RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 25

Originally posted by: rekha.366

wonderful update dear ,maya loves books and me too😳😳 ,she find her suitable job , liked maya ,and ana bonding , loved the convo ,of the sexy RR BROTHERS , liked the line use her ,poor meera kaha phas gayi dhono bhai ko beech ,waiting for next update yaar mujse intezzar nahi hoth ,waiting for maya and rishaan meeting ,and another nasty encounter of meera and rudra ,yaar i love this RR brothers

Originally posted by: BeautyForAshes

---i wud love to see her take care of the book store ..u know why ?😉 rishaan kapoor can come in anytime !!!!😆☺️ am Rishaanified ☺️

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--now am rally waiting for it !!! ☺️

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----aaawww

--accident ???

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Montreal, Canada.

--just like me !!! 😳😆

--i loved it !!!!😳

---loved the way u have connected the lyrics to each of the lines she felt n they spoke 😳

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--hahha am loving the brothers conversation !!!😆

----hahahah LOL this is hilarious😆

--she has got this from bittuji 😳

now i need the next !!!! 😆Impatient soul😳 😆 !!!

Another Awesome update maria !👏

Originally posted by: punam2712

YOU ARE DAMN GOOD AT WRITING

I AM COMPLETELY RIVETED WITH THIS STORY

LOVE THE COMPLICATED BROTHERLY BOND BETWEEN RUDRA AND RISHAAN

THOUGH THEY DONT INTERFERE IN EACH OTHER'S LIFE,ONE CAN DEPEND ON THE OTHER AND THEY UNDERSTAND EACH OTHER

RUDRA WAS RIGHT - HE IS THE ONE WITH SUICIDAL TENDENCY - SOMETHING TO DO WITH PAST

MEERA IS A TRUE COPY OF BITTUJI - THEY DONT KNOW THE CONNECTION YET

AND RUDRA - ONE OF THESE DAYS MEERA IS GOING TO SURPRISE YOU

MAYA'S LIFE IS GOING TO CHANGE WITH A VENGEANCE - SHE IS NOW RISHAAN'S OBSESSION AND HE IS NOT GOING TO LEAVE HER

THE SONG DISTURBED HER AND SHE HATES BOLLYWOOD - RECEIPE FOR TROUBLE

Originally posted by: rima4ever

well that was a mind blowing phenomenal update

Thank you so much.😳

i loved that maya loves books

Me too.. 😳😆

and this detective could take god pics and all details

i love how meera is doing the job so well

i love when rishaan said to rudra abou meera doing exactly what he wants

😆

i loved as it indirectly referred to bittuji

i loved the song bahon ke darmiyaan

To add song in that scene was Anki's idea...😳

so maya felt something deep in her heart

and she felt her head is hurting ? thats starnge

It is.. 😉

so we get 2 faces of rudra

1 he is a daredevil and does dangerous things

like jaan ki baazi lagana

2 he helps his brother always in any situation

that is interesting

😳

and i want to know if anna boyfriend is an important character ?

Not really..

and why does rishaan want to spice up mayas life ?

She has become his obsession... By spicing up he meant entering i her life... he is quite cocky you see.. 😆

i am loving this story as its progressing

Thanks Dia. 😳

maya and rishaan have so many character layers

Yes, they have..

sorry for the delay in the reply

i was a bit busy this time

It's alright... even I replied late.. 😆😳

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Very nice update

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

amazing update 👏 👏 👏

i luv the r brothers and their wicked talks 😎

buck up! i think i'm liking rudra more 😉

so anna's bf is jon! who is this now? any connection? he aint meera's bro naa?

rudra and rishaan arent twins right? 🤓 (i dont mind 😉)

so maya and the bookstore! aah i c coffee brewing at the bookstore soon 😆 😉 😛

baahon ke darmiyan was nice...as i commented earlier i was hoping for such scenes 😳

i'm dying to know about maya n rk's past...i mean parents n stuff...

update soon 😳 🤗

i have a request...pls let maya/madhu get dreams of Rk and his mesmerizing stare at her ...i mean maya getting a dream of only rishabh kundra's stare...and the song playing..baahon ke darmiyaan...n then alarm 😆

Originally posted by: amrithas

Full marks again Maria! Keep updating them fast. I'll be waiting!

Originally posted by: river123

Whoa! This is getting more and more intriguing and exciting. Can't wait for the next update.

Fabulous job Maria!

Originally posted by: ennishet

Am not much active at IF, but was in the mood to check some of the PMs and found quite a few from you, Maria! I must say, was surprised to see you writing fan fic. Anyhow, great job!!! Your prologue got me interested enough to read it all ... I have been thru the intro and all the four chapters.

I must say you are smarter than the CVs to kill off RM and start afresh with the story 😆 So another birth and another life and a story begins again between RK and Maya Aka Madhu. Do you know, the name Maya reminds me or SRK and his Maya in DTPH!

And wonder of wonders, Meera is Bittuji's daughter 😆 and he is really mad at this impostor, RK aka Rishaan! Nice to see Maya getting friendly with Anna coz I know trouble is sure to come knocking at her door anytime now.

A wonderful start, Maria and Ankita! Keep it up!!!!
Looking forward to your next update.