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rekha.366 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update ,omg iam loving rishaan ,so much ,poor meera ,waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update as usual!u know i'm loving this!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
super update😊 feel bad 4 meera😒but i can't support her as rk is only madhu's😉
rudra is lawyer😲 oh god😲
maya is avoiding rishan i liked it bcoz then only we wil get an oppurtunity to see hw rk gonna woo her.😉...
but i want to call maya as madhubala by all😊
y rishan introduced himself as aditya?😕
i liked it when rk said,"I was waiting for you since you said you don't want to be hit on inside the store"😆😆😆
😆😆he is soo funny😆 and he checked himself in mirror after madhu rejected him🤣
nice update dear waiting for next part


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Posted: 11 years ago
love ur update, eagerly waiting for ur next update, just one question when they will remember their past completely, Maya seems to feel something by looking at his eyes,listening the song but rishaan he don't remember anything or feel nothing by seeing her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update, Maria!

I feel a bit bad for Meera, the way RK uses and sends her packing back to India. But, didn't she know RK was a self-centered brute right from the start? If she did, then she is to blame for her disappointment now. She is an idiot if she had any hopes of a future with RK!

As to RK, your RK reminds me of the RK in the show last year 😆 He comes across as scary from Maya's POV knowing something bad is in store for her. But, I guess that's his character and you have promised a dark story, so am all ready for the badass RK! 😆 I liked it how Maya brushed off RK's attempts at taking her out on their first meeting. Good girl, way to go!!! I hope you don't show us a weak Maya 😛 ... would like it better if they both are on an equal footing and fight it tooth and nail.

Thanks for the PM and looking forward to your next update.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

It was all my fault...damn stupid traffic 😡 made me late

Anyways...Congrats to us for the 5th chapter 🥳

It was awesome Alpha 👏

So the most ordinary character in the entire story has finally decided to take a stand...the underdog might just end up surprising us one day ! I am rooting for her 😃

Rishaan comes across as a highly self-serving and inconsiderate jerk ...so he is not the shareef RK of old but quite the Casanova...😔
He gets his just rewards from Maya...who practically ditches him and has no compunction in sugarcoating her rejection.😆

Both seem somewhat affected...Rishaan is surprisingly and paradoxically "starstruck"...something that is not the forte of a Superstar himself...something that is not the forte of a egotistical actor but...rather a self-convinced egotistical actor.😉
...while Maya is drawn to yet repelled by him...

Something is just not right in this equation!
I wonder what 🤔...or not 😛.

So what exactly has a devious Rishaan in store for his Madhubala...what is Rudra up to?...Will Meera be able to regain her lost dignity...and will Maya fall into Rishaan's trap?

Stay tuned for the next chapter 😎


And you're not here again! 😡

Anyways... Thank you so much Anki!!!😳

Rishaan is a prick... just like Rudra said in the last update.. 😆

You and your eternal love for Meera. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow again after ankita its me

Congrats again! 😆

i was about to go to sleep last night when the pm came

Sorry for the delay.

i could not loose the chance to be 1st again
so i reserved my place

I understand. 😆

its an awesome superb wonderful update

Thank you so much Dia.😳

it gives us an insight into meeras character

This was the lightest update I wrote in terms of drama factor. Meera is the simplest of the four major characters of the FF.

also i understand mayas refusal to go out with a stranger

There is more to it. 😳

and i felt bad for meera as rk was sending her off

😆

so rk is planning to do something naughty

Naughty would be an understatement. 😆

i am just thinking of rks reaction now
it must have been a first for him
i mean never ever has a girl told no on his face

Lol. Yeah. 😆

so he will pursue maya more consistently now
and well maya also cannot forget rk now
i believe both of them felt something when they met
though it was may be for only a few seconds
i hope that feeling gets stronger whenever they meet now
and i am sure they have a long way to go
b4 they realise that they are falling in love
and i loved it when he called her madhubala

We will see about that. They are nowhere close to falling in love at this moment. 😆



Thank you Dia for your comment. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NeelM

Maya seems has a very sad past from which she is trying to move on with her life, so, she is lonely without any friend prior to meet Anna.

Eagerly waiting to see Maya's sad past.

Nice to see Maya love reading and dancing!!

Meera is in love with her Greek Jerk God (GJG), and the same old Kameena still the Kameena even after reincarnation.
I hope she regain her dignity. I start loving her character already.She might be the daughter of Bittuji and Roma 😉.

Elder Kappor is another jerk I guess who will make Meera's life to living hell and it will be nice to see that Kapoor jerk Sr. fell in love with Meera.





You are right about Maya. 😳

GJG?! 😲😆

Let's see what happens... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update maria dear !👏
loved it dearee !
😃
waiting for next part ! 😉

tfs buddy !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Wonderful chapter dear I love it, arrogant Rishaan😡😆 Poor Meera, I really feel for her, I hope she stands for herself but she is traped by brothers kapoor and their ironclad contract
What I liked is Maya sixth sense, she felt something wrong about him through his eyes, love that, so her cold behaviour with him was good and she kind of avenged Meera's humiliation😆

This part cracked me up🤣

'Sexy and charming as ever!' he thought as he smirked. 'Maybe, she is not normal,' he pondered with all seriousness and left the store for his apartment while making a mental note to ask the detective to have a background check regarding Maya's mental health.

Now he is prepared to save her, maybe he plans to hire someone to play a goon and he will come to her rescue, maybe..., I'll be waiting for the rest of the updates😊




Thanks for RK's picture. ☺️


Thank you so much, Najat. 😳

I feel bad for Meera as well. 😆

I am glad you liked that part. 😆

Rishaan is a jerk. I agree. 😆

Yeah, what goes around, comes back around na? 😉
Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago

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