RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 24

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

2 questions is there any other character other then Bittuji from season 1 and he hasn't recognised his chief and thinks him as an imposter 😲 😆 and will RK and Madhu will remember their past life in future ?

i just finished reading chapters 2-4😊...oh god what a wonderful story.👏...
.so many emotions😊
i like maya-anna frndship.😊...i like rudra-rishan bonding.😊...i think meera likes rishan,but she may be the soulmate of rudra
.meera is bittuji's daughter😲,helping rk...rishan is interested in maya😊...
but hw maya is like madhubala and rishan is like rk???😕😕...even this confusion exits i luv this story😊 its wonderful😊...waiting 4 next update

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Congrats to us for 4th chappie 🥳
I absolutely loved it 😃
Maya's never give up attitude.👏
Rishaan's slowly emerging obssession with Madhubala.😲
Meera's professionalism at the cost of her health and heart.
And lastly...most importantly this unexplainable alluring yet repelling mystery enshrouding this Rudra.

I loved the brother's conversation...the sarcastic barbs...the innuendos...and from the last lines...undertones of a painful past.😳

But guess what takes the cake?😉
The Song Scene!!
It turned out awesome...the eerie ambience of a tune of old bringing to surface the forgotten memories that Maya can feel yet not voice into thoughts...
And the words of the song...used in the right place...match the mood of the scene so perfectly.


So Rishaan is upto something devious! 😲
Maya wants nothing to do with Bollywood it seems...😕
And Rudra...aaahhh...Rudra has revealed 2 faces to his character...the suicidal destructive maniac and the guy who uncannily understands his brother's needs ...quite paradoxical😲.

To find out what happens next...does RK meet his Madhubala...stay tuned for next chapter 😎

Originally posted by: tulipstar

Wah Wah Manki kya update hai...awsm 👏

Manki 😛😛

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

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Thank you so much , Anki!!

Thanks for proofreading my work and thanks for suggesting to add Bahon Ke Darmiyan in that scene, it made it even more beautiful. 😳

I love your take on all of my characters.

Yes, Rishaan is getting obsessive and Rudra is showing different shades. And I LOVE these two twisted brothers and their bond! (As I said, I don't care if I sound shallow for admiring my characters out loud! 😛)

For Maya's character, you guys have seen up till now the Maya who is trying to be calm and lead a simple life... there is a lot more to her... 😳

I see Meera has developed a soft corner in your heart... 😳😆

Thanks for your analysis... It makes me feel satisfied that I am successful in showing what I have in my mind. 😳

Love you, sistar!!! 🤗

I am just happy that the song enhanced the effect of the scene 😳
I love them too...though you know who will always have my last vote.
Maya has yet to reveal her potential 😆
Yes...because Meera is the most normal character amidst all extraordinary characters who has to work twice as hard for any recognition 😆...I have a thing for underdogs 😉

Dont worry...I will always be here...split personality remember 😆

i just caught up with chapter three and four back to back...and they were a sheer piece of brilliance😃 the story is gaining strength in a lightning speed...wondering whar rk's plan for maya is...and the relationship between rishaan and rudra somehow reminds me of dean and sam from supernatural😃great going...update soon...

i like ur ff

feeelinggg realyyy greatt to read such an ff which prologue itself is giving me goosebumps absolutely minndblowinggg👍🏼 while reading this i was so engrossed as i am visualizing them n deffineately cried when they welcomed death hand in had n u were so right rishbala is couple who can inspire n had n effect on stone so we r humans no doubt n loveee this pairrr to our hearttt ... n i also want madhubala season 2 bt dnt knw why they bring such nonsense track to such a good story n if they r ruining season 1 like this than season 2 mein to pata nahin kya karenge😆 besttt of luckk fr all ur updates as i m going to read the first chapter... n plzzz do pm me waitinggg...