RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 105

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Maria thanks for the PM, wishing you and everyone a very very happy new year.

Originally posted by: Anny90

Wow! Once again you rocked it.

Thank you so much!
BTW Happy New Year..

Happy New Year to you too.
Maya is so confused about her feelings and life. Rudra is being his guide. though he has recognized his love he is waiting for Maya to realize it. Yes, let's see how long that takes. Maya's thoughts are moving from negative to positive.she is ready to take chances. For making new friends, for living her life, fulfilling dreams and fighting her fear. She has realized that survival may not be enough. She needs to live her life and let go of her demons.
I just hope what ever rudra has planned, aisa hi ho. But now that accident will turn everything upside down. Yeah... it will definitely change things...
This is one of my favorite stories and I am looking forward to read more of it.

Aww.. thank you so much! that means a lot to me!
Anny

Originally posted by: RAONE8

Happy New Year

Awesome update as always!!!!!!!

Thank you so much!!

liked Viraj's character...really a breath of fresh air

I am so happy to know that.

loved that Maya is slowly deciding to open up n live life...even remmbrng Rudras words😳

Yeah... that's progress isn't it? For Maya and their relationship...

liked both brothers chats

I am glad you liked the chats.

ending is really interesting

Thanks!! 😳

really eager to read more...n thanks for d pm

cont sooon

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

Fantastic superb dear
happy new year u too maria

Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

Originally posted by: silverfire

Oh my goodness! How did I miss this story for so long????

This is one of the finest ff I've read in this forum. An amazing story n very beautifully written.😛

Well, better late than never I guess.. Thank you so much! 😆

Read all the 23 chapters in one go. It took me about 3 hrs but I couldn't stop myself once I started reading this ff.

Really happy to know that.

What a twist in the 8 th chapter 😛 never expected that. Most of the readers didn't. 😆 Both the brothers r twisted n sunky.😛 I agree! 😆 Even though Rudra has identified his soulmate, Maya is nowhere near it except for restless or should I say wired feelings whenever she is near Rudra. That seems to be the only problem at the surface.. 😉

I'm still not able to zero in on Rishaan's feelings for Maya. Let's see what u have planned.

Yeah, let's see..

I cried with Maya when she narrated her past. I cried with Rudra too when he broke down near the lake. Oh God! It was too painful😭

I am sorry I made you cry... but actually I am a little happy to know that since it means you felt the connect with the characters. Hehe.

The good thing is the Kapoor bros r together in it to nail that Shaurya.😡 Maya was right . RK will bring an end to him. Madhu belongs only to RK.

Yeah! True.

Glad Maya Is ready to accept that there r ppl around her who cares for her n want her to be safe. She is willing to live her dream. This girl deserves it.

That is true. She has earned this much.

The mystery behind Kapoor bros is yet to be revealed. Maybe the latest accident will bring them closer. Ummm... Let's see...

But they had this accident just outside Shaurya's house n without knowing the clue Harish has found. Hope they don't get into any more trouble. I know I am being cryptic... but let's see... 😆

Love to write lots more about this story but then my comment will be longer than ur update. So I'll stop with this.

@Bold: I highly doubt that! 😆 I love long comments... but that shouldn't be a surprise given the length of my updates... 😆 .. so next time ... knock yourself out! 😆

Thoroughly enjoyed the updatesn also ur comments below it.

You made me happy!

Thanks!

Plz add me to ur PM list.

Done!

Originally posted by: mydrashti

Oh wowww maria is back 😃I'm so happy welcome back mariaaa thanks for continuing the story 🤗 love the update Rudr know his connection with maya but many things in between rishan n maya 😳 nooo like him I too can't imagine 😆 internal battle is on for all of them waiting for it how Maya accept the truth of her and rudr being together the way u put bittuji to convince rudr no matter what they are meant to together is very touching I really got so emotional 😭 thanks for pm hun 😃

Originally posted by: mimibm

RES

(OMG! These two updates need some serious analysis...will get back with mine shortly)

UNRES

First of all I will apologise to you Maria that I did not comment on the previous two updates. I have been away from the forum for over a year and half so at first I was trying to catch up with the progress in the story. Entwined has always been one of my most favourite series in this forum, but I suppose I had forgotten the relevance of Shaurya, or the character itself. But with the current one it became crystal clear again...

It's alright. I understand. I am just glad you are back. I lost many of my readers .. well.. because of my own fault. So, I cannot really blame anyone. Anyway, I am glad you are reading the story again and caught up with it as well! You have always been one of my favorite readers and I value your feedback.

Now for the characters and how they are evolving in my mind...

Rudra and Rishaan: To be frank, I always kind of feel some vacuum in between Rudra and Rishaan in all their conversations. It feels it is this vacuum which kind of creates a barrier between them and never lets the easy flow of their real feelings to each other. It is kind of disturbing at times, but that is the power of you as an author to make the reader perceive the palpable tension between these two brothers. In the beginning of the story I remember Rudra was kind of an enigma and somehow it was easier to comprehend Rishaan's motives. But now the plot has changed dramatically and it is Rudra, who is our RK reincarnated manages to be the easier nut to crack 😆. Rishaan is becoming more and more difficult every day. What is going on in his mind and how will he fit into the puzzle of RK-Madhu re-incarnation? I am figuratively biting my nails (cause I hate biting nails 😉) to get my answer. But don't rush, I do not want this story to be over anytime soon.

Well, you are right. There is always a barrier between the two brothers that doesn't allow them to have a normal conversation properly. Even if a conversation starts alright, it just goes somewhere that makes them both uncomfortable. And yeah, I remember at first everyone was very intrigued by Rudra and they thought Rishaan is just a simple person with shallow ambitions. I always knew that will change. But yeah, I will just say, Rudra is not that simple to read either. Despite all his monologues and understanding of his past life, there is still a lot about him that one needs to learn.

Let's see when the story ends. I want to end it, ideally, by the end of this month... or at least the next.

Maya and Meera: Now that is a very interesting dynamic to look for. Being a woman myself I can fathom what is going in their mind when their lives are being continuously controlled by the Kapoor brothers. I may be over-thinking, but would Meera be feeling possessive about her friend Viraj, when he is being friendly with Maya? Somehow any girl in her shoe would not be very comfortable to trust Maya's intended/unintended proximity with her close ones.

Honestly, when I first wrote Meera, I did not think that Maya and Meera will have dynamics like these, They have very contrasting personalities.

Regarding Meera being possessive of Viraj, she knows him. And she knows how he feels.

And one doubt. May be I am stupid to forget and definitely lazy to go back to the previous chapters, did Maya ever realise herself as Madhu's reincarnated self? When she tells Saurya that Madhubala belongs only to RK, was that her subconscious mind speaking?

Maya never realized it. Yes, she was in a trance like state, like she been in sometimes in the past few chapters.

Now enough of blabbers...will wait for the next updates eagerly..

Originally posted by: zelja89

Awesome updates, hope the brothers are ok. Please continue soon 😊