...I mean..."


"You're hiding something." Raman furrowed his eyebrows.


"No...I'm trying to say. Call me if Ishu acts weird tonight." Mrs Iyer said in one go and hung up.


"That means...She knows it. She knows that Ishita is being drugged. There is more in it. Kya hoga?" Raman asked himself and walked out to check on Ishita.

[What'll be that?]


She was happily and animatedly talking to everyone while her favourite maiden was cooking. He decided to work staying inside the room and not to meet his mummiji or papaj. Simmi came time and again to call him for dinner but he acted having head ache and laid down to sleep. Ishita came to him after having dinner and said dramatically, "I'm not a typical wife Mr Ravan Kumar. Don't expect me to stay hungry for you. I had had my food...that too...wow...yummy."


"Stop your blah-blah...I'm having head ache." He made a face while his stomach groaned hearing which Ishita laughed.


"Main omelet banake laun?" She asked sincerely.

[May I make omelet for you?]


"No thank you." He showed attittude.


"Tikhe...at least have medicine." She forwarded a painkiller.


"If I won't eat it she will catch my lie" He thought."Yep. Thanks." He accepted it smiling cheekily.

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It was past midnight that Raman tossed and turned in the bed making Ishita get angry. She asked him to sleep silently for which he just made some hoarse noise. She thought he is having so much pain. Thus, she decided to nurse him to sleep.


Turning on the bedlamb she looked at his side. He was laying covering his head to toe in a duvet like a dead body. She laughed silently closing her mouth and pulled it off to see his face. His face was unusually reddened. Checking whether he is having a fever she tried to wake him up. But he was in a half conscious state muttering her name faintly.


"Raman...are you alright? Open your eyes. Raman...what happened to you?" She got panicked.


"Ish...Ish...I love you..." He whisperd looking at her enticing face in the dim light.


"Raman...are you out of your mind? You hate me no...?" Ishita asked confused.


He raised a bit from the bed and pulled her to him. She couldn't collect herself to react when he took her lips in a fiercing kiss.

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Ishita was sitting on the bed clad in a duvet hugging her legs and burying her head in it. Not to mention that she is crying. Raman woke up to see himself covered only in the duvet and Ishita crying nonstop. He comprehended the events and tried to clear out the problems.


"Well...I can understand what had happened. But why are you crying? It was not a first time!" He exclaimed.


"You raped me...you rude!" She poked a finger at his chest and started crying again. He was playful at first but when her tear striken face and hiccups continued out of control he understood that she really mean it.


"What have I done last night?" He asked helpessly being unable to remember anything.


"I can't repeat that Raman. I'm ashamed of having a husband like you. You're so brute." She started again.


"I'm sorry...but...I wouldn't have done anything wrong...or..." He was out of words while Ishita looked at him in surprise. Her expressions chainged to naughtiness and a smirk adorned her lips when she threw away the duvet. His jaw licked the floor watching her in a skirt and top.


"You were playing with me?" His face reddedned in fury.


He raised a bit from the bed and pulled her to him. She couldn't collect herself to react when he took her lips in a fiercing kiss.


"Raman...mm...stop it..." Ishita pushed him off.


"Don't stop me from loving you Ish..." He said pulling her closer by her waist.


He came over her and started kissing her again making her breathless. That was when she remembered one thing. The only one who could tame Raman Kumar Bhalla was his Ish...that she herself. Though that girl whom he knows is a total stranger for Ishita. She tried to act in front of him. She just wanted him to stop touching her. But ended up bed with him again in all her sense.


She wanted him to stop himself. She forgot herself when she felt the unfathomable love he was showering on her. She was literally stealing the moments from him. She was using his state. But, she couldn't let him stop from making love to her all night. She didn't mind the soreness nor does she cared for his reactions when she time and again let him enter her to reach the pleasure.


If she asked once to stop, he would have controlled his urges. That he is! But she was in his spell. She couldn't let him go away from her. That was the moment when she came to know how much she is jealous of the Ishita about whom Raman always chants!


She wanted him for herself. She couldn't take in the fact that he is in love with her but that was not her in real. She wanted him to shower his love only for her. But that was more than impossible. She need to change to gain him. She need to wash off all the memories of that Ishita from his mind to make him only hers.



He angrily clutched her arms and pushed her down on the bed. She drunk in a lump of fear when his face came so close to hers. His nose was red like a strawberry because of his anger. She deserve it. Nowadays her pranks are going overboard. However, his expression instantly changed to confusion. He checked himself out. He was wearing the duvet like a veshti which means he is naked. What that means?


"Did I do anything to you last night?" He asked in a low tone.


Ishita wanted to say it all. But something pulled her back. Her instincts told her that he will regret his deed. Raman Kumar Bhalla never lets go of a chance to bed a woman. On that note, if he is not making love to his wife only means that she is in the rejected list. That made her stop herself from disclosing her heart.


She just hugged him tight for his surprise and mumbled near his earlobe, "No...you didn't. You didn't do anything wrong. It was...just...a prank." Her eyes welled up.


"Don't play such pranks man..." He said in a bored tone and rolled down whilst she looked on at him with her welled up eyes which he didn't see.

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"I'm confused Miku...What's happening to me?" Ishita said feeling worried over the recent incidents when she was having coffee with her sister sitting in the garden.


"Hmmm...love...it's love akka...! I'm not asking you to compare jiju and Subbu. But just compare the feelings which you had had on Subbu and you're having on jiju." Mihika tried to knock some sense in her.


"Let...me...think..." Ishita sighed and sipped the coffee.


"Honeymoon ka plan karna hai nah...? I'm so excited!" Simmi exclaimed from behind making the sisters turn to her.


"What honeymoon...?" Ishita feigned indifference.


"Oh common bhabhi...don't say that you don't want to go." Simmi pulled Ishita's already blushed cheeks while Mihika did a facepalm.


"Acha Raman bhai kahan hai?" Simmi asked taking a seat beside Mihika.

[Where's Raman?]


"Some urgent meeting. He'll be back soon." Ishita said blushing harder ensuing to the teasing looks of her company.

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Raman waited in the living room of Iyer mansion impatiently to meet Mrs Iyer. She came downstair after a good ten minutes which he felt like forever.


"Amma...tell me. What's going on? I know one thing that someone is drugging Ishita which you also know. You suspected Neelu so I didn't had dinner last night.But you know what happened...It was in her medicine. She gave me last night which made me act under drugs. I threw away all that I suspect but still I couldn't do anything...I'm feeling helpless. She won't believe me...at least you tell her what is happening to her. Amma...are you listening to me?" He asked to a dumbfounded amma.


TO BE CONTINUED...


PS. It's only one exam that's postponed 😉
So one update
And yeah... I want to send IshRa for honeymoon in this story. [Popular demand]
Suggest some nice romantic honeymoon spots 😳
Do you want me to kill Raman before honeymoon or after honeymoon 😈



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UPDATED PART 11 😊
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Originally posted by: sukanksha

Drishti???? Raman has a gf... Mujhe Ni bataya :P
Subbu - donkey hehehe ek Dum perfect ;)

And please don't expect me to stay away from my wife" -- you line italics me likh k saabit kya karna chahti ho ???
Drishti ka patta cut karne Ki b tayyari.
Sharvan bhi subbu ka saathi

Mr. Stranger mere iss fic k innocent lust Kumar k peeche b padha hai

bathroom romance <3

I will never come close to you Miss Ishita Iyer. Is it a deal?" Raman forwarded a hand.-- what a plan bravo girl
Aage aage toh yeh dono or vmb blast karenge
Best of luck for your exams


Heee...
So you're asking about those pavam italics...rehne dona... 😛
Hihihi...
Bomb blast hoga hi lol
Wait and read further...
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