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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

thanks for having the patience to answer all my queries

i mean i know i can really may be write very long replies 😳

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#252

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

It was all my fault...damn stupid traffic 😡 made me late

Anyways...Congrats to us for the 5th chapter 🥳

It was awesome Alpha 👏

So the most ordinary character in the entire story has finally decided to take a stand...the underdog might just end up surprising us one day ! I am rooting for her 😃

Rishaan comes across as a highly self-serving and inconsiderate jerk ...so he is not the shareef RK of old but quite the Casanova...😔
He gets his just rewards from Maya...who practically ditches him and has no compunction in sugarcoating her rejection.😆

Both seem somewhat affected...Rishaan is surprisingly and paradoxically "starstruck"...something that is not the forte of a Superstar himself...something that is not the forte of a egotistical actor but...rather a self-convinced egotistical actor.😉
...while Maya is drawn to yet repelled by him...

Something is just not right in this equation!
I wonder what 🤔...or not 😛.

So what exactly has a devious Rishaan in store for his Madhubala...what is Rudra up to?...Will Meera be able to regain her lost dignity...and will Maya fall into Rishaan's trap?

Stay tuned for the next chapter 😎

Edited by -Evil-Defiance- - 11 years ago

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

wow again after ankita its me

i was about to go to sleep last night when the pm came

i could not loose the chance to be 1st again

so i reserved my place

its an awesome superb wonderful update

it gives us an insight into meeras character

also i understand mayas refusal to go out with a stranger

and i felt bad for meera as rk was sending her off

so rk is planning to do something naughty

i am just thinking of rks reaction now

it must have been a first for him

i mean never ever has a girl told no on his face

so he will pursue maya more consistently now

and well maya also cannot forget rk now
i believe both of them felt something when they met

though it was may be for only a few seconds

i hope that feeling gets stronger whenever they meet now

and i am sure they have a long way to go

b4 they realise that they are falling in love

and i loved it when he called her madhubala

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: NeelM
I was eagerly waiting to start reading the RishBala FF: Entwined.

Finally I managed some time and I read the whole thing, it was a superb start!

Loved the two twisted brother convo, loved that Meera is Bittuji's daughter :)

I felt some of Maya's characteristics resemblance to you Maria, I might be wrong so don't get me wrong.

However, it is going to be a lovely piece, Thanks Maria and Anki for starting it.

Please do continue!!

More analysis will be coming later 😃

Thank you so much, Neel for liking it!! 😳

I just had to put Bittuji in the FF.

Maya is like me? You know what... all the characters that I have written might have a little bit of me... because well, I am quite twisted and they are figments of my imagination.. so yeah! 😆

Will be waiting for your analysis. 😳

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Neela

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Maya seems has a very sad past from which she is trying to move on with her life, so, she is lonely without any friend prior to meet Anna.

Eagerly waiting to see Maya's sad past.

Nice to see Maya love reading and dancing!!

Meera is in love with her Greek Jerk God (GJG), and the same old Kameena still the Kameena even after reincarnation.

I hope she regain her dignity. I start loving her character already.She might be the daughter of Bittuji and Roma 😉.

Elder Kappor is another jerk I guess who will make Meera's life to living hell and it will be nice to see that Kapoor jerk Sr. fell in love with Meera.

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Survival

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Wonderful chapter dear I love it, arrogant Rishaan😡😆 Poor Meera, I really feel for her, I hope she stands for herself but she is traped by brothers kapoor and their ironclad contract

What I liked is Maya sixth sense, she felt something wrong about him through his eyes, love that, so her cold behaviour with him was good and she kind of avenged Meera's humiliation😆

This part cracked me up🤣

'Sexy and charming as ever!' he thought as he smirked. 'Maybe, she is not normal,' he pondered with all seriousness and left the store for his apartment while making a mental note to ask the detective to have a background check regarding Maya's mental health.

Now he is prepared to save her, maybe he plans to hire someone to play a goon and he will come to her rescue, maybe..., I'll be waiting for the rest of the updates😊

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#258

MEERA HAS DECIDED TO STOP THINKING ABOUT HER GREEK GOD - AND WITH RUDRA AROUND THAT WILL NOT BE A HARDSHIP

MAYA GAE HIM THE BRUSH OFF - UNBELIEVABLE FOR HIM

WHAT IS HE PLANNING TO DO

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BlooDY_hELL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

nice update!

the kind of RKs i know, they would play tricks such that maya loses her job so that they can help and spend time together 😆 (i mean force her on doing a film 😉)

i'm loving the R bro's

oo the other is a lawyer! i like!

i cant seem to stop thinking about what the hell is maya doing in canada without a family? 😲

update soon

thanks for the PM😊

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NadiaZ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#260

yay finally they met

i liked RK's characterisation and Maya's also she is so mysterious and RK is arrogant and self centred just like OUR REAL RK😆

Meera's char is quite interesting i wonder what will she do when she will know RK is attrackted to Maya...she is initially a nice person but i hope to see some change in her char after that.

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