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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
amazing update 👏 👏 👏

i luv the r brothers and their wicked talks 😎
buck up! i think i'm liking rudra more 😉
so anna's bf is jon! who is this now? any connection? he aint meera's bro naa?
rudra and rishaan arent twins right? 🤓 (i dont mind 😉)
so maya and the bookstore! aah i c coffee brewing at the bookstore soon 😆 😉 😛
baahon ke darmiyan was nice...as i commented earlier i was hoping for such scenes 😳
i'm dying to know about maya n rk's past...i mean parents n stuff...

update soon 😳 🤗
i have a request...pls let maya/madhu get dreams of Rk and his mesmerizing stare at her ...i mean maya getting a dream of only rishabh kundra's stare...and the song playing..baahon ke darmiyaan...n then alarm 😆

Hiyu!! 🤗

I will fulfill your request even if you come back! I don't know if you will read this message or not... but phir bhi writing... 🤔

Originally posted by: luv_rk
Awesome update
very well written
loved it

Thank you so much!!

Originally posted by: maria090
Awesome update😳 i loved it ❤️

Thank you so much, Maria.

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916243

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: amrithas
Full marks again Maria! Keep updating them fast. I'll be waiting!

Thank you so much, Amy! 😳

Originally posted by: RisingasPhoenix
wonderful updates loving it ❤️

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: mimibm
Know what...I m loving both these brothers equally...it doesn't matter to me which one of them is RK look alike cause they bothhave the sexy traits of RK, customised in their own way...you are taking this story to a level never reached in this forum I suppose...keep it up buddy 👏

Thank you so much! I am so happy that you're liking both Kapoor Brothers! 😳

@Bold- Thank you so much! That's a huge compliment! 😳

Originally posted by: VildanaROSID
Congrats, this is really great 👏

Thank you so much! 😳

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916243

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Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: river123
Whoa! This is getting more and more intriguing and exciting. Can't wait for the next update.
Fabulous job Maria!

Thank you so much, Meenu!

So happy that you're liking it this much! 😳

Updating in 2 minutes! 😳

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala
i just finished reading chapters 2-4😊...oh god what a wonderful story.👏...
.so many emotions😊
i like maya-anna frndship.😊...i like rudra-rishan bonding.😊...i think meera likes rishan,but she may be the soulmate of rudra
.meera is bittuji's daughter😲,helping rk...rishan is interested in maya😊...
but hw maya is like madhubala and rishan is like rk???😕😕...even this confusion exits i luv this story😊 its wonderful😊...waiting 4 next update

Thank you so much!!!

I am glad you're liking all the characters. Just keep reading, all your queries will be answered one by one... 😳

Originally posted by: Chitrarocking
Fabulous update Maria 👏⭐️
Can't wait for the next more exciting updates😉
tfs for pm dearee🤗 !!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much, Chitra!

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Neela

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Posted: 10 years ago

#254

I was eagerly waiting to start reading the RishBala FF: Entwined.

Finally I managed some time and I read the whole thing, it was a superb start!

Loved the two twisted brother convo, loved that Meera is Bittuji's daughter :)

I felt some of Maya's characteristics resemblance to you Maria, I might be wrong so don't get me wrong.

However, it is going to be a lovely piece, Thanks Maria and Anki for starting it.

Please do continue!!

More analysis will be coming later 😃

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916243

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Posted: 10 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: ennishet
Am not much active at IF, but was in the mood to check some of the PMs and found quite a few from you, Maria! I must say, was surprised to see you writing fan fic. Anyhow, great job!!! Your prologue got me interested enough to read it all ... I have been thru the intro and all the four chapters.

I must say you are smarter than the CVs to kill off RM and start afresh with the story 😆 So another birth and another life and a story begins again between RK and Maya Aka Madhu. Do you know, the name Maya reminds me or SRK and his Maya in DTPH!

And wonder of wonders, Meera is Bittuji's daughter 😆 and he is really mad at this impostor, RK aka Rishaan! Nice to see Maya getting friendly with Anna coz I know trouble is sure to come knocking at her door anytime now.

A wonderful start, Maria and Ankita! Keep it up!!!!
Looking forward to your next update.

Thank you so much, Nupur!!

I know right! I surprised even myself by coming up with this FF!

All credit goes to Anki who nudged me to sit down and write it all down! 😳

I so wanted them to die in that fire that day! 😆 Wish CVs have gone down that route! But oh well!

I just had to put Bittuji there. He is the only likable supporting character in the show.

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv
i just caught up with chapter three and four back to back...and they were a sheer piece of brilliance😃 the story is gaining strength in a lightning speed...wondering whar rk's plan for maya is...and the relationship between rishaan and rudra somehow reminds me of dean and sam from supernatural😃great going...update soon...

Thank you so much!!!

I never watched Supernatural... don't know about that... but I see you're quite a fan,.. I am happy you're ale to relate it with something you already like.. 😳

Originally posted by: BlooDY_hELL
i like ur ff
wating to know maya and rishaan's past
pls PM me when u update(have sent u a buddy request)

-luv shikha

Thank you so much! 😳

Will definitely PM you!

Originally posted by: mydrashti
feeelinggg realyyy greatt to read such an ff which prologue itself is giving me goosebumps absolutely minndblowinggg👍🏼 while reading this i was so engrossed as i am visualizing them n deffineately cried when they welcomed death hand in had n u were so right rishbala is couple who can inspire n had n effect on stone so we r humans no doubt n loveee this pairrr to our hearttt ... n i also want madhubala season 2 bt dnt knw why they bring such nonsense track to such a good story n if they r ruining season 1 like this than season 2 mein to pata nahin kya karenge😆 besttt of luckk fr all ur updates as i m going to read the first chapter... n plzzz do pm me waitinggg...

Thank you so much!

Will PM you from now on...

Do tell me how you like all the updates when you finish reading them... 😳

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

thanks for having the patience to answer all my queries

i mean i know i can really may be write very long replies 😳

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916243

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

It was all my fault...damn stupid traffic 😡 made me late

Anyways...Congrats to us for the 5th chapter 🥳

It was awesome Alpha 👏

So the most ordinary character in the entire story has finally decided to take a stand...the underdog might just end up surprising us one day ! I am rooting for her 😃

Rishaan comes across as a highly self-serving and inconsiderate jerk ...so he is not the shareef RK of old but quite the Casanova...😔
He gets his just rewards from Maya...who practically ditches him and has no compunction in sugarcoating her rejection.😆

Both seem somewhat affected...Rishaan is surprisingly and paradoxically "starstruck"...something that is not the forte of a Superstar himself...something that is not the forte of a egotistical actor but...rather a self-convinced egotistical actor.😉
...while Maya is drawn to yet repelled by him...

Something is just not right in this equation!
I wonder what 🤔...or not 😛.

So what exactly has a devious Rishaan in store for his Madhubala...what is Rudra up to?...Will Meera be able to regain her lost dignity...and will Maya fall into Rishaan's trap?

Stay tuned for the next chapter 😎

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#259

wow again after ankita its me

i was about to go to sleep last night when the pm came

i could not loose the chance to be 1st again

so i reserved my place

its an awesome superb wonderful update

it gives us an insight into meeras character

also i understand mayas refusal to go out with a stranger

and i felt bad for meera as rk was sending her off

so rk is planning to do something naughty

i am just thinking of rks reaction now

it must have been a first for him

i mean never ever has a girl told no on his face

so he will pursue maya more consistently now

and well maya also cannot forget rk now
i believe both of them felt something when they met

though it was may be for only a few seconds

i hope that feeling gets stronger whenever they meet now

and i am sure they have a long way to go

b4 they realise that they are falling in love

and i loved it when he called her madhubala

Edited by rima4ever - 10 years ago

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916243

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Posted: 10 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: NeelM
I was eagerly waiting to start reading the RishBala FF: Entwined.

Finally I managed some time and I read the whole thing, it was a superb start!

Loved the two twisted brother convo, loved that Meera is Bittuji's daughter :)

I felt some of Maya's characteristics resemblance to you Maria, I might be wrong so don't get me wrong.

However, it is going to be a lovely piece, Thanks Maria and Anki for starting it.

Please do continue!!

More analysis will be coming later 😃

Thank you so much, Neel for liking it!! 😳

I just had to put Bittuji in the FF.

Maya is like me? You know what... all the characters that I have written might have a little bit of me... because well, I am quite twisted and they are figments of my imagination.. so yeah! 😆

Will be waiting for your analysis. 😳

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